Iss makan main abb koi nahin rehta...

by Bambi on September 20, 2010, 02:35:42 PM
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Iss makan main abb koi nahin rehta,
Pehle yahan par ek ghar hua karta tha,
ek bada sa aam ka ped,
Bachche aangan main hop-scotch khelte the,
Dadi ki chillane ki aawaz bahar tak sunai deti thi,
Ma- Baba, Chacha-chachi kaam main masruff
ek dusre se masti karte guzarthe the.

Par abb iss makan main koi nahin rehta.
Aam ka ped kabka thod ke ussey parking-lot banadiya,
Bachche hop-scotch khelthey-khelthey kain aur hi nikal gaye,
Dadi ki awaaz... dadi aawaaz sunne hue kareeban ek saal
ho gaya.
Aur ma-baba, chaha-chachi sey aisey bikhare ki ab tho
muskurahat ki bhi koi gunjaish nahin rahi.

Iss makan main abb koi nahin rehta,
Pehle yahan par ek ghar hua karta tha,
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2010, 02:49:00 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!

Aaj ke Halaat Ko Khoob Darshaya Aapne Bambi ji

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2010, 04:23:02 PM »
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Bahut khoob kahi janaab... Dil se daad hazir hai....

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2010, 05:23:59 PM »
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Quote from: Bambi on September 20, 2010, 02:35:42 PM
Iss makan main abb koi nahin rehta,
Pehle yahan par ek ghar hua karta tha,
ek bada sa aam ka ped,
Bachche aangan main hop-scotch khelte the,
Dadi ki chillane ki aawaz bahar tak sunai deti thi,
Ma- Baba, Chacha-chachi kaam main masruff
ek dusre se masti karte guzarthe the.

Par abb iss makan main koi nahin rehta.
Aam ka ped kabka thod ke ussey parking-lot banadiya,
Bachche hop-scotch khelthey-khelthey kain aur hi nikal gaye,
Dadi ki awaaz... dadi aawaaz sunne hue kareeban ek saal
ho gaya.
Aur ma-baba, chaha-chachi sey aisey bikhare ki ab tho
muskurahat ki bhi koi gunjaish nahin rahi.

Iss makan main abb koi nahin rehta,
Pehle yahan par ek ghar hua karta tha,


Very Nice Poetry .... Bahut acchi rahi sabhi panktiya ... dil se daad aapki peshkash ke liye ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2010, 01:00:51 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2010, 07:39:03 AM »
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aap sab ki duaon ke liye shukriya !
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2010, 07:43:38 AM »
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Quote from: Bambi on September 20, 2010, 02:35:42 PM
Iss makan main abb koi nahin rehta,
Pehle yahan par ek ghar hua karta tha,
ek bada sa aam ka ped,
Bachche aangan main hop-scotch khelte the,
Dadi ki chillane ki aawaz bahar tak sunai deti thi,
Ma- Baba, Chacha-chachi kaam main masruff
ek dusre se masti karte guzarthe the.

Par abb iss makan main koi nahin rehta.
Aam ka ped kabka thod ke ussey parking-lot banadiya,
Bachche hop-scotch khelthey-khelthey kain aur hi nikal gaye,
Dadi ki awaaz... dadi aawaaz sunne hue kareeban ek saal
ho gaya.
Aur ma-baba, chaha-chachi sey aisey bikhare ki ab tho
muskurahat ki bhi koi gunjaish nahin rahi.

Iss makan main abb koi nahin rehta,
Pehle yahan par ek ghar hua karta tha,


bahut achheee......
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