Ham nay keya kho diya aur keya pa gaey

by sushilbansal on September 16, 2012, 02:10:34 AM
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Ham nay keya kho diya aur keya pa gaey
ham kaha say chale thai kaha aa gaey

apni palko pay sapnay sahar kay liay
chand taro ki mehfil say hum aa gaey

kitni baykhof thi mare tanhaiya
dil may fir hasrto kay salam aa gaey

dil may janay yeh kis ka tasovar utha
en nigaho may lehra kay jam aa gaey

'sheel' aab orti hui raet phakiay
ashk ankho may jitnay thai kam aa gaey
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2012, 02:35:49 AM »
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raaste galat wo apna gaye
mujse pahle use wo pa gaye

dikha ke dard apna  masoom sa
sare mehfil mei.n wo chha gaye

choda na picha kabhi mera haar ne
haar ko itna manoj hum bha gaye
Quote from: sushilbansal on September 16, 2012, 02:10:34 AM
Ham nay keya kho diya aur keya pa gaey
ham kaha say chale thai kaha aa gaey

apni palko pay sapnay sahar kay liay
chand taro ki mehfil say hum aa gaey

kitni baykhof thi mare tanhaiya
dil may fir hasrto kay salam aa gaey

dil may janay yeh kis ka tasovar utha
en nigaho may lehra kay jam aa gaey

'sheel' aab orti hui raet phakiay
ashk ankho may jitnay thai kam aa gaey
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2012, 02:46:38 AM »
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Aa geya mujh ko salika aa geya
kam ki yeh zindgani ho gai
 
aaj tak jisko chupati mai rahi
baat voh sab ki jubani ho gai

shukriya manoj ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2012, 03:03:06 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on September 16, 2012, 02:35:49 AM
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raaste galat wo apna gaye
mujse pahle use wo pa gaye

dikha ke dard apna  masoom sa
sare mehfil mei.n wo chha gaye

choda na picha kabhi mera haar ne
haar ko itna manoj hum bha gaye
Aab gamo ki mehrbani ho gai
zindgi mayri suhani ho gai
dekh kar roi zamnay ka chalan
aaj Ma bhi nokrani ho gai.
payar jo mai nay gavaya keya hua
baat choti thi kahani ho gai
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2012, 03:18:33 AM »
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Quote from: sushil Bansal on September 16, 2012, 02:46:38 AM
Aa geya mujh ko salika aa geya
kam ki yeh zindgani ho gai
 
aaj tak jisko chupati mai rahi
baat voh sab ki jubani ho gai

shukriya manoj ji
chupi baat teri jo ab hai sabki jubani
wo sirf tere akele ki nahi hai kahani
dard dil ka aankho mei laata hai paani
dil laaga kar hamne manoj baat ye jaani
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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2012, 04:11:05 AM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on September 16, 2012, 02:10:34 AM
Ham nay keya kho diya aur keya pa gaey
ham kaha say chale thai kaha aa gaey

apni palko pay sapnay sahar kay liay
chand taro ki mehfil say hum aa gaey

kitni baykhof thi mare tanhaiya
dil may fir hasrto kay salam aa gaey

dil may janay yeh kis ka tasovar utha
en nigaho may lehra kay jam aa gaey

'sheel' aab orti hui raet phakiay
ashk ankho may jitnay thai kam aa gaey

bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2012, 06:06:38 AM »
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Good one Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2012, 02:17:26 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on September 16, 2012, 02:35:49 AM
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raaste galat wo apna gaye
mujse pahle use wo pa gaye

dikha ke dard apna  masoom sa
sare mehfil mei.n wo chha gaye

choda na picha kabhi mera haar ne
haar ko itna manoj hum bha gaye
chand batey zindgi ki chand afsaney likhay
samajh may aaey jo mayri voh hi peymanay likhay
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2012, 02:25:49 PM »
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Keh sako gi jaha mai dil ki bat yoindia hi hai asi jagha.
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«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2012, 05:00:57 PM »
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chand batey zindgi ki chand afsaney likhay
samajh may aaey jo mayri voh hi peymanay likhay
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jindgi ko kabhi hamne jaana nahi
uske siwa kisi ko kuch maana nahi
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«Reply #10 on: September 17, 2012, 07:29:07 AM »
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Nice gazal sheel ji bahut khoob ...Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2012, 05:04:26 AM »
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bahut hee achhee peshkash didi badhaai ho
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Bahut Achha likha hai Baddai ho.
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2012, 08:10:57 AM »
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Waaah bahaut hi sundar qalaam hai Sushil ji
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2012, 03:05:42 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on September 16, 2012, 05:00:57 PM
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jindgi ko kabhi hamne jaana nahi
uske siwa kisi ko kuch maana nahi

Do akshar may chupa hai is zindgi ka saar
sab ko apna mAn kar karo sabhi say piyar
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