Himmatwaari.........Sps:Shairi - E

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Ye poem maine udtapunjab movie me Alia Bhatt k kirdaar ko dekh k likhi thi, mujhe to us movie me wahi 'Punjab' ko roopantarit kar rahi ho aosa lag raha tha....bhasha kuch mixed hai alag hai par maine wahi yaha likh dia jo man me aaya, hope you all like it and yes, constructive criticism and feedback are always welcome.

Jindagi maar maar k khadi kare
jo toot gayi thi saari si
ban gayi kadi* kuch ho na ho
ab nahi rahi dukhiyaari si

Kitna bhi tode, mai naa tooti
halla gulla sarfodi si
kitne bhi jeet le yudh monde*
jee na payenge jindagi ik mondee* si

sau* kaat kaat k kar tukde
kaise kaatega himmat sankree* si
chit pad javega bhootal* pe
ik vaar karun jo hansree* si

na tooti, naa koi sapna toota
na rahun kabhi bichaari si
tu bhi bhauchakka ho sochega
hai kaun ye himmatwaari si

kadi*=Hard
monde*= male - मोंडे
mondee*= female - मोंडी
sau*= 100
sankree*= thin
bhootal*= ground
hansree*= tool to cut grass, sickle


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Shikha sanghvi

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Re: Himmatwaari.........Sps

«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2016, 01:42:57 PM »

Very very niceeeee
I didn't see this movie


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Re: Himmatwaari.........Sps

«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2016, 08:20:56 PM »

Quote from: Sps on June 30, 2016, 01:02:54 PM

Ye poem maine udtapunjab movie me Alia Bhatt k kirdaar ko dekh k likhi thi, mujhe to us movie me wahi 'Punjab' ko roopantarit kar rahi ho aosa lag raha tha....bhasha kuch mixed hai alag hai par maine wahi yaha likh dia jo man me aaya, hope you all like it and yes, constructive criticism and feedback are always welcome.

Jindagi maar maar k khadi kare
jo toot gayi thi saari si
ban gayi kadi* kuch ho na ho
ab nahi rahi dukhiyaari si

Kitna bhi tode, mai naa tooti
halla gulla sarfodi si
kitne bhi jeet le yudh monde*
jee na payenge jindagi ik mondee* si

sau* kaat kaat k kar tukde
kaise kaatega himmat sankree* si
chit pad javega bhootal* pe
ik vaar karun jo hansree* si

na tooti, naa koi sapna toota
na rahun kabhi bichaari si
tu bhi bhauchakka ho sochega
hai kaun ye himmatwaari si

kadi*=Hard
monde*= male - मोंडे mundaa = larhkaa; munde = larhke;
mondee*= female - मोंडी mundee (mundi) = larhki
sau*= 100
sankree*= thin
bhootal*= ground
hansree*= tool to cut grass, sickle Hansrhi = sickle; daatri; daraanti in hindi

bahut khoob waah waah waah. Applause


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saahill

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Re: Himmatwaari.........Sps

«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2016, 02:02:02 AM »

Waaah waaah bohut khub


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Re: Himmatwaari.........Sps

«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2016, 09:45:16 AM »

Achcha 'veer ras' hai

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Keep it up,
One suggestion: when I see some tough words , I google it for similar words , that helps. I hope you a re already doing it.


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Re: Himmatwaari.........Sps

«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2016, 05:33:05 PM »

Thank you Shikha ji, Thank you Surinderji sir... Male female k Ye terms Haryana Ya rajasthan me use home hain n jo apne bataya vo Punjabi me..mai monde aur minded (jaisa Hindi me likha hai) mai wahi likhna Chan rahi thi


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Re: Himmatwaari.........Sps

«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2016, 06:07:21 PM »

Thank you Sahil ji..Thank you khanabadosh ji.. Mai Bilkul google use karti hu.. Is kavita ko poori Tarah Hindi.. Ya English me mai likh hi nai paa rahi thi.. maine Bahot koshish ki... Par isi Tarah sabse Sahi Lagi.. Bhasha mixed hai isiliye pehle likha maine


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