Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?

by abdbundeli on January 31, 2009, 09:01:47 AM
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Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?
 
Dhhalaa jo aaftaab, shaam huyee, chaand aayaa!
Roshanee dey key gayaa eik; doosaraa aayaa!
Tamaam raat arsh mein huyee aatishbaazee;
Tootataa eik sitaarah tabhii nazar aayaa:
       Zameen pai jhuk gaye, jo, jhuktey aasmaan sey na they!
       Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?

Naakhudaa eik, jisey naaz thaa safeeneoun par:
Saath jiskey hazaar naakhudaa they himmatwar:
Eik arsey sey bahr cheertaa rawaan thaa jo;
Eik toofaan ney pahunchaa diyaa talahtee par!
       Kahaan key waasitey chaley they, kahaan jaa pahunchey:
       Kisey patah thaa wo yahaan key, is jahaan key na they?
Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?

                                                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2009, 02:34:18 PM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji...
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2009, 02:38:43 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 31, 2009, 02:34:18 PM
Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji...
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, honeyrose ji!
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2009, 02:51:37 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2009, 09:01:47 AM
Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?
 
Dhhalaa jo aaftaab, shaam huyee, chaand aayaa!
Roshanee dey key gayaa eik; doosaraa aayaa!
Tamaam raat arsh mein huyee aatishbaazee;
Tootataa eik sitaarah tabhii nazar aayaa:
       Zameen pai jhuk gaye, jo, jhuktey aasmaan sey na they!
       Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?

Naakhudaa eik, jisey naaz thaa safeeneoun par:
Saath jiskey hazaar naakhudaa they himmatwar:
Eik arsey sey bahr cheertaa rawaan thaa jo;
Eik toofaan ney pahunchaa diyaa talahtee par!
       Kahaan key waasitey chaley they, kahaan jaa pahunchey:
       Kisey patah thaa wo yahaan key, is jahaan key na they?
Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?

                                                - abd bundeli


Wow superb ABD ji... Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 01, 2009, 04:43:30 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 31, 2009, 02:51:37 PM
Wow superb ABD ji... Applause

Thanks Roja ji!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2013, 03:26:06 AM »
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nice.
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2013, 02:16:11 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 23, 2013, 03:26:06 AM
nice.

Thanks!
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2013, 02:20:14 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2009, 09:01:47 AM
Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?
 
Dhhalaa jo aaftaab, shaam huyee, chaand aayaa!
Roshanee dey key gayaa eik; doosaraa aayaa!
Tamaam raat arsh mein huyee aatishbaazee;
Tootataa eik sitaarah tabhii nazar aayaa:
       Zameen pai jhuk gaye, jo, jhuktey aasmaan sey na they!
       Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?

Naakhudaa eik, jisey naaz thaa safeeneoun par:
Saath jiskey hazaar naakhudaa they himmatwar:
Eik arsey sey bahr cheertaa rawaan thaa jo;
Eik toofaan ney pahunchaa diyaa talahtee par!
       Kahaan key waasitey chaley they, kahaan jaa pahunchey:
       Kisey patah thaa wo yahaan key, is jahaan key na they?
Hamain patah hi naheen thaa, ki, woh yahaan sey na they?

                                                - abd bundeli


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abd bundle sb itni shayri itni kam waqt mein? kaise likh paye aap itni khoobsurat nazams/ghazals?

Onceagain Bahut khoob abd bundeli sb
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«Reply #8 on: April 25, 2013, 09:18:07 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on April 23, 2013, 02:20:14 PM
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abd bundle sb itni shayri itni kam waqt mein? kaise likh paye aap itni khoobsurat nazams/ghazals?

Onceagain Bahut khoob abd bundeli sb

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji! Aapki dua hai! Aur, ab 74 poorey honey ko hain!
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