Har surat bus tu hi chahiye...R....

by brokenbyluv on May 12, 2010, 12:12:12 PM
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Tu agar mujhse bichad gya tou kya karungi main,
terre baad kaun merre naaz uthayega,

tujhse door jake bikhar jaungi main,
phir kaun aake merre zakham sehelayega,

na dekha kar yu gair nazaro se mujhe tu,
terri chhoti se berukhi se ye nadan dil phir toot jayega,

tu bas jaa merri chahto mein aake,
warna ye gum ka baadal tujhpe bhi ghir jayega,

thak chuki hu sawalo k jawab dhundhte dhundhte,
jane ye waqt mujhe aur kitna azmayega,

har faasle k bawjud ek yakin hai tujhpe,
ki tu hi merri zindgi ko phir se mehekayega,

ab tou khuda k aage bhi ek hi zidd hai merri,
ki terre siwa aur koi naa merre ghar ko sajayega,

har surat chahiye mujhe terra hi sath apni raaho mein..
ab aur koi bhram na merre iss dil ko behela payega...... nono nono
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 12:27:53 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai       Brokenbyluv ji......

har shart manjoor hai teri
har surat bus tu hi chahiye
bin tere kaisi ye zindagi
har pal bus tu hi chahiye...
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 12:32:27 PM »
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shukriya cara ji n nice lines..jald hi kuch bana tou reply karungi...
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 12:38:26 PM »
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some words just leave you spellbound
the words were of your shayari

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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 12:41:45 PM »
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thnx alot reaper ji..its gud to c u back on yo...
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 01:28:03 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Geet ji... bahut sundar ehsaas hain... dil se likhi gayi kavita dil ko chhoo gayi... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 01:37:25 PM »
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bahut khoob.... bahut khoob....dard saaf jhalak raha hai dost.. aapki ish kavita se... bahut kuchh yaad dila diya aapne... thanks..

dil ke viraniyo ki dastan kaun sunega ek tere siwa.,
hume yahan itna pyar kaun karega ek tere siwa..
zindagi to bas naam bhar ke liye jee raha hu mai.,
hume zindagi jeena kaun sikhyega ek tere siwa..

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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2010, 09:26:01 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2010, 09:46:45 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Brokenbyluv Ji...
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2010, 11:44:18 AM »
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Wah wah wah kya khwaish hai Geet-di... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking
Dil se maanga hai tou jaroor milega....saathi aur uska saath.... hello hello
Tu agar mujhse bichad gya tou kya karungi main,
terre baad kaun merre naaz uthayega,

tujhse door jake bikhar jaungi main,
phir kaun aake merre zakham sehelayega,

na dekha kar yu gair nazaro se mujhe tu,
terri chhoti se berukhi se ye nadan dil phir toot jayega,

tu bas jaa merri chahto mein aake,
warna ye gum ka baadal tujhpe bhi ghir jayega,

thak chuki hu sawalo k jawab dhundhte dhundhte,
jane ye waqt mujhe aur kitna azmayega,

har faasle k bawjud ek yakin hai tujhpe,
ki tu hi merri zindgi ko phir se mehekayega,

ab tou khuda k aage bhi ek hi zidd hai merri,
ki terre siwa aur koi naa merre ghar ko sajayega,

har surat chahiye mujhe terra hi sath apni raaho mein..
ab aur koi bhram na merre iss dil ko behela payega...... nono nono

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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2010, 12:03:30 PM »
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Wow Geet ji.maza aa gayi aapke poem padke.aisa laga ki ab toh jo thaan liya kar ke rahegi.mindblowing creation,Cara ji aur Touhid ji  ne bhi bahut khoob likha.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2010, 12:25:58 PM »
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Har surat mai bus mujhe tu he chahiye
Khamosh raaho mein tera saath chahiye,
Tanha hai mera hath,tera haath chahiye,
Mujhko mere muqadar per itna yakeen too hai,
Tujhko bhi mere lafz, meri baat chahiye,
Mein khud apni shairi ko kya ACHA kehti,
Mujhko teri tareef, teri daad chahiye,.
..........Usual Smile....-nm-
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«Reply #12 on: May 13, 2010, 08:39:49 PM »
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WoW !!!!!!!!!!!!

Gud work !!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2010, 09:37:20 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Geet Ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 14, 2010, 02:32:35 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut hi umda wah GEET ji wah dil ki har baat ko sabdo mai piro diya aapne aap ke ye sabd humare dil ko chu gaye, dil se daad kabool farmaye geet ji Applause Applause Applause





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