----- /// Har pal ab hum muskuraayenge /// ----- Klaskar

by klaskar on June 20, 2010, 10:16:29 PM
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tutne do un dhaago ko, kuch ashayein fir bandh jaayenge,
tutne do tum saahil ko, saagar me jaake wo mil jaayenge,

rishton ka ye bandhan anokha, kahin pe bhi jud jaayenge,
tutne do tum rishto ko bhi, jo apne hain fir laut aayenge,

ret ke jo bhi teele hain wo tut ke saare bikhar jaayenge,
armano ko ret na samjho wo jaise hain waise reh jaayenge,

aashaayein hi jeewan hai, wo jeewan se alag na ho payenge,
bas kuch lamho ki deri hogi, khwaab bhi poore ho jaayenge,

ummeedon se bandhi hai asha, wo saath har pal reh jaayenge,
khud ko agar tum jaan sako to mushkilen na fir reh payenge,

har mushkil ko hasi me udaake zindagi ko hum jee jaayenge,
kar lo aaj ye waada humse "har pal ab hum muskuraayenge"....


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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2010, 12:31:58 AM »
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    Nice one Kapil ji or zindagi jeene k tareeqe ko achha bayaan kiya hai aapne. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2010, 09:43:27 AM »
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Achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Nice one.
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2010, 10:34:23 AM »
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Bhahut khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2010, 11:15:26 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kapil Ji...

Bahut Hi Khobsurat Ehsaas.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2010, 12:42:01 PM »
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armano ko ret na samjho.....betreen klaskar ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2010, 08:08:04 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB

Quote from: klaskar on June 20, 2010, 10:16:29 PM


tutne do un dhaago ko, kuch ashayein fir bandh jaayenge,
tutne do tum saahil ko, saagar me jaake wo mil jaayenge,

rishton ka ye bandhan anokha, kahin pe bhi jud jaayenge,
tutne do tum rishto ko bhi, jo apne hain fir laut aayenge,

ret ke jo bhi teele hain wo tut ke saare bikhar jaayenge,
armano ko ret na samjho wo jaise hain waise reh jaayenge,

aashaayein hi jeewan hai, wo jeewan se alag na ho payenge,
bas kuch lamho ki deri hogi, khwaab bhi poore ho jaayenge,

ummeedon se bandhi hai asha, wo saath har pal reh jaayenge,
khud ko agar tum jaan sako to mushkilen na fir reh payenge,

har mushkil ko hasi me udaake zindagi ko hum jee jaayenge,
kar lo aaj ye waada humse "har pal ab hum muskuraayenge"....


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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2010, 09:40:14 PM »
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Behad khubsoorati se ehsaason ko jodha hai tumne dost.. bahaut kuch seekhati hai yeh nazm...

Ehm ehm kya baat hai dost?? hmm...kaun muskurana seekha rahi hai hunh?? lol kidding...

too good a poem..

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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2010, 12:48:38 AM »
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bahoot khoob janab ...wah
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2010, 03:10:16 PM »
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waah ji waah bahut khoob kapil ji bahut hi umda...
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2010, 01:08:49 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji...!!!

Quote from: tamanna.pt on June 21, 2010, 12:31:58 AM
    Nice one Kapil ji or zindagi jeene k tareeqe ko achha bayaan kiya hai aapne. Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2010, 01:09:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya  Riyaz ji... Thanx a lot...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on June 21, 2010, 09:43:27 AM
Achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Nice one.
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 21, 2010, 10:34:23 AM
Bhahut khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kapil Ji...

Bahut Hi Khobsurat Ehsaas.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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bahut bahut shukriya  K_A ji...!!!

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armano ko ret na samjho.....betreen klaskar ji
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