gunaah mere kabool hain

by bekarar on January 18, 2009, 08:05:56 AM
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Waqt ne tar-tar kiye,  aaj chehre pe naqab nahi
Tumhaare paas sawal kai, mere paas jawab nahi,

ilzaam tere sar-aankhon par, har lanat mujhe kabool
Tasleem mere gunaahon ki, Par Tu bhi paak-saaf nahi,

Dave mujhe samajhne ke sab, aakhir Jhoothe hi nikle,
Thoda pechida hun mai, Koi khuli kitaab nahi,

tanhaai me samajh sako, jab mere bare me socho
Jitna tune samjha hai mai utana bhi kharab nahi

Bahar se parakhoge to khand-har sa mujhko paoge
Mai Adhuri imarat sa hun, jis par koi mehraab nahi

Tere housale ki daad, bhala kaise na deta “bekarar”
Aaj kahi sab sachchi baaten, Aur haath me sharab nahi


वक़्त ने तार-तार किए,  आज चेहरे पे नक़ाब नही
तुम्हारे पास सवाल कई, मेरे पास जवाब नही,

इल्ज़ाम तेरे सर-आँखों पर, हर लानत मुझे कबूल
तसलीम मेरे गुनाहों की, पर तू भी पाक-सॉफ नही,

दावे मुझे समझने के सब, आख़िर झूठे ही निकले,
थोड़ा पेचीदा हूँ मे, कोई खुली किताब नही,

तन्हाई मे समझ सको, जब मेरे बारे मे सोचो
जितना तूने समझा है मे उतना भी खराब नही

बाहर से परखोगे तो खंड-हर सा मुझको पाओगे
मे अधूरी इमारत सा हूँ, जिस पर कोई मेहराब नही

हौसले की दाद भला, कैसे ना देता “बेकरार”
आज कही सब सच्ची बातें, और हाथ मे शराब नही
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2009, 08:13:09 AM »
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Kya Likha Hai mere dost eak eak sher ko karoodo dad !!dil nikal ke rakh diya tum ne mahefil me !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2009, 08:16:59 AM »
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bhai qadeer aapki daad ke liye dil ki gahraaiyon se shukriya..........
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2009, 08:32:01 AM »
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bahoot khoob bekarar ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2009, 08:56:31 AM »
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bahut hi badiya likha hai   bekararji....

mere gunaah mae karta kabool,
agar tu bhi apne gunaah karti kabool,
toh ek doosre ko samaj mein nahin hoti bool.
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2009, 09:49:10 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 18, 2009, 08:05:56 AM

Waqt ne tar-tar kiye,  aaj chehre pe naqab nahi
Tumhaare paas sawal kai, mere paas jawab nahi,

ilzaam tere sar-aankhon par, har lanat mujhe kabool
Tasleem mere gunaahon ki, Par Tu bhi paak-saaf nahi,

Dave mujhe samajhne ke sab, aakhir Jhoothe hi nikle,
Thoda pechida hun mai, Koi khuli kitaab nahi,

tanhaai me samajh sako, jab mere bare me socho
Jitna tune samjha hai mai utana bhi kharab nahi

Bahar se parakhoge to khand-har sa mujhko paoge
Mai Adhuri imarat sa hun, jis par koi mehraab nahi

Tere housale ki daad, bhala kaise na deta “bekarar”
Aaj kahi sab sachchi baaten, Aur haath me sharab nahi



Bahut hi khoob, Bekarar Ji Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2009, 05:08:28 PM »
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Just wonderful Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2009, 03:16:23 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 18, 2009, 08:32:01 AM
bahoot khoob bekarar ji
bahoot shukriya pooja ji...
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2009, 03:17:22 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 18, 2009, 08:56:31 AM
bahut hi badiya likha hai   bekararji....

mere gunaah mae karta kabool,
agar tu bhi apne gunaah karti kabool,
toh ek doosre ko samaj mein nahin hoti bool.

shukriya cara...aur bahoot khoob kaha aapne bhi
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2009, 03:18:12 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 18, 2009, 09:45:27 AM
Wah Wah Wah Kya Andaaz.e.Bayan Hai
Bekarar Bhai Bohat Hi Khoob.

Maza Aa Gaya Padkar...Keep It Up

shukriya shihab...bas housala badhate rahen kuch likhne ki koshi sh mai bhi karta rahunga
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2009, 03:19:08 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on January 18, 2009, 09:49:10 AM
Bahut hi khoob, Bekarar Ji Applause
thanks deepati
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2009, 03:19:35 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 18, 2009, 05:08:28 PM
Just wonderful Bekarar Ji
shukriya rajesh ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2009, 03:26:14 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 18, 2009, 08:05:56 AM

Waqt ne tar-tar kiye,  aaj chehre pe naqab nahi
Tumhaare paas sawal kai, mere paas jawab nahi,

ilzaam tere sar-aankhon par, har lanat mujhe kabool
Tasleem mere gunaahon ki, Par Tu bhi paak-saaf nahi,

Dave mujhe samajhne ke sab, aakhir Jhoothe hi nikle,
Thoda pechida hun mai, Koi khuli kitaab nahi,

tanhaai me samajh sako, jab mere bare me socho
Jitna tune samjha hai mai utana bhi kharab nahi

Bahar se parakhoge to khand-har sa mujhko paoge
Mai Adhuri imarat sa hun, jis par koi mehraab nahi

Tere housale ki daad, bhala kaise na deta “bekarar”
Aaj kahi sab sachchi baaten, Aur haath me sharab nahi


bahut khoob bhaiya... bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2009, 01:09:00 AM »
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Wah wah Bekarar ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,bahut khoob, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2009, 03:29:55 AM »
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Bahut Bahut bhaut khoob sanjeev Bro...

main Har Lafz Par Wah-Wah Hi Karta Gaya....Zabardast Kalam hai yeh..

Bahut Ache Sanjeev Bro.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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