Har surat bus tu hi chahiye...R....

by brokenbyluv on May 12, 2010, 12:12:12 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 15, 2010, 04:01:05 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut shukriya shabbir ji,think ji,madhuji,mhmd ji,rajesh ji,baadal ji,neel ji,koyal sweetu,shihab ji aur kapil ji..bahut acha laga ki aap sab ko merre dil ka dard pasans aaya..aap sabki taarif dekh kar mujhe bahut acha laga...tahe dil se shukriya dosto...
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«Reply #16 on: May 15, 2010, 04:05:08 PM »
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dil ke viraniyo ki dastan kaun sunega ek tere siwa.,
hume yahan itna pyar kaun karega ek tere siwa..
zindagi to bas naam bhar ke liye jee raha hu mai.,
hume zindagi jeena kaun sikhyega ek tere siwa..



Main toot kar bikhar gyi jiske ishq mein,
uska khyala bhi mujhe chahne wala nhi,
bikhari padi hu aaj bhi chaht ki dehleez per..
lekin zamanebhar mein koi mujhe thaamne wala nhi......
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«Reply #17 on: May 15, 2010, 04:08:33 PM »
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Har surat mai bus mujhe tu he chahiye
Khamosh raaho mein tera saath chahiye,
Tanha hai mera hath,tera haath chahiye,
Mujhko mere muqadar per itna yakeen too hai,
Tujhko bhi mere lafz, meri baat chahiye,
Mein khud apni shairi ko kya ACHA kehti,
Mujhko teri tareef, teri daad chahiye,.
..........Usual Smile....-nm-

nice sharing...

BaDa kathin hai rasta jo aa sako to sath do
ya zindagi ka faasla mita sako to sath do

bade fareb khaoge bade sitam uthaoge
ya umer bhr ka sath hai nibha sako to sath do

jo tum kaho to ya dil to kia main jaan bhi fida karoon
jo main kahoon bus ik nazar luta sako to sath do

hazaar imtihan  hazaar aazmaishe
hazar dukh hazar ghum utha sako to sath do

ya zindagi yahan khushi gamo k sath hai
rula sako to sath do hansa sako to sath do......NOT MINE...
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«Reply #18 on: May 15, 2010, 04:38:08 PM »
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bohut khubsurat
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«Reply #19 on: May 15, 2010, 04:55:51 PM »
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shukriya khalid ji...
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«Reply #20 on: May 15, 2010, 08:57:26 PM »
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maaf kijiyega Geet ji... aap galat samajh rahi hain... humein aapke dil ka dard pasand nahi aaya... humein aapki likhi hui kavita pasand aayi hai... dard bahut gandi cheez hoti hai... main kabhi bhi nahi chahunga ki aapko kisi bhi tarha ka dard ho... to kaise mujhe aapka dard pasand aa sakta hai... khush rahiye hamesha... haste rahiye... muskuraate rahiye... Usual Smile

Bahut bahut bahut shukriya shabbir ji,think ji,madhuji,mhmd ji,rajesh ji,baadal ji,neel ji,koyal sweetu,shihab ji aur kapil ji..bahut acha laga ki aap sab ko merre dil ka dard pasans aaya..aap sabki taarif dekh kar mujhe bahut acha laga...tahe dil se shukriya dosto...
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«Reply #21 on: May 16, 2010, 04:51:47 PM »
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Thanks a lot Geet-di.......
You also shared a nice one....

nice sharing...

BaDa kathin hai rasta jo aa sako to sath do
ya zindagi ka faasla mita sako to sath do

bade fareb khaoge bade sitam uthaoge
ya umer bhr ka sath hai nibha sako to sath do

jo tum kaho to ya dil to kia main jaan bhi fida karoon
jo main kahoon bus ik nazar luta sako to sath do

hazaar imtihan  hazaar aazmaishe
hazar dukh hazar ghum utha sako to sath do

ya zindagi yahan khushi gamo k sath hai
rula sako to sath do hansa sako to sath do......NOT MINE...
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«Reply #22 on: May 20, 2010, 11:58:43 AM »
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thik hai kapil ji apko merri likhi merri kavita pasand aayi itna hi kaafi hai merre liye..shukriya ji...n koyal sweetu thnx to u to...
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«Reply #23 on: May 20, 2010, 12:21:53 PM »
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Usual Smile keep smiling always

thik hai kapil ji apko merri likhi merri kavita pasand aayi itna hi kaafi hai merre liye..shukriya ji...n koyal sweetu thnx to u to...
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«Reply #24 on: May 20, 2010, 01:34:53 PM »
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Oh..!! Geet-di thanks a lot.....


thik hai kapil ji apko merri likhi merri kavita pasand aayi itna hi kaafi hai merre liye..shukriya ji...n koyal sweetu thnx to u to...
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