Har shaks bhookha soya hain......(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on March 27, 2009, 06:17:46 PM
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Koi taman_nao ki chader lapate soya hain
To koi do waqt ki roti ke tasav_ur me khoya hain
Yeh woh ghar hain yaro jaha aaj har shaks bhookha soya hain

Kisi ko gam hain apni bebasi ka
To kisi ko matam hain is zindagi ka
Raat ke kisi na kisi pehlu me, har aadmi roya hain

Yeh woh ghar hain yaro jaha aaj har shaks bhookha soya hain

Arey zara mehsoos karo un bach_cho ki tadap, jab bhookh se neend khul jati hain
Kya guzarti hogi us ma pe jo jhoothe vaade karke bach_cho ko sulati hain
Kismat ne aakhir inhe yeh kis dal_dal me duboya hain

Yeh woh ghar hain yaro jaha aaj har shaks bhookha soya hain

Um_meed ki koi kiran nahi, phir bhi subah ka sabko intezaaar hain
Is ghar me daulat nahi khane ko roti nahi, agar kuch hain to sirf pyaar hain
Har kisi ne bade pyaar se apne khwabo ko sanjoya hain

Yeh woh ghar hain yaro jaha aaj har shaks bhookha soya hain

Shayed takdir ke hatho ladte ladte yeh sab ek din har jayege
Yeh masoom bhookhe bach_che aawara ya gunde kehlayge
Is ghar ki betiyaan kisi nukkad par badan ka vyapaar karegi
Budhi ma ka kya hain chup chap apni maut ka intezaar karegi
Aakhir kaun hain gunhe_gaar inki is halet ka, kisne is samaj me gareebi ka beej boya hain

Yeh woh ghar hain yaro jaha aaj har shaks bhookha soya hain

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2009, 06:24:07 PM »
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Sajid,

Such nice emotions !

Full of reality !

True feelings !

Bravo ! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2009, 06:26:04 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Good work, Good creation!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2009, 06:31:50 PM »
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I must say, nowadays you are writing very good...pehle bhi achcha likhte the, par ab kuch zyada hi achcha hai ... Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2009, 11:22:57 AM »
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 Jane kaise hain log jisne girte hue ko nahi uthaya hai,
Kya sach yahi hai desh apna? jisne naye naye gunahon ka beej boya hai

Wonderful creation dear iski taarif me har sabd mujhe kam lag rahi hai, ye jannat aapki soch aur likhawat ko salute karti hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2009, 02:25:08 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on March 27, 2009, 06:24:07 PM
Sajid,

Such nice emotions !

Full of reality !

True feelings !

Bravo ! Hats off to you!

Rajbir bhaiyaa main khush bhi hu aur udas bhi khush isiliye ke aapne comment di mere thread pe aur udas isiliye ke yeh chamatkaar kabhi kabhi hi hota hain. Chaliye aapne comment di isse badi kya baat ho sakti hain, Bohat shukriyaa.....
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2009, 12:27:06 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on March 27, 2009, 06:26:04 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Good work, Good creation!!

Thank You Pooja.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2009, 12:40:20 PM »
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bohat khoob
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2009, 12:52:23 PM »
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Dard Bhari Pukaar Hai Aapki Yeh Peshkash Sajid Bhai..

Har Ek Alfaaz Gehrai Mein Lipta Hua..Bahut Bahut Khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2009, 01:26:04 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 27, 2009, 06:31:50 PM
I must say, nowadays you are writing very good...pehle bhi achcha likhte the, par ab kuch zyada hi achcha hai ... Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aji sab tumhari sangat ka asar hain.....Thanks for your innocent and honest comment Talat. Its an honour to have a reader like you reading my work.
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«Reply #10 on: March 31, 2009, 07:13:31 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 28, 2009, 11:22:57 AM
Jane kaise hain log jisne girte hue ko nahi uthaya hai,
Kya sach yahi hai desh apna? jisne naye naye gunahon ka beej boya hai

Wonderful creation dear iski taarif me har sabd mujhe kam lag rahi hai, ye jannat aapki soch aur likhawat ko salute karti hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aji tumhare salute ko hum salute karte hain, tumne padha pasand kiya aur kya chahiye hame, mehnat wasool hui.
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2009, 11:57:20 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 29, 2009, 01:26:04 PM
Aji sab tumhari sangat ka asar hain.....Thanks for your innocent and honest comment Talat. Its an honour to have a reader like you reading my work.

You are most welcome...Keep writing.
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«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2009, 12:03:53 PM »
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Mindblowing  Sajid Ji.. Aap behad umda likhte ho... kya khoob likha hai. Every line has their special effect.
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«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2009, 12:25:55 PM »
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Quote from: Dr Maqsood Hasni on March 29, 2009, 12:40:20 PM
bohat khoob

Bohat shukriyaa Dr. Saheb.....
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«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2009, 12:32:51 PM »
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Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Sajid Bhaiya,.
Hum Is Shayaari ke Aaage Waah Nahi Kehna Chate The, Kyun Ki Ye Haqeeqat Hai, Sachchaai Hai, Gurbat Ki kahaani Hai,.

Bas Ye Kalaam Aaopka Dil Choo Gaya,.
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