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Nice sentiments Uni.................for the child.....

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MOTHER'S LOVE

She Lovingly called her Son
To fetch the Milk,
He instantly reverted back
And
Shouted in a rage of anger,
Are you made of Silk?

Do your own
Don’t involve
Me as a drone.

Mom didn’t expect
This much,
And
Was shocked at such.

Sat on a chair
To think why
He reacted with a snarl
And
How she had nurtured his care.

Mouth shut,
Like the
Door to the poor’s hut
Voice Blocked
Breath Cocked
Physique Rocked
All the memories Good or Bad
Suddenly met together
And flocked.

She thought it a dream
Primed her body to scream
Wanted to ask her son
The reason behind his
Awesome fun.

As soon as she
Turned back to talk
She received a fatal stroke
Mom was murdered
Love with all relations
Was surrendered.

Mercilessly
He pulled out her heart
Using sharp knife and maddened art.

He ran out of the house
Heart in one hand,
Knife in the other,
Avoiding the Crowd.

He was running
The heart was smiling
Son fearing
Mom was reveling.

Accidentally,
He stumbled over a stone
Falling to the ground.
The heart fell apart
It
Immediately cried for her son
That he not be hurt and depart.

And asked
Oh, My son
Did you Get hurt?
Be careful,
Put me in your shirt.

He realized his Mom’s love
But what could he do now or above
He prayed for Mom to forgive
His heinous art
And said
“I pulled out your heart
to please my love and her
Fatalist Cult”.

Allow me to free my soul
I Don't want to live anymore.
Suddenly he heard a hollow sound
It was his mother in the heaven around
Told him to live and love
Only Love is not all above.

~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*~~~~

Thanx unicorn ...I love to answer the posts instantly.......god bless you always


always Harash