Har shaks bhookha soya hain......(Ghayel) -Panna 2:Shairi - E

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«Reply #15 on: April 03, 2009, 04:14:50 PM »

bohat khoob


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Har shaks bhookha soya hain......(Ghayel)

«Reply #16 on: April 04, 2009, 07:42:51 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on March 29, 2009, 12:52:23 PM

Dard Bhari Pukaar Hai Aapki Yeh Peshkash Sajid Bhai..

Har Ek Alfaaz Gehrai Mein Lipta Hua..Bahut Bahut Khoob

Nawazish karam hain mere dost.......


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Har shaks bhookha soya hain......(Ghayel)

«Reply #17 on: April 06, 2009, 10:48:09 AM »

After reading my work, Mr. Abdul Qadeer Topchi e-mailed me the following continuation of my work.

And if i keep this work only to myself it would be a great crime on my part. So i am sharing it with u all...

Kissi ko intezaar hai sahet-a-yaab hone ka !!
To koi muntazir hai maut ke maherbaan hone ka !!
Har eak ke dil me nakaam hasraton ka basera hai !!

Ye wo ghar hai yaroo jahan aaj har shaqs bhooka soya hai !!

lachar baap ke chahere pe jhuti muskaan !!
budhi maa ki ankhon me hazaron paigaam !!
jawan baheno ke mann me shaadi ke armaan !!
ashqon ne aaj subko shidath se bhigoya hai !!

ye wo ghar hai yaroo jahan aaj har shaqs bhooka soya hai !!

bete ko naukri ki talash ne nidhal kar diya !!
batiyon ko zamane ki baton ne sharmsaar kar diya !!
dekh ke masoom bachon ki bhook ko khuda bhi shayad roya hai !!

ye wo ghar hain yaroo jahan aaj jar shaqs bhooka soya hain!!

-Abdul Qadeer Toopchi-


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Har shaks bhookha soya hain......(Ghayel)

«Reply #18 on: April 06, 2009, 10:57:18 AM »

Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji


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Re: Har shaks bhookha soya hain......(Ghayel)

«Reply #19 on: April 06, 2009, 10:58:58 AM »

bahoooooooooooot khoob sajid bhai..aur topchi ji ne bhi achcha likha hai
Applause


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k.shael

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«Reply #20 on: April 06, 2009, 11:22:07 AM »

Bahut Khoob Sajid Ji,

Clapping Smiley

& Bahut hi umda likha aapne Qadeer Ji,

Shally.


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sajid_ghayel

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«Reply #21 on: April 06, 2009, 12:31:06 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 01, 2009, 12:03:53 PM

Mindblowing Sajid Ji.. Aap behad umda likhte ho... kya khoob likha hai. Every line has their special effect.

Bas yahi dua hain upar wale se special effect ho par koi side effect na ho....Thank you for ur comment Divya


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sajid_ghayel

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«Reply #22 on: April 06, 2009, 02:33:43 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 01, 2009, 12:32:51 PM

Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Sajid Bhaiya,.
Hum Is Shayaari ke Aaage Waah Nahi Kehna Chate The, Kyun Ki Ye Haqeeqat Hai, Sachchaai Hai, Gurbat Ki kahaani Hai,.

Bas Ye Kalaam Aaopka Dil Choo Gaya,.

Nawazish karam hain chote is masoom dad ke liye....mere kalam ne tumhe haqeeqat se wabista karaya yahi bohat badi baat hain mere jaise mamuli shayer ke liye.


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«Reply #23 on: April 08, 2009, 04:22:42 AM »

Sajid ji kamal ka likha hai aapne... mujhe last 6 lines bahut hi accha laga padkar. Bahut khoob. Daad hazir hai.


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«Reply #24 on: April 08, 2009, 04:24:24 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 06, 2009, 10:48:09 AM

]Sajid ji aapne bahut accha kiya Abdul ji ka kalam yahan share karke. Bahut umda likha hai bhaiya ne. God Bless.....


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«Reply #25 on: April 08, 2009, 05:04:15 AM »

very nice sharing...


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Re: Har shaks bhookha soya hain......(Ghayel)

«Reply #26 on: April 08, 2009, 07:47:26 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 06, 2009, 10:48:09 AM

Thanks For Sharing ajid Bhai,.

Great Job, Abdul Qadeer Bhai,.


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«Reply #27 on: April 25, 2009, 03:48:42 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 06, 2009, 10:57:18 AM

Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji

Nawazish karam hain Dost....


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