<>*Haan main nahin de saki janm tujhe*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 05:18:13 AM
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<>*Haan main nahin de saki janm tujhe*<>

Haan main nahin de saki janm tujhe
Kyun…? ye sawaal na kar meri gudiya mujhse
Apne hi haalaton se majbur hun main
Nahin chahti k tu bhi meri tarah ye majburi sahe

Dekh beta apni maa ki haalat ab to tu samjh ja re
Aise jeene se achcha hai k tu meri kokh me hi mar ja re
Tujhe mara dekh main ro lungi ek bar teri yaad me
Par jab tu satai jayegi har roz na seh paungi me har bar re

Chhoti hogi to ladegi apne pyare bhaiyon se
Teri dadi tere dada karenge durvyahwaar tere sath re
Chhoti chhoti baaton pe ye denge tujhe hi taane sau
Man masos kar aayegi tu to tere aansu bhi na ponch paungi main

Har bar tera tiraskaar hoga har guun aur sanskaar me
Log kahenge na surat hai na rup diya tujhe bhagwan ne
Koi na dekhega khubsurat pyar bhara ye dil tera
Na pehchanega koi bhi tere inn uttam sanskar se

Padhai ho ya kaam kaaj ya kisi se bol chaal uthna baithna
Aana jana ghumna firna yahan tak ki manpasand khana
Har baat pe hogi  kai pabandiyan aur rok tok karenge tujhpe
Ek saans bhi  na le payegi tu apni marzi se iss khule aasmaan me

Bol beti aisi zindagi kaise dedun main tujhe
Jahan baap bhai guru bhi dekhen tujhe galat hi nazar se
Badi hogi tab ka dar  nahin.. mujhe to tere bachpan ka dar hai
Kaise karun tujhe ek pal bhi durr bol main apni nazar se

Jii chahta hai k taumra main tujhe apni kokh me hi rakh lun
Jii le tu apni zindagi itna tujhe aatm vishwaas main de dun
Par jo main khud na kabhi juta pai takat apne aap me
Kaise de paungi bachcha wo aatmavishawas main apni jaan me…..!!!

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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2010, 07:18:36 AM »
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mujhe apne samaj par taras aata hai...mujhe personally beti se pyar hai aur main hamesha beti ki hi tamanna karta hoon......ye sara samaj jise ek aurat ne janam diya ...usi ki zaat ko log khatam karna chahte hain...use satate hain.........pathetic, horrified...shameless, barbaric......

 very good message to society from your this poem...kasak ji..outstanding..
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2010, 07:22:14 AM »
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thnx k ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2010, 07:35:09 AM »
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Zindagi ki ek kadvi sachayi ko bahaut khubsoorati se apne dikhaya hai Anamika di..Behad khubsoorat kalam..Haan log shayad aurton ki izzat karna aur darja dena bhool gaye hai jo ek sharamsar baat hai..!Apka kalam parr, shayad aise logon ka zamir jag jaye..Ameen.!

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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2010, 07:40:16 AM »
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thnx rahim bhai....kaash log samjh saken k betiyan hi zindagi ko rangeen banati hain..
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2010, 08:29:34 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 07:22:14 AM
thnx k ji.....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 07:22:14 AM
thnx k ji.....



 chaar auraton ki zaroorat humein hamesha rahti,
  maa, bahen , biwi aur beti...!
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2010, 03:22:22 PM »
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sahi kaha k ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2010, 05:17:07 PM »
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Naari jeevan ka sajeev chitran...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Par di ye aap ki generation ya abhi bhi jahaan education nahi pahuncha hai....wahaan sach hai......
Mausam badla hai ab naari Abla nahi Sabla hai........
Ab chahta hai har parivaar ladki ho.....
Beton ne sataya hai maa-baap ko.....beetiya ne sneh baanta hai......


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 05:18:13 AM
<>*Haan main nahin de saki janm tujhe*<>

Haan main nahin de saki janm tujhe
Kyun…? ye sawaal na kar meri gudiya mujhse
Apne hi haalaton se majbur hun main
Nahin chahti k tu bhi meri tarah ye majburi sahe

Dekh beta apni maa ki haalat ab to tu samjh ja re
Aise jeene se achcha hai k tu meri kokh me hi mar ja re
Tujhe mara dekh main ro lungi ek bar teri yaad me
Par jab tu satai jayegi har roz na seh paungi me har bar re

Chhoti hogi to ladegi apne pyare bhaiyon se
Teri dadi tere dada karenge durvyahwaar tere sath re
Chhoti chhoti baaton pe ye denge tujhe hi taane sau
Man masos kar aayegi tu to tere aansu bhi na ponch paungi main

Har bar tera tiraskaar hoga har guun aur sanskaar me
Log kahenge na surat hai na rup diya tujhe bhagwan ne
Koi na dekhega khubsurat pyar bhara ye dil tera
Na pehchanega koi bhi tere inn uttam sanskar se

Padhai ho ya kaam kaaj ya kisi se bol chaal uthna baithna
Aana jana ghumna firna yahan tak ki manpasand khana
Har baat pe hogi  kai pabandiyan aur rok tok karenge tujhpe
Ek saans bhi  na le payegi tu apni marzi se iss khule aasmaan me

Bol beti aisi zindagi kaise dedun main tujhe
Jahan baap bhai guru bhi dekhen tujhe galat hi nazar se
Badi hogi tab ka dar  nahin.. mujhe to tere bachpan ka dar hai
Kaise karun tujhe ek pal bhi durr bol main apni nazar se

Jii chahta hai k taumra main tujhe apni kokh me hi rakh lun
Jii le tu apni zindagi itna tujhe aatm vishwaas main de dun
Par jo main khud na kabhi juta pai takat apne aap me
Kaise de paungi bachcha wo aatmavishawas main apni jaan me…..!!!

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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2010, 05:45:24 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. ek alag sa dard hai isme... shabd bahut khoobsurti se jode hain aapne... achcha laga padh ke...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2010, 05:46:35 PM »
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 Hats off to you!

bilkul sahi kahaa aapne Koyal ji.. sach ....!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 29, 2010, 05:17:07 PM
Naari jeevan ka sajeev chitran...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Par di ye aap ki generation ya abhi bhi jahaan education nahi pahuncha hai....wahaan sach hai......
Mausam badla hai ab naari Abla nahi Sabla hai........
Ab chahta hai har parivaar ladki ho.....
Beton ne sataya hai maa-baap ko.....beetiya ne sneh baanta hai......
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2010, 05:51:11 PM »
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haan sach hai koyal ye....jo kuch tumne kaha...lekin aaj bhi ladki ko kachre k dibbe me fenk diya jata hai..aaj ek bachhci apne ghar me hi surakshit nahin na school me... to ados pados me kaise hogi...

ladki abla nahin sabla hai..par tab jab wo padh likh kar kuch ban jaye usme wo self confidence ho...lekin ek maasum bachchiiiii....jise thik se duniya ki parakh nahin wo kya sabla banegi re...aaj unke sath jo ho raha hai ye maine uspe likha hai..kisi mature girl pe nahin......
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2010, 06:52:18 AM »
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Haan sahi hai di.....naari k prati atyachaar badhte hi jaate hain....Kuchh Aadmi bhedia ban gaye hain...suraksha kewal ek shabd ban kar reh gaya hai.....
Mera comment kewal aaj k couples ki manah-sthiti par he tha aajoo-baajoo kuchh socha he nahi tha....
Sach ye sab soch k darr lagta hai....shaayad 1 ya 2 percent sabla hongi baaki sab ablaa....kaisi Veedambana hai...

Dekhti ho kabhi..."na aana lado ess desh main.." TV.serial....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 29, 2010, 05:51:11 PM
haan sach hai koyal ye....jo kuch tumne kaha...lekin aaj bhi ladki ko kachre k dibbe me fenk diya jata hai..aaj ek bachhci apne ghar me hi surakshit nahin na school me... to ados pados me kaise hogi...

ladki abla nahin sabla hai..par tab jab wo padh likh kar kuch ban jaye usme wo self confidence ho...lekin ek maasum bachchiiiii....jise thik se duniya ki parakh nahin wo kya sabla banegi re...aaj unke sath jo ho raha hai ye maine uspe likha hai..kisi mature girl pe nahin......
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2010, 01:31:32 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Anamika Ji
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