! HUM SA HI DIWANA CHAHIYE !

by Matrix Guy on January 07, 2011, 03:29:40 PM
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Hum Jese Rindo Ko Nahi Aajmana Chahiye
Hume To Kabrr Me Bhi Mahkhana Chahiye

Luta Di Tamam Daulat Angoor Ke Beti Pe
Sochte He Hume Bhi Is Per Mit Jana Chahiye

Subah Ho Mahkhane Me Sham Ho Mahkhane Me
Mahkhane Ko Bhi To Hum Sa Hi Diwana Chahaiye

2 Ghuut Me Halka Ho Jata He Har Dard Zindagi Ka
Is Dawa Ko Ek Botal Aur Virana Chahiye

Nahi Chahiye Koi Mahfil Na Apna Na Paraya
Hume Duniya Ke Naam Per Saqi Aur Paimana Chaiye

He Sharab  Kya Chij Ye Tum Bhi Jaan Loge
Ek Baar Tumhe Bhi Mere Sath Anaa Chahiye
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2011, 03:49:37 PM »
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wah wah bahut khubb--
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subah ho mekhane me----
bas mere layak yahi line thk hai--
chalo hum isme Cigrette aur dhue ki kami ko jald hi poora karenge Nirala ka waada hai.
ab ye thread humbahut badhayenge Jaani.""
behad mast likha bhai--aap ne to aaj ke din ka best chij likha in ma point of view..
wafa bewafa aur mohabat ke dard se hat kar likhnewale ko mai Grand salute deta hu--
daad bahut saara
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2011, 03:53:33 PM »
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nirala ji bahot jor se hasi aayi he muje......

sach kahu ye dard dard ki poetry se darne laga hu ab......aajkal sab dard hi post kar rahe he......to socha kuch naya karu sabka man bahal jaye bas wo hi koshish ki he.........aur ha dear cigarate ka dhua mil jaye to kahna hi kya maja hi aa jaye.....

thx dear for encouragement
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2011, 04:21:02 PM »
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haan sahi hai--
sab rulaane par tule hue hain
dardila post de de kar.
mai bhi kuch likhne ki kosis karta hu alag sa pr aadhe me ye dard ghus jaata hai--hehehe
bas aise hi hat hatake likho aap .
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2011, 05:57:58 PM »
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ahha dil wali baat kr di ye to....cheerz
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«Reply #5 on: January 07, 2011, 06:44:46 PM »
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MG jee Aadaab!

Waaah Jee Waaah Kia baat hai... Bahut umdaa
Janab kamaal kar diyaa aapne kamaal ...
Mehfil ko lut liyaa yaara ... Kia kahne...

Superb...... No words...

Is maikashi ke naa jaa kitne hi deeaane hai..
Jinhe aapki yeH kalaam behad umdaa lageNgi..

Dil se daad hazir hai... Usual Smile         


Quote from: Matrix Guy on January 07, 2011, 03:29:40 PM




Hum Jese Rindo Ko Nahi Aajmana Chahiye
Hume To Kabrr Me Bhi Mahkhana Chahiye

Kia kahne janab... Bahut khoob Daad daad daad.. Usual Smile         


Luta Di Tamam Daulat Angoor Ke Beti Pe
Sochte He Hume Bhi Is Per Mit Jana Chahiye

Achcha sher hai janab Daad... Usual Smile         


Subah Ho Mahkhane Me Sham Ho Mahkhane Me
Mahkhane Ko Bhi To Hum Sa Hi Diwana Chahaiye

Oye hoye kia baat hai... Is kahte hai shayari... Daad daad daad very nice thought... amazing one.. Usual Smile         


2 Ghuut Me Halka Ho Jata He Har Dard Zindagi Ka
Is Dawa Ko Ek Botal Aur Virana Chahiye

Nahi Chahiye Koi Mahfil Na Apna Na Paraya
Hume Duniya Ke Naam Per Saqi Aur Paimana Chaiye

Kia kahne janab.... Akher tak nahi bakhshe daad Usual Smile         


He Sharab  Kya Chij Ye Tum Bhi Jaan Loge
Ek Baar Tumhe Bhi Mere Sath Anaa Chahiye

Oye hoye kia dawat dii hai waah jee waah..
Behad khoob... Usual Smile         



MG jee is khubsurat kalaam per dheroN daad o mubarakbad kabool kijiye....

Behad khoob kalaam se nawaaza hai janab.. Daad daad daad Usual Smile         


Tanhaai i saathi cigret, Gham ki dawa sharab hai
Apni to aye jane jaana bus yehi aadat kharab hai         

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«Reply #6 on: January 07, 2011, 06:55:00 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB


Quote from: Matrix Guy on January 07, 2011, 03:29:40 PM




Hum Jese Rindo Ko Nahi Aajmana Chahiye
Hume To Kabrr Me Bhi Mahkhana Chahiye

Luta Di Tamam Daulat Angoor Ke Beti Pe
Sochte He Hume Bhi Is Per Mit Jana Chahiye

Subah Ho Mahkhane Me Sham Ho Mahkhane Me
Mahkhane Ko Bhi To Hum Sa Hi Diwana Chahaiye

2 Ghuut Me Halka Ho Jata He Har Dard Zindagi Ka
Is Dawa Ko Ek Botal Aur Virana Chahiye

Nahi Chahiye Koi Mahfil Na Apna Na Paraya
Hume Duniya Ke Naam Per Saqi Aur Paimana Chaiye

He Sharab  Kya Chij Ye Tum Bhi Jaan Loge
Ek Baar Tumhe Bhi Mere Sath Anaa Chahiye
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2011, 05:02:36 AM »
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rajaji...ek baar fir aapne bina kahe hamari baat puri kardi..kal hi kehne wale the mauka nahin mila aur aapki ye post aagai...
mast hai ji mast mast..sare piyakkadon ki to nikla padi ji aapki ye poem dekh k...aur nirala ji ne to isme amarjyot bhi sulgaane ki farmaish kardi...to kyun na aapki fav chiz pe bhi ek post ho jaye..

meri nigaahon k jaam chhalakte rahe yunhi mehfil me
tum fir bhi maykhaane aur madira ki baat karte rahe

kaise deewane ho ji aap bhi iss madirase bhare pyaale k
husn tha saamne aur aap labon pe jhuta jaam sajaye rahe

aashiqui ki misaal hua karte the kabhi aap oo mere sanam
aaj bewdon ki mehfil k sartaaj ban maikhaane sajaye rahe

kar diya mahobbat ko badnaam yun bankar gulaam paimanon ka
kis liye hume tadpakar aap hamari mahobbat ko aazmaate rahe....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2011, 05:39:24 AM »
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wahhhh K mam kya kamaal ka reply maara hai aapne.
superbbbbbbbbbbb:)
aapko bhi daad hi daad
ab mere iss 'Niralepanti ki intiha ho gai so kuch Arz hai:-
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aur na aazmao ab apne deewane ko
    maikhane me ab meh(sharaab) nahi paimaane ko
dhuen me ab sham e tanhai hai
    zigra bhi khak khak ab kaleza bachane ki duhai hai
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bahut khub K mam umda jawab aapka "
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thanx
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«Reply #9 on: January 08, 2011, 05:51:13 AM »
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mastam reply nirala ji...........thnx aapko mera reply pasand aaya...

thaam lena hath mera hathon me apne
k amar jyot ki isme fir na jagah hogi

lubon se chhu lena labon ko mere sanam
talab uthe jab hothon ko cigret k agan ki

chhuut jayegi ye buri lat yunhi dheere dheere
pyaar me mere gar thodi si bhi kashish hogi....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2011, 06:01:36 AM »
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wah wah Mast jhakashh jawab
K mam bolti band meri to--
ab ghuti ghuti si awaz me kuch arz hai:-
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tere lubon ki agan se hi zaalim
      ye buri latt pai hai
ja baitha duur tu kahin pahlu se mere
      sulgaate hain lubon ko jalte dhuen se
jab bhi teri haseen labon ki yaad aai hai
""
thanx
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Quote from: guddurampuri on January 07, 2011, 05:57:58 PM
ahha dil wali baat kr di ye to....cheerz

guddu ji bahot shukriya apne waqt diya aur pasand kiya is post ko...
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«Reply #12 on: January 08, 2011, 06:24:38 AM »
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parwaaj sahab........

apko thx dena bhi shobha nahi deta......jis post pe apka kuch bhi relpy aa jaye to me samjta hu us post ko top rank mil jati he apne aap hi......aap jis kadar ek ek line ko discribe karte he wo uniq way he jo sif apke paas he.........apne ise read kiya pasand kiya aur tariif ki ye mere liye to kisi lottery lagne se kam nahi he.........yaha bahot se shayar he ......sabse badi baat koi bhi bekar nahi he ...sab ek se badkar ek.....but in my view u r the headmaster of the "yoindia shayari school"....aur muje headmaster ne "A" garde di he to sochiye meri khushi ka kya alam he......is baat par bhi ek ek jaam ho jaye kyuki.....

hum to bas mousam suhane dhundte he
gum ho ya moka ho khushi ka
hum to bas pine pilane ke bahane dhundte he"

thx parwaj sahab from my deep  heart.....
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 08, 2011, 05:02:36 AM
rajaji...ek baar fir aapne bina kahe hamari baat puri kardi..kal hi kehne wale the mauka nahin mila aur aapki ye post aagai...
mast hai ji mast mast..sare piyakkadon ki to nikla padi ji aapki ye poem dekh k...aur nirala ji ne to isme amarjyot bhi sulgaane ki farmaish kardi...to kyun na aapki fav chiz pe bhi ek post ho jaye..

meri nigaahon k jaam chhalakte rahe yunhi mehfil me
tum fir bhi maykhaane aur madira ki baat karte rahe

kaise deewane ho ji aap bhi iss madirase bhare pyaale k
husn tha saamne aur aap labon pe jhuta jaam sajaye rahe

aashiqui ki misaal hua karte the kabhi aap oo mere sanam
aaj bewdon ki mehfil k sartaaj ban maikhaane sajaye rahe

kar diya mahobbat ko badnaam yun bankar gulaam paimanon ka
kis liye hume tadpakar aap hamari mahobbat ko aazmaate rahe....!!!

hay re maar dala ji..........

pahle hi itna nasha us per apka nashila jawab........

ab kya kahu me ......rahi baat apki wish ki jesa apne kaha ki aap kahna chahti thi is tarah ki poetry ke liye but bhul rahi thi ......so anamika bas ye kah sakta hu ki jo apki khamoshi na samje wo apke shabdo ko kabhi nahi samaj payega......aur wo MG nahi........aap kahe na kahe i can feel it......apne jo ajwab diya he uske jawab me apko pata he me kabhi nahi likh pata hu iske liye maffi chahunga......ur reply is superb as usal......aur ha ....

hamka pini he pini he
hamka pini he....amarjyot bhi aap to janti he meri favourate he ....

fh fh fh fh
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«Reply #14 on: January 08, 2011, 06:36:33 AM »
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hahahhahahahaha.......... yes yaad hai mujhe FH FH FH FH FH

wel apne pasand kiya aur kya chhaiye..mera inaam dedijiyega ............
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