haq...........A..B

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                       mujh se khataa hone ka intezaar karte ho...,
                       andaaz-e-dushmani  mein  pyaar  karte ho...,

                       rahti  hai nazar shaq ki hamesha mujh pe...,
                       aur  mere  saaye  pe  aitbaar  karte  ho...,

                       fitrat-e-aaina jo haqeeqat hi dikhata hai...,
                       aur  saamne  usi  ke tum singaar karte ho...,

                       parwaah nahin jise tere wajood-o-hayaat ki...,
                       khaa-makha   uspe   jaanisaar  karte   ho...,

                       hai haq khizaa.n ka bhi jahaan mein bechain...,
                       nikal kar kyon tum chaman ko  hoshiyaar karte ho..,
                      

                      
                      
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2013, 12:58:38 AM »
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wah adil saaheb wah, bahut umdaa likha hai saaheb, aaj ke din meN padhi sabse ahchi kaavishon meN se ek, rawaangi aur bayaani, dono umda... yunhi likhte rahiye saaheb aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2013, 01:35:59 AM »
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excellent
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2013, 02:42:14 AM »
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fitrat-e-aaina jo haqeeqat hi dikhata hai
aur usi ke saamne tum singaar karte ho

parwaah nahin jise tere wajood-o-hayaat ki
khaa-makha uspe jaanisaar karte ho

Bahut Khub Adil Saheb

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2013, 03:21:40 AM »
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Gorgeous.
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2013, 08:19:47 AM »
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bahut khoob , adil bechain saheb.

bahut achhi ghazal se nawaza hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2013, 11:10:48 AM »
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boliye ek rau sweekaar karte ho. wonderful
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2013, 11:30:00 AM »
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wah wah wah wah wah kyaa kehne Adil ji... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke... bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!

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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2013, 11:47:05 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2013, 02:56:35 PM »
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bahut bahut aur bahut khoob A.B. ji... Usual Smile
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bahut hi achchi peshkash adil ji. sabhi ashaar bahut bahut khoob hai. khaas yeh do bahut achche lage. hazaron dili daad is khoobsurat peshkash par.

  rahti  hai nazar shaq ki hamesha mujh pe...,
  aur  mere  saaye  pe  aitbaar  karte  ho...,

  fitrat-e-aaina jo haqeeqat hi dikhata hai...,
  aur  saamne  usi  ke tum singaar karte ho...
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