haal-e-tabahi -Panna 2:Shairi - E

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«Reply #15 on: July 21, 2008, 07:06:01 PM »

wah wah wah!! Utam, Ati Utam... ek se bad kar ek Clapping Smiley


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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #16 on: July 21, 2008, 07:25:18 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 21, 2008, 02:53:46 AM

Khwaish ji,

Aap jo yeh hum logon ki tukbandi pur taaref likh dete ho....mujhe hairaan kur deti he...aap ki thupthupahat milne se urja ka naya sanchaar hota he.

Jo aapki choti choti kaushish hoti he...humare liye badi badi shayri hoti he...aap aisi kaushishen lootaate rahe...shukriya.

Prateek

bahut bahut shukriya prateekji aapka...bahut kam log hote hai jo kisi ki tareef mein shabdo ki koi kami nahi karte...aap unme se ek ho...
aapka Kotaan kot Dhanyawaad


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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #17 on: July 21, 2008, 07:50:41 PM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 21, 2008, 05:24:56 PM

Ptatek ji aadaab!!!
Achhi cheez achhi hi hoti he, chaahe koi taarif kare yaa n kare, "bohot achhaa likha he" aysaa aap ko likhnaa kaafi nahi samajhtaa balke ye bhi likhnaa zaruri samjhaa ke ye ash'ar meri taarif ke to mohtaaj nahi magar jee chahta he waah waah karne ko.

randeri sahhab--aadab mera bhee!

arey sahaab aap to sanjeeda ho gaye...hume bto aadat he maskhari karne ki....aapka sneh milta rahe....taareef mile na mile.shukriya hazoor!

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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #18 on: July 21, 2008, 07:54:10 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 21, 2008, 07:06:01 PM

wah wah wah!! Utam, Ati Utam... ek se bad kar ek Clapping Smiley

shukriya pooja ji.chaliye neeche se shuru karte hein...ab chunki sab is naachez se budh kar he...aayenge aur aapka shukriya kahenge!

Prateek


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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #19 on: July 21, 2008, 07:56:43 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 21, 2008, 07:25:18 PM

bahut bahut shukriya prateekji aapka...bahut kam log hote hai jo kisi ki tareef mein shabdo ki koi kami nahi karte...aap unme se ek ho...
aapka Kotaan kot Dhanyawaad

khwaish jee,

aapki taaref ke shabd dil se nikaltey he ,kalam se nahi.aapke jo-jo kaayal hein jaante he bakhoobi.

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Pooja

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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #20 on: December 02, 2008, 08:44:24 PM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 19, 2008, 02:36:12 PM

hur roz mukhota padta chota
main to thuk gaya dhota-dhota
pehan inhe ye haal mera to
bud se budtar ho gaya....
mera apna chehra,na jaane
kahaan kho gaya!

in mukhoton ki koi dor nahi he
aur dor bhee ho to chhor nahi he!
ek baar pehan lo dhuns jaata he
aur poora chera fus jaata he...
kya dikhalu-haal-e-tabaahi
gehra kitna zakhm ho gaya....
mera apna chehra na jaane
kahaan kho gaya!

toofaan nigaho ka baha banke neer
muh pe mukhhota,adhron pe janzeer
dil pe chaltey ,na jaane kitne teer
suni daastan jisney meri
meri aankh ke aanso
woh bhee ro gaya....
mera apna chehra,na jaane
kahaan kho gaya!

Prateek

Bahoot Khoob Prateek ji... ajj phir se is thread per ki hui posts parri... dil khush ho gaya...


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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #21 on: December 02, 2008, 09:58:22 PM »

Bahut Khoob Prateek Ji
Mahiya aur Bekarar aap dono ka bhi jawaab nahi
Khwaish Ji aap neb hi khoob likha hai


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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #22 on: February 25, 2010, 03:57:02 PM »

Aaj Phir Yeh kavitayon Ko Padh raha Tha..

Purane Din yaad Aa Gaye,Jab Har koi Ek Dusre ki poetries par tukbandi Karta Tha..Kuch APni Soch Ko lafzon se Zaahir karta tha..

Bahut Khoobsurat Thread Hai prateekji..

Missing You All!!!!!!


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Re: haal-e-tabahi

«Reply #23 on: February 25, 2010, 05:42:38 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on June 12, 2008, 10:18:14 AM

bahoot khoob prateek ji aur mahiya ji.....

giri maszid, dhaha mandir,
charch aur gurudwara bhi na bacha,
is jaljale ne dekho,
insan ko insan bana diya

BHAUT KHOOB BEKARAR JI


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