Humare arbaab-e-wafa kaun hain

by Ravi_Dave on October 07, 2007, 03:26:31 PM
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Humare arbaab-e-wafa kaun hain,
Is dil-e-dard-e-ajzaa kaun hain,

Door rakhte hain jo apni chasm-e-khooban se,
Unke dar-e-dil mein marhaba kaun hain,

Zakhmi nafz ko dabaa kar chalte hain,
Yahaan paa-e-zakhm ka masiha kaun hain,

Har shakhs ke liye paraaya hoon main,
Aisi beqaar mehfil mein apna kaun hain,

Bekhudi-o-hoshyaari ko khoob samajhte hain,
Lekin inke darr se boodaa kaun hain,

Alag rehne ki humko aadat hi sahi,
Par uske nafas se juda kaun hain,

Sirf zulmat-e-hayaat-e-ghum hain, 'Ravi',
Aise mein aadmi-e-dil-e-bemudda kaun hain.
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2007, 11:54:57 AM »
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Very nice Ravi...though very difficult urdu words !!! Had to look for  meaning of some of them !
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2007, 08:09:10 PM »
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main to itni daqeq urdu perh ker behosh hi hony wali hoon..... ap ny kya ALLAM IQBAL ki shagirdi ka huner dikhlaya ha?Huh?? Puzzled ! wesy ye aor baat ha k jo samjh aaya wo ap ny bohat acha likha=d>
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2007, 08:18:21 PM »
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Shukhriya TalatJi and AankhainJi...

Ji maaf kijiyega bohat kathin Urdu hain...lekin accha laga ke apko pasand aaya, Please koi to isse critic karo, main bechain hoon critics ka!
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2007, 04:53:43 PM »
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Bahoot Accha Likha hai Ravi Ji,.
keep Going Brother
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2007, 02:06:53 PM »
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Bahut acha likha hai ravi ji keep it up
agar isi tarha likhte rahe toh mahaan rahoge
sabse badkar lagoge
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