HUM ME HI BASTE SHRI KRISHAN SHRI RAM HAI......SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on November 20, 2012, 05:03:57 PM
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Jab  hum mein hi baste shree krishan shri raam hai
to phir kyun hmara dil ab tak inse bana hua anjan hai

kyun doudte hain eint pathar ke mahal bnane ko
jabki jante hain hum sb manjil hmari akhri dham hai

kyun talaste phirte hain dunia me apno parayon ko
har rishta naata jab kuch hee palon ka mehmaan hai

jab insaan ko jarurat hai kewal do roti ki jeene ke liye
kyun doulat sohrat ke liye samet rhe pura jahan hai

umar bita di hum sabne jiwan ka sacha gyan pane mein
paya to yahi jiwan sara nirthak mrityu hi sacha vardan hai

yeh dunia ek mohjal hai jo is mohjaal se bach nikla
usne apne ander hi paye shree krishan shree ram hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2012, 05:07:56 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Karan jee
laajavaab likha hai..
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2012, 05:37:36 PM »
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Jab  hum mein hi baste shree krishan shri raam hai
to phir kyun hmara dil ab tak inse bana hua anjan hai

kyun doudte hain eint pathar ke mahal bnane ko
jabki jante hain hum sb manjil hmari akhri dham hai

kyun talaste phirte hain dunia me apno parayon ko
har rishta naata jab kuch hee palon ka mehmaan hai

jab insaan ko jarurat hai kewal do roti ki jeene ke liye
kyun doulat sohrat ke liye samet rhe pura jahan hai

umar bita di hum sabne jiwan ka sacha gyan pane mein
paya to yahi jiwan sara nirthak mrityu hi sacha vardan hai

yeh dunia ek mohjal hai jo is mohjaal se bach nikla
usne apne ander hi paye shree krishan shree ram hai

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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2012, 12:32:58 AM »
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bohut Khoob saudagar bhai umda peshkash , jeevan ka asli matlab bataya apne, mubarakbaad qubool karen...
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«Reply #5 on: November 21, 2012, 01:11:36 AM »
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bahut sunder waah waah dheron daad beta
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«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2012, 01:32:56 AM »
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bahut khoob, soudagar ji.Bahut sahi baat kahi hai . Akhiri sher mein    sub ka nichor likh diya hai. Bahut badhai.
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«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2012, 03:29:29 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya soudagarji
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Nicely written
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«Reply #9 on: November 21, 2012, 09:15:35 AM »
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bahut khoob. Applause Applause
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bahut bahut shukriya mukesh bhai
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