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«Reply #15 on: July 19, 2013, 10:36:40 PM »
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wah adil saaheb wah, bahut umdaa likha hai saaheb, aaj ke din meN padhi sabse ahchi kaavishon meN se ek, rawaangi aur bayaani, dono umda... yunhi likhte rahiye saaheb aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
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«Reply #16 on: July 19, 2013, 10:55:22 PM »
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  hai haq khizaa.n ka bhi jahaan mein bechain...,
  nikal kar kyon tum chaman ko  hoshiyaar karte ho..,

 Bahut khoob  Applause Applause

 Khizaa.n aaii na gar hoti,fizaa.n hoti bahaaron ki,
 mager   tinke  nasheman ko nahi hote to  kya  hota? 
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«Reply #17 on: July 22, 2013, 10:27:44 PM »
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wah adil saaheb wah, bahut umdaa likha hai saaheb, aaj ke din meN padhi sabse ahchi kaavishon meN se ek, rawaangi aur bayaani, dono umda... yunhi likhte rahiye saaheb aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

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«Reply #18 on: August 02, 2013, 12:54:44 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: August 27, 2013, 01:23:51 PM »
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Congratulations,

Your work has been featured in "Aug 2013 Yoindia Shayariadab Newsletter". We hope you will continue to grace this Bazm with your beautiful words always. Comments and feedback is appreciated.
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«Reply #20 on: August 11, 2014, 07:30:55 PM »
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                       mujh se khataa hone ka intezaar karte ho...,
                       andaaz-e-dushmani  mein  pyaar  karte ho...,

                       rahti  hai nazar shaq ki hamesha mujh pe...,
                       aur  mere  saaye  pe  aitbaar  karte  ho...,

                       fitrat-e-aaina jo haqeeqat hi dikhata hai...,
                       aur  saamne  usi  ke tum singaar karte ho...,

                       parwaah nahin jise tere wajood-o-hayaat ki...,
                       khaa-makha   uspe   jaanisaar  karte   ho...,

                       hai haq khizaa.n ka bhi jahaan mein bechain...,
                       nikal kar kyon tum chaman ko  hoshiyaar karte ho..,
                      


                      
                      

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