Gum Aur Khushi.....Neel

by neelgold on April 03, 2010, 05:03:21 PM
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Jeena hai to yaaron haar gum ko bhula ke jiyo
Nazrae zuka ke nahi, nazrae utha ke jiyo
Hum jante hai dard bhulana bhut mushkil hota hai
Paar haar dard main bi tum Muskara ke jiyo

Chaar din ki jindgi hai, kyon gum ko uthae hum
Gum to fir gum hai kyon na Khushyion ka saath nibaye hum
Agar aaj gum aya hai to fir kaal Khushi b to ayengi ,
Kyon na tum ache kaal ke intzaar main jiyo…

Jeena hai to Yarron Haar gum ko bhula ke jiyo…
Ankon main chae ansoo ho fir b tum Muskara ke jiyo…
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2010, 07:24:54 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai neel ji...
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2010, 07:27:07 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!

Thnx!
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2010, 07:35:38 PM »
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Thanx a lot bt didnt knoe which section....
I relly appericiate if u help me ...

ANywyz relly tons of thnx 4 ur apperciation
Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 03, 2010, 07:27:07 PM
Moved to appropriate section!

Thnx!
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2010, 07:48:59 PM »
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Neel ji u posted ur creation in khumar-e-ishq but as u have written the format is best for the section shair-e-zindgi...

for any further assistance u can ask me or any other monitor through pm {personal messeage}...

Thnx n keep posting...
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2010, 08:09:18 PM »
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Mindblowing creation Neel ji,bahut khoob.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2010, 08:18:25 PM »
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Thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Madhu ji Thnx for ur housla awfzai...
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 03, 2010, 08:09:18 PM
Mindblowing creation Neel ji,bahut khoob.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2010, 08:19:32 PM »
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Thnz a lot "Geet JI"   
Its relly helpful........
Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 03, 2010, 07:48:59 PM
Neel ji u posted ur creation in khumar-e-ishq but as u have written the format is best for the section shair-e-zindgi...

for any further assistance u can ask me or any other monitor through pm {personal messeage}...

Thnx n keep posting...
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2010, 08:28:04 PM »
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ur welcome neel ji..
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2010, 10:37:09 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Neel ji... zindagi ka sahi arth samjhaya hai aapne apne shabdon me... sach me bahut hi khoob samjhaya hai apne zindagi ka matlab... kuch panktiyaan usi zindagi k naam...

sach kaha hai aapne ki zindagi hai gham nahi,
aaj agar koi gham ho to khushiyaan bhi to hain kam nahi,
chaar din ki zindagi me kuch chhut na jaaye kahin,
jeet lenge saari khushiyaan aaj kehte hain hum yahin...

Quote from: neelgold on April 03, 2010, 05:03:21 PM
Jeena hai to yaaron haar gum ko bhula ke jiyo
Nazrae zuka ke nahi, nazrae utha ke jiyo
Hum jante hai dard bhulana bhut mushkil hota hai
Paar haar dard main bi tum Muskara ke jiyo

Chaar din ki jindgi hai, kyon gum ko uthae hum
Gum to fir gum hai kyon na Khushyion ka saath nibaye hum
Agar aaj gum aya hai to fir kaal Khushi b to ayengi ,
Kyon na tum ache kaal ke intzaar main jiyo…

Jeena hai to Yarron Haar gum ko bhula ke jiyo…
Ankon main chae ansoo ho fir b tum Muskara ke jiyo…
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«Reply #10 on: April 03, 2010, 11:37:16 PM »
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Apne bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...Mager do lines likhna chahunga...shayad baat ponch jaye...

Zaroor man lete apki baat mager kehta hai Rahim,
Jo ghum ke saager main jeete hai unhe muskurana nahin ata...
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2010, 02:55:25 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai Neel ji. Shandaar kavita hai ye aapki jo na-ummeedi se ummeed ki taraf le jaati hai. Bahot khoob, Marhaba.

Reg. Poetry Sections : Jab bhi aap apni koi creation post karein to pahle uske nature/centra idea/taste/category ko dekhen phir uske according drop down menu mein suitable best section ko chhose karein. Yahan bahot se section hain jaise shayari-e-zindagi, khumar-e-ishq, miscellanious shayari, shayari-e-prastish, shayari on specific occasion etc. Kisi aur ki creation ke end mein "NOT MINE" mention karein aur usko  Share Poetry you like, share poetry of pain etc. section mein post karein. BBL ji ne aapki ye poem jo zindagi ke baare mein hai, bilkul sahi section yaani shayari-e-zindagi section mein move ki hai. For any further assistance please feel free to ask. Thanks.
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2010, 08:18:17 AM »
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 well said Neelji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2010, 09:37:11 AM »
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Waah...kya baat kahi hai neel ji......bahut khoob.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2010, 11:07:11 PM »
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Bhut hi khoob kapil ji .........
Thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quote from: klaskar on April 03, 2010, 10:37:09 PM
Bahut bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Neel ji... zindagi ka sahi arth samjhaya hai aapne apne shabdon me... sach me bahut hi khoob samjhaya hai apne zindagi ka matlab... kuch panktiyaan usi zindagi k naam...

sach kaha hai aapne ki zindagi hai gham nahi,
aaj agar koi gham ho to khushiyaan bhi to hain kam nahi,
chaar din ki zindagi me kuch chhut na jaaye kahin,
jeet lenge saari khushiyaan aaj kehte hain hum yahin...
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