hisaab..........A.B:Shairi - E

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   binaa kaante ka gulaab dekh loge tum,
   mojassama be-hisaab dekh lo ge tum,

   taraste the meraa bhi ek haram hota,
   galio.n mein abb shabaab dekh lo ge tum,

   besharmi ki intehaa abhi hui kahaan,
   'sharam' ko be-hijaab dekh lo ge tum,

   aye maiqade ko gaaliyaan dene walo.n,
   paani mein sharaab dekh lo ge tum,

   inn zalzalo.n mein hai ye haal tera,
   hain aur bhi azaab dekh lo ge tum,

   kab tak uljhe raho ge maal mein bechain...!
   jald hi apna hisaab dekh lo ge tum.


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Re: hisaab..........A.B

«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2011, 11:02:52 AM »

bahut umda adil bhai
Aate hi dhamaal..
Sabhi ashaar khoob hai...DAAD DAAD DAAD


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Re: hisaab..........A.B

«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2011, 11:22:58 AM »

maashaa allaah kya khob kahaa hai adil ji mubaarak ho


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Re: hisaab..........A.B

«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2011, 11:54:27 AM »

Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab achche khayaaloN ko anjaam diya hai
aapne.. sabhi khayaal behad khoob aur umda rahe..

Achche ashaar rahe janab..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaa rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..

ChaNd ashaar aapki nazar....

Hona hi thaa kharaab to ishq kyuN karte ho
Peena hi tha sharaab to ishq kyuN karte ho

KaNta chubh gayaa to tilmilaa ke kah diye
Achcha na tha gulaab to ishq kyuN karte ho

Pahli hi mohobbat meiN bekaraar ho gaye
Aaya nahi jawaab to kyuN ishq karte ho

Apni chahtoN ko "ParwaaZ" ginwaate nahi
Karna hi tha hisaab to kyuN ishq karte ho


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: hisaab..........A.B

«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2011, 02:37:22 PM »

Bahut khoob AB saheb:'inn zalzalon ....'ka jawab nahin.mubarak ho.
Parwaz saheb aap bhi khoobsuraat ashaar chhupa chupa ke nikaalte hain.bahut khoob hain.aap ko bhi mubarakbaad.


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sunildehgawani

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Re: hisaab..........A.B

«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2011, 02:51:13 PM »

bahut khub ji bahut khub


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Re: hisaab..........A.B

«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2011, 06:20:52 AM »

Quote from: mkv on December 14, 2011, 11:02:52 AM

bahut umda adil bhai
Aate hi dhamaal..
Sabhi ashaar khoob hai...DAAD DAAD DAAD

thank you mkv


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Re: hisaab..........A.B

«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2011, 07:30:08 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on December 14, 2011, 10:57:08 AM

binaa kaante ka gulaab dekh loge tum,
mojassama be-hisaab dekh lo ge tum,

taraste the meraa bhi ek haram hota,
galio.n mein abb shabaab dekh lo ge tum,

besharmi ki intehaa abhi hui kahaan,
'sharam' ko be-hijaab dekh lo ge tum,

aye maiqade ko gaaliyaan dene walo.n,
paani mein sharaab dekh lo ge tum,

inn zalzalo.n mein hai ye haal tera,
hain aur bhi azaab dekh lo ge tum,

kab tak uljhe raho ge maal mein bechain...!
jald hi apna hisaab dekh lo ge tum.

wah wah Adil ji--

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daad dene ko shabd hi nhi mil rahe hume--

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