Imtehaan Ke Pal "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 20, 2011, 08:10:41 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 24, 2011, 02:39:50 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah..
Dost jaisa feel kar raha tha bilkul waisa hi parrne ko
mila hai aj mujhe..
Kya baat hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Lavz nahin hai tariff kay!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #16 on: October 29, 2011, 10:55:32 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

khwaish ji as usual fantastic poetry.
one thing I feel in you that u r improving day by day.
that is must to go deep in feelings.



Thanks a Million Sureshji..

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«Reply #17 on: November 01, 2011, 06:56:16 AM »
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Zindagi ko ek naye nazariye se dekhna sikhati hai ye kavita...gehri baatein..jo dil ko chuu jaaye...superb....

Jab bhi likha zindagi k liye likha
Khuch naye palon ko jeene k liye likha
kabhi apne liye likha, kabhi dusron k liye likha
Aapki kalam ko har likhne waale ka sallaam... notworthy
Taarif mein kalam ki jab likhne baithe toh yahi likha.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 Thankyou ! Thankyou ! Thankyou !

Thanks A Lotttttt Dear Pooja..

Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete Rahiyega icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #18 on: November 09, 2011, 11:59:28 AM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Kafi achche khayaal kahe hai janab...
Sabhi khayaal kafi achche aur gehre rahe...
Humari daad hazir hai... Usual Smile

Par hume laga ke aapki is kalaam meiN pur zor
lafzoN ki behad kami hai.. Jisse radiff aur kafiye
apna maqaam banaaye raha khayaaloN ko saath deta
nazar nahi aaya.. Waise achchi koshish rahi..
Aapke khayaal humesha hi khub rahte hai so woH kami
koi mayne nahi rakhti.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile   




Parwaaz Ji Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Ho Sakta Hai Ke shayad Main Mere Khayalon Ke saath Insaaf Naa Kar Paya..Khair Aage Zaroor Dhyaan Dunga..Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete rahiyega icon_flower icon_flower
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