Gum Aur Khushi.....Neel

by neelgold on April 03, 2010, 05:03:21 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 05, 2010, 11:12:48 PM »
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Wah Rahim Ji .......... thnx  & kya Baat hai ... App to kmal ho ...

GhumO main Doob ke B muskarana hi jindgi hai
Ghumo ko Douain main udana hi Jindgi hai
Ajj Ghumo ka Dour aya hai kya hua Dosto
Haar paal khusiyon ko paas bulana hi jindgi hai ....


Quote from: -Rahim- on April 03, 2010, 11:37:16 PM
Apne bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...Mager do lines likhna chahunga...shayad baat ponch jaye...

Zaroor man lete apki baat mager kehta hai Rahim,
Jo ghum ke saager main jeete hai unhe muskurana nahin ata...
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«Reply #16 on: April 05, 2010, 11:22:54 PM »
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THanx A lot Riyaz Ji .......... i really appericiate ur all help & support ....... relly thnx
Quote from: riyaz106 on April 04, 2010, 02:55:25 AM
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«Reply #17 on: April 05, 2010, 11:24:49 PM »
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THanx Anush & Thanx a lot Nikhar.......
Really thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Quote from: Nikhaar on April 04, 2010, 09:37:11 AM
Waah...kya baat kahi hai neel ji......bahut khoob.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: April 06, 2010, 12:51:29 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... n u are always welcome...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 05, 2010, 11:07:11 PM
Bhut hi khoob kapil ji .........
Thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: April 06, 2010, 09:29:51 PM »
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I just wanted to say THANX to all ..... MAdhu ji , Kapil Ji , Geet ji, Rahim Ji, Nikhaar Ji, Anush Ji, Riyaz Ji & maaf karna agar kissi ko thnx karna bhool gaye hoon .

Really Tons of Thanx 4 ur all help & support .... Relly appericiate.....

Thanx for ur all Gud words................
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«Reply #20 on: April 07, 2010, 12:24:25 PM »
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 Welcome Banner  Neel


Quote from: neelgold on April 06, 2010, 09:29:51 PM
I just wanted to say THANX to all ..... MAdhu ji , Kapil Ji , Geet ji, Rahim Ji, Nikhaar Ji, Anush Ji, Riyaz Ji & maaf karna agar kissi ko thnx karna bhool gaye hoon .

Really Tons of Thanx 4 ur all help & support .... Relly appericiate.....

Thanx for ur all Gud words................
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«Reply #21 on: April 09, 2010, 03:42:00 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on April 03, 2010, 05:03:21 PM
Jeena hai to yaaron haar gum ko bhula ke jiyo
Nazrae zuka ke nahi, nazrae utha ke jiyo
Hum jante hai dard bhulana bhut mushkil hota hai
Paar haar dard main bi tum Muskara ke jiyo

Chaar din ki jindgi hai, kyon gum ko uthae hum
Gum to fir gum hai kyon na Khushyion ka saath nibaye hum
Agar aaj gum aya hai to fir kaal Khushi b to ayengi ,
Kyon na tum ache kaal ke intzaar main jiyo…

Jeena hai to Yarron Haar gum ko bhula ke jiyo…
Ankon main chae ansoo ho fir b tum Muskara ke jiyo…



Bhaut achchhi peshkash hai Neel Ji
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«Reply #22 on: April 09, 2010, 10:09:09 PM »
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Thanx a lot Kapil Ji & Rajesh ji ...
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 09, 2010, 03:42:00 AM
Bhaut achchhi peshkash hai Neel Ji
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«Reply #23 on: April 11, 2010, 02:18:56 PM »
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Kapil ji aap ka welcum bi Kamal hai !!!!!!
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«Reply #24 on: April 11, 2010, 07:01:45 PM »
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Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on April 11, 2010, 02:18:56 PM
Kapil ji aap ka welcum bi Kamal hai !!!!!!
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«Reply #25 on: April 12, 2010, 09:50:57 AM »
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Ek Tarf andhera hota hai,our ik tarf savera hota hai. Tmam umar mushkit krte hai gum our khushi, dono ka ek he jagah par basera hota hai. SAHIL SHAYAR
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«Reply #26 on: April 12, 2010, 09:56:00 AM »
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Zindgi Un Fisaon ki mohtaz ho gayi jisne bahar jane pe hume panah d hai.Koi rang nahi aaj aalam me mere,najane kis baat ki hume saza d hai. Unche assman jaise Housle tut kar patjhad ke patton ke sath bikhar gaye, kismat ne naseeb ko kya adda d hai.Sochta nahi ab guzri sham ke bare "SAHIL" par har nayi subah ne sochne ki nahi wajah d hai.
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«Reply #27 on: April 12, 2010, 11:27:13 AM »
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Wah Neel Sahab Bahoth qoob , Eak dard bhara Nagma Lagti hai apki taherir bahoth ache ,, Dad hazir hai ,, Aur sub ne mashallah kaafi acha likha hai ,, Mubarak baad subko .. Allah subko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #28 on: April 12, 2010, 06:53:31 PM »
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Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Neel "Sahab".... tongue3
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«Reply #29 on: April 12, 2010, 09:44:52 PM »
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Wah!!!!!!!!!!!

Bhut hi khoob kahi !!!!!!!!
Quote from: gum or khushi on April 12, 2010, 09:50:57 AM
Ek Tarf andhera hota hai,our ik tarf savera hota hai. Tmam umar mushkit krte hai gum our khushi, dono ka ek he jagah par basera hota hai. SAHIL SHAYAR
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