intezaar

by shyama on January 05, 2005, 03:52:56 PM
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #15 on: January 10, 2005, 09:47:47 AM »
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Quote from: "smile_deep1"
nice waheed

bujhana bhi chaho to,
un chiragon ko bujha na paogey.
woh lamhe dosti ke bhula na paogey.
na bichdengey tujhse yaad rakhna.
tere sanson main yaad banker bas jayengey...



wow wow superb...............deep.............  :lol:  
ur welcome deep.............


Main  Jin Logon Mein  Rehta Hoon Main In Mein Se Nahi Hoon
Hoon Koun ? Mujhe Apna Zamana Nahi Milta.............................
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«Reply #16 on: January 10, 2005, 09:59:30 AM »
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un logon ke saath reh kar bhi,
tum unmay se nahin ho.
kya tum mohabbat ho?
jo kisi zamanay se nahin ho.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #17 on: January 10, 2005, 10:06:02 AM »
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wow very nice deep..............
ur welcome deep.............

Munsif ho ager tum to kab insaaf karo gy?
Mujrim hain ager hum to saza kyon nahi dete?Huh?
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #18 on: January 10, 2005, 10:13:02 AM »
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har katil ko aaj munsif bana dete hain yeh log,
abb tum hi batao hum kya insaaf karengey.
mujrim agar tum hote to saja de detey hum,
sochtey hain ek aur gunah kaisay karengey..
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #19 on: January 10, 2005, 10:28:44 AM »
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wow deep.............excellent wordings......superb.....

Jab Gulistaan Ko Khuun Ki Zaruurat Padi
Sab Se Pehle Hamaari Hi Gardan Kati
Ab Ye Kehte Hain Humse Ye Ahl-E-Chaman
Yeh Chaman Hai Hamaara, Tumhaara Nahin........
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«Reply #20 on: January 10, 2005, 10:49:31 AM »
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shukriya waheed ..............

ummedon ka daman hum chhod aye,
un na farmano se rishety tod aye.
woh bewafai to apno ne ki thi,
hum gairon  se bhi muh mod aye.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #21 on: January 10, 2005, 11:18:14 AM »
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ur welcome tosha................  :lol:

once again.............. excellent...........

 Yeh ajeeb hai mohabbat ke zamanna janta hai
Na main us ki manta hoo na woh meri manta hai
Koi us se ja ke pochay kiya mila ussey bicher ker
Main bhi khaaak chanta ho woh bhi khaak chanta hai...........
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: January 10, 2005, 04:30:05 PM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh smile sis and waheed ji! dil kush hogaya ap dono ke sher pad kar!

 :D
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«Reply #23 on: January 10, 2005, 04:59:24 PM »
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shukriya waheed ..............

ummedon ka daman hum chhod aye,
un na farmano se rishety tod aye.
woh bewafai to apno ne ki thi,
hum gairon  se bhi muh mod aye.



Muh modna aasan hai sacchai se aye dost,
Samna karo unka jisne thokar tumhe di hai...
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thycreator
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«Reply #24 on: January 10, 2005, 05:08:57 PM »
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ur welcome tosha................  :lol:

once again.............. excellent...........

 Yeh ajeeb hai mohabbat ke zamanna janta hai
Na main us ki manta hoo na woh meri manta hai
Koi us se ja ke pochay kiya mila ussey bicher ker
Main bhi khaaak chanta ho woh bhi khaak chanta hai...........


Mohabbat ajeeb hai ye toh sach hi kaha hai tumne aye dost,
Karke dekho  jara khaak channe ka hai apna alag maja.
Gar kuch na milta dillagi ka hasil jo in deewano ko,
Laila majnu ki dastan sunte bhala kahan.....
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«Reply #25 on: January 10, 2005, 05:18:55 PM »
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shukriya waheed ..............

ummedon ka daman hum chhod aye,
un na farmano se rishety tod aye.
woh bewafai to apno ne ki thi,
hum gairon  se bhi muh mod aye.



Muh modna aasan hai sacchai se aye dost,
Samna karo unka jisne thokar tumhe di hai...


jisne thokar di usse hum bhi thokar de sakhte hai,
par apne jaan ko bhala hum kaise dard de sakhte hai?
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«Reply #26 on: January 10, 2005, 05:21:10 PM »
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shukriya waheed ..............

ummedon ka daman hum chhod aye,
un na farmano se rishety tod aye.
woh bewafai to apno ne ki thi,
hum gairon  se bhi muh mod aye.



Muh modna aasan hai sacchai se aye dost,
Samna karo unka jisne thokar tumhe di hai...


jisne thokar di usse hum bhi thokar de sakhte hai,
par apne jaan ko bhala hum kaise dard de sakhte hai?




Kisne kaha ki thokar ka jawab do,
Ehsaas e dard unko dilana bahut hua
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Meena
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«Reply #27 on: January 10, 2005, 05:48:43 PM »
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wahhhhh!!!

ehesaas hota unne kisi dard ka,
to yuh muskura kar chal diya na hote apne rahon pe!
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thycreator
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«Reply #28 on: January 10, 2005, 05:51:55 PM »
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wahhhhh!!!

ehesaas hota unne kisi dard ka,
to yuh muskura kar chal diya na hote apne rahon pe!



Suniye meena ji

Na dila sake ehsaas jo unke apne dard ka,
Aisa toh nahi ki pyar mein gehrai hi na rahi
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Meena
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«Reply #29 on: January 10, 2005, 06:06:43 PM »
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fasle darmiyan ke ki unone kam kisi aur ke saath,
jo sunati apna hal e dil to baimani hoti dono ke saath!
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