Gum Aur Khushi.....Neel

by neelgold on April 03, 2010, 05:03:21 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 12, 2010, 09:46:52 PM »
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Thanx & very nyc.........
Thnx a lot giving tym to my poem...
Quote from: Fizaon ki mohtaz zindgi on April 12, 2010, 09:56:00 AM
Zindgi Un Fisaon ki mohtaz ho gayi jisne bahar jane pe hume panah d hai.Koi rang nahi aaj aalam me mere,najane kis baat ki hume saza d hai. Unche assman jaise Housle tut kar patjhad ke patton ke sath bikhar gaye, kismat ne naseeb ko kya adda d hai.Sochta nahi ab guzri sham ke bare "SAHIL" par har nayi subah ne sochne ki nahi wajah d hai.
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«Reply #31 on: April 12, 2010, 09:49:37 PM »
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Thanx a lot Qudeer.....

App ki Dad kabool hai ...
Im jst learning But aap ne jis tarh tarif ki hai thnx a lot!!!!!
Vaise main Neel Shaib nahi memshab hoon  happy3
ALwyz keep smiling .......
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 12, 2010, 11:27:13 AM
Wah Neel Sahab Bahoth qoob , Eak dard bhara Nagma Lagti hai apki taherir bahoth ache ,, Dad hazir hai ,, Aur sub ne mashallah kaafi acha likha hai ,, Mubarak baad subko .. Allah subko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #32 on: April 12, 2010, 09:52:14 PM »
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Aree kapil u hv 2 tll ppl that im nt shain rathr im memshab..
Yaha kyon saab muze  shab banane main lage hai
Appko bade mazze aah rehe hai  icon_scratch
Quote from: klaskar on April 12, 2010, 06:53:31 PM
Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Neel "Sahab".... tongue3
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«Reply #33 on: April 12, 2010, 09:58:08 PM »
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Heheheheh

Ok next time pe bata dunga ... yahan to aisa do baar ho gaya aapke saath...!!! Sorry ... mind mat karo aap. Main masti maar raha tha....!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 12, 2010, 09:52:14 PM
Aree kapil u hv 2 tll ppl that im nt shain rathr im memshab..
Yaha kyon saab muze  shab banane main lage hai
Appko bade mazze aah rehe hai  icon_scratch
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«Reply #34 on: April 12, 2010, 10:02:03 PM »
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NO i didnt mind ,,,
Bt app maze le rehe

its ok yaar
bade bade shero main aise choti choti batian to hoti rehti hai ...
Kyon j i !!!!!!!!!!!
Quote from: klaskar on April 12, 2010, 09:58:08 PM
Heheheheh

Ok next time pe bata dunga ... yahan to aisa do baar ho gaya aapke saath...!!! Sorry ... mind mat karo aap. Main masti maar raha tha....!!!
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«Reply #35 on: April 12, 2010, 11:47:57 PM »
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Bilkul sahi kahaa aapne...!!!  Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on April 12, 2010, 10:02:03 PM
NO i didnt mind ,,,
Bt app maze le rehe

its ok yaar
bade bade shero main aise choti choti batian to hoti rehti hai ...
Kyon j i !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #36 on: April 21, 2010, 07:16:13 AM »
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Nice poem Neel.... Applause Applause Applause

Khushi aur Gum...Jaise...Gold aur synthetic Diamond.... Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #37 on: April 22, 2010, 01:26:25 AM »
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Oye koyal........
Dnt say lyk tht .......
Yaar i luv Gold As well as Diamonds....

Diamonds r my weakness... dnt say tht..
Thy r real form of Carbon ....& its really hard 2 fynd..
Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 21, 2010, 07:16:13 AM
Nice poem Neel.... Applause Applause Applause

Khushi aur Gum...Jaise...Gold aur synthetic Diamond.... Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #38 on: April 22, 2010, 10:33:47 AM »
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"Thy r real form of Carbon ....& its really hard 2 fynd.."
Ya I agree with you dear...
ye har ladki ki kamjori hai... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
But as you say its really hard 2 fynd or be sure about quality...
 between Real...American...AND NOW CHINESE Synthetic
thats the irony... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

Quote from: neelgold on April 22, 2010, 01:26:25 AM
Oye koyal........
Dnt say lyk tht .......
Yaar i luv Gold As well as Diamonds....

Diamonds r my weakness... dnt say tht..
Thy r real form of Carbon ....& its really hard 2 fynd..
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«Reply #39 on: April 22, 2010, 11:32:11 PM »
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Yeh to pehchane vale pe depend karta hai
KOi asli ko Nakli Aur koi nakli ko asli samz leta hai

SO its up 2 u ... can u recognize d orginal/nt?

Lyk daimonds evn in dis world good ppl hard 2 fynd ... so nvr let thm go .........

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 22, 2010, 10:33:47 AM
"Thy r real form of Carbon ....& its really hard 2 fynd.."
Ya I agree with you dear...
ye har ladki ki kamjori hai... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
But as you say its really hard 2 fynd or be sure about quality...
 between Real...American...AND NOW CHINESE Synthetic
thats the irony... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
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«Reply #40 on: April 23, 2010, 01:05:49 PM »
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Yahi tou mai kehti hu Neel....
I can-not recognize d orginal from synthetic...either way... icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Ye tou tumko pehchan-ne wale par bhi depend karta hai...
Ek diamond 2carat ka Neel pehne tou asli...
aur main pehnu tou nakli... DOH DOH DOH
Social status plays d role.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
Lyk daimonds evn in dis world good ppl hard 2 fynd ... so nvr let thm go .........well said dear... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
I am lucky in this....Tujhe jaan liya.... hello hello hello2 hello2 hello2


Quote from: neelgold on April 22, 2010, 11:32:11 PM
Yeh to pehchane vale pe depend karta hai
KOi asli ko Nakli Aur koi nakli ko asli samz leta hai

SO its up 2 u ... can u recognize d orginal/nt?

Lyk daimonds evn in dis world good ppl hard 2 fynd ... so nvr let thm go .........
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«Reply #41 on: April 23, 2010, 11:42:15 PM »
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Im lucky too kyonki maine tuze jaan liya...........

Reaaly vry nyc .....

u said vry much ryt i usually wear diamonds so even i wear artifical ppl thinks its asli .....

dnt undrstnd y Huh?
bt anywz BE H dear
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