gunaah mere kabool hain

by bekarar on January 18, 2009, 08:05:56 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 01, 2009, 04:59:48 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 01, 2009, 01:09:00 AM
Wah wah Bekarar ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,bahut khoob, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent. Thumbs UP

shukriya madhu purani post ko nayi daad milti hai to kasam se maza aa jata hai Winking
bahoot bahoot shukriya....is  rachna ko aapne samay diya...
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«Reply #16 on: July 01, 2009, 05:01:35 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 01, 2009, 03:29:55 AM
Bahut Bahut bhaut khoob sanjeev Bro...

main Har Lafz Par Wah-Wah Hi Karta Gaya....Zabardast Kalam hai yeh..

Bahut Ache Sanjeev Bro.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

der se hi sahi....apki wah wah se dil ko karar aa gaya bekarar ko bhi.....shukriya bhai
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«Reply #17 on: July 01, 2009, 05:32:56 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 18, 2009, 08:05:56 AM

Waqt ne tar-tar kiye,  aaj chehre pe naqab nahi
Tumhaare paas sawal kai, mere paas jawab nahi,

ilzaam tere sar-aankhon par, har lanat mujhe kabool
Tasleem mere gunaahon ki, Par Tu bhi paak-saaf nahi,

Dave mujhe samajhne ke sab, aakhir Jhoothe hi nikle,
Thoda pechida hun mai, Koi khuli kitaab nahi,

tanhaai me samajh sako, jab mere bare me socho
Jitna tune samjha hai mai utana bhi kharab nahi

Bahar se parakhoge to khand-har sa mujhko paoge
Mai Adhuri imarat sa hun, jis par koi mehraab nahi

Tere housale ki daad, bhala kaise na deta “bekarar”
Aaj kahi sab sachchi baaten, Aur haath me sharab nahi




 Applause Applause Applause Applause


janaab,ghazab ki pakad hai aapke alfaaz mein aur behtareen kashish hai aapke andaaz mein.maza aa jaata hai aapko padhkar...kayi baar padhne yogya rachna!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 01, 2009, 05:54:34 PM »
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bahoot shukriya prateek ji.....humesha ki tarah aapne housala-afzai ki..
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«Reply #19 on: July 01, 2009, 06:17:15 PM »
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Are wah bekaraar ji...
Kya ashaar pesh kiya hain aapne.. Clapping Smiley
Pad kar mazaa aagaya...

Keep up the Good Work...
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«Reply #20 on: July 01, 2009, 06:23:34 PM »
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Quote from: superspawn10 on July 01, 2009, 06:17:15 PM
Are wah bekaraar ji...
Kya ashaar pesh kiya hain aapne.. Clapping Smiley
Pad kar mazaa aagaya...

Keep up the Good Work...

shukriya janab....aap logon ka pyaar milta rahega to ye safar jari rahega..SS ji
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«Reply #21 on: January 12, 2011, 04:37:24 AM »
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@Kaash ji....aapki sarahna ke liye dil se shukriya...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: January 12, 2011, 05:31:01 AM »
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wah wah bekararji.... khubsurat hai har line bahut hi umda... khub.. kurban aapki shayri par...
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«Reply #23 on: January 12, 2011, 07:07:09 AM »
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aapki iss rachna k bare me kya kahun....kuch kehna tha jaise wo yahan likha hua mil gaya.......
bht khubsurat andaaz me aapne khudko pesh kiya h bekaraar ji.....
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«Reply #24 on: January 12, 2011, 11:05:05 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on January 12, 2011, 05:31:01 AM
wah wah bekararji.... khubsurat hai har line bahut hi umda... khub.. kurban aapki shayri par...

aapke sarahna ke liye dil se shukriya manjum ji aate rahen
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«Reply #25 on: January 12, 2011, 11:07:58 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 12, 2011, 07:07:09 AM
aapki iss rachna k bare me kya kahun....kuch kehna tha jaise wo yahan likha hua mil gaya.......
bht khubsurat andaaz me aapne khudko pesh kiya h bekaraar ji.....
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kahin par aapke jajbaaton ko chu liya shabdon ne koshish kamyab rahi..har koshish ko aapki prashansa mil hi jaati hai..dil se shukriya KDK ji
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bahut bahut khub
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