Hu tou ek insan hi naa...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 02, 2011, 05:41:23 PM
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Rishto ki bandhish se bahar rehna pasand karti hu,
adhuri jo reh jaungi akhir hu tou ek dastan hi naa,

aaj aap sab k labo pe merre nagme gunjate hai,
kal mit jaungi akhir hu tou ek pehchan hi naa,

merri zameen nhi abhi na asmaan ka kuch pata hai,
dar dar bhatkti hu akhir hu tou ek karwaan hi naa,

rasto pe chalte chalte kayi dafa bhatak jati hu,
manzil se abhi hu tou main anjan hi naa,

merre paro ko dhoop ki garmi jala deti hai abhi,
girti sambhalti nazuk si hu tou ek udaan hi naa,

tanhai se choor hokar kabhi kabhar toot jati hu dosto,
kab tak dard jhel paungi akhir hu tou ek insan hi naa.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 08:04:07 PM »
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Nice Geet JI
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 08:10:17 PM »
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai...
Kuch ashaar to waqai mindblowing rahe jee daad daad daad Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 02:48:54 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Ji.
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2011, 05:16:29 AM »
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hey geet..... kya baat hai yar dil chhu rahi ho.......

badiya.....
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2011, 10:48:08 AM »
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Geet:: aapne likha to achha hai ehsaas bhi gahre hain.--
lekin INSAAN---uparwaale ki sabse umda creation INSAAN ko aapne ek adna sa bebas sa deen heen sa prani hone ka bhi ehsaas dilaya.
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aakhir hu tou ek insaan hi naa
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nir ki dictionry me aur aaj ke daur me itne dayniya CHIJ nhi hai INSAAN
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wese don mnd ye mera Faltu khyaal hai bas.
aapka post bahut khoob hai ji.
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god bless u
be happy
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 02:12:55 PM »
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awesome dear , last line was touching Crying keep it  up Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2011, 08:16:56 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 02, 2011, 05:41:23 PM




Rishto ki bandhish se bahar rehna pasand karti hu,
adhuri jo reh jaungi akhir hu tou ek dastan hi naa,

aaj aap sab k labo pe merre nagme gunjate hai,
kal mit jaungi akhir hu tou ek pehchan hi naa,

merri zameen nhi abhi na asmaan ka kuch pata hai,
dar dar bhatkti hu akhir hu tou ek karwaan hi naa,

rasto pe chalte chalte kayi dafa bhatak jati hu,
manzil se abhi hu tou main anjan hi naa,

merre paro ko dhoop ki garmi jala deti hai abhi,
girti sambhalti nazuk si hu tou ek udaan hi naa,

tanhai se choor hokar kabhi kabhar toot jati hu dosto,
kab tak dard jhel paungi akhir hu tou ek insan hi naa.........












LAAAAAAAAAAAJAWAAAAAAAAAAAB BBL
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2011, 07:58:24 AM »
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Mashallah bht khoob geet ji,kitni khubsurti se aap dard ka ehsaas karati hain k direct wo baat wo dard wo ehsaas dil ko chhuta hai.. Very lovely wo kya kehte hain daad kubul kare i think mujhe thik se yaad nai Giggle
Diya
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2011, 08:56:06 AM »
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bht khoob geet ji....
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2011, 12:58:00 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut shukriya rishi ji,priya ji,shihab ji,manju mann ji,khamosh ji,nirala ji,yaash ji,diya ji aur parwaaz ji...aap sabhi dosto ka main tahe dil se shukriya ada karti hu hamesha isi tarah merri saadi si rachna ko apne khubsurat comments se khaas banate rahiye...

Diya ji apne sahi kaha hai ji..shukriya apka...
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2011, 12:58:52 PM »
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Quote from: ruku on March 03, 2011, 02:12:55 PM
awesome dear , last line was touching Crying keep it  up Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thnx alot dear...take care..
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2011, 12:26:12 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 02, 2011, 05:41:23 PM




Rishto ki bandhish se bahar rehna pasand karti hu,
adhuri jo reh jaungi akhir hu tou ek dastan hi naa,

aaj aap sab k labo pe merre nagme gunjate hai,
kal mit jaungi akhir hu tou ek pehchan hi naa,

merri zameen nhi abhi na asmaan ka kuch pata hai,
dar dar bhatkti hu akhir hu tou ek karwaan hi naa,

rasto pe chalte chalte kayi dafa bhatak jati hu,
manzil se abhi hu tou main anjan hi naa,

merre paro ko dhoop ki garmi jala deti hai abhi,
girti sambhalti nazuk si hu tou ek udaan hi naa,

tanhai se choor hokar kabhi kabhar toot jati hu dosto,
kab tak dard jhel paungi akhir hu tou ek insan hi naa.........













 TANHAAI KAB TAK SAMETE RAHUON TERI MEHFIL KE,
 JANA TO HAI EK ROZ MEHMAAN HOON NAA,

  AAJ AAPNE ISS NAZAM KE ZARIYE APNE JAZBAAT KA ISS TARAH IZHAAR KIYA ISS BUSS KYA LIKHON....MINDBLOWING
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2011, 10:00:47 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 20, 2011, 12:26:12 PM

 TANHAAI KAB TAK SAMETE RAHUON TERI MEHFIL KE,
 JANA TO HAI EK ROZ MEHMAAN HOON NAA,

  AAJ AAPNE ISS NAZAM KE ZARIYE APNE JAZBAAT KA ISS TARAH IZHAAR KIYA ISS BUSS KYA LIKHON....MINDBLOWING

Bahut shukriya sheba ji aur behad khubsurat alfaz likhe apne bhi..bahut khoob..
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«Reply #14 on: April 24, 2011, 07:49:41 AM »
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