Itne khushnasib tou hum nhi...R....

by brokenbyluv on May 15, 2010, 07:59:48 PM
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Koi merra sath pane k liye zamane se bagawat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merri zindgi mein aane k liye khuda ki ibadat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merri tanhai ko mitane k liye apni chahto ki inayat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merra luta aashiya sajane k liye ishq k rang ki sajawat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merre haasil mein sabkuch gawane k liye beinteha sarwat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merre har jazbaat ko apnane k liye bhari mehfil mein merri chaht kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merre sang apna jivan bitane k liye mujhse bepanah mhbt kare..
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi......
 


Sarwat-power,taqat...
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2010, 08:15:43 PM »
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bahut bahut pyaari kavita hai aapki yeh... bahut pyaar se likhi gayi hai... aur dard bhi hai... bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne shabdon ko joda hai... darasal hume pata hi nahi chalta ki kaun aake humse takra jaaye... humein ye nahi pata hota ki hum kitne khushnaseeb hai... ek khoobsurat haadsa honey me der nahi lagta... wo to bas ho jaata hai... meri duwaayein hamesha aapke saath hain... aapse jo bhi mohabbat karega wo itna karega ki aap ye duniya hi bhool baithenge....!!!

mohabbat, haan wo khoobsurat ehsaas, maangne se nahi milti,
chahte hain har koi use paana, par har kisi ko nahi milti,
mohabbat to bas use milti hai jo sachchi ibaadat karta hai,
ye to aap jaiso ki amanat hai, hum badnaseebon ko nahi milti...
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2010, 08:21:29 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kapil ji..aur apki duao k liye bhi tahe dil se shukriya..


Main kahan abaad hu mhbt mein,
main bhi tou barbad hu mhbt mein,
tu mujhe kyun khushnasib kehta hai merre dost..
main bhi ek ujda sa shaadaab hu mhbt mein......
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2010, 08:32:37 PM »
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u r welcome Geet ji... be happy n keep smiling always... zindagi muskuraane ke liye hoti hai aansoo bahane ke liye nahi... Usual Smile

ye na socho ki zindagi bahut chhoti hai,
aane waale palon me khoobsurti hoti hai,
ye na socho ki bastiyaan ujadke basti nahi,
uske ghar der hai par andher nahi hoti hai...
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2010, 08:36:15 PM »
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ji shukriya kapil ji aur bilkul thi kaha apne anu bahane se sirrf chehra khrab hota hai aur kuch nhi...Giggle..


Sach hai khuda har kisi ki sunta hai,
vo dard jhelne k liye bhi apne khaas hi chunta hai,
jab uske imtihan mein paas ho jate hai gumghin log..
tou vo unke liye phir khushiyo ki sej bunta hai......
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2010, 08:48:44 PM »
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sahi kahaa aapne... aur apne is khoobsurat chehre ko aasuon ki baarish me kyun bhigona... bekaar fir baadme cosmetics pe paise barbaad karna padega... Laughing hard


khushiyaan maangne se nahi milti, uska ek khaas waqt hota hai,
mohabbat chahne se nahi milti, uska bhi ek khaas waqt hota hai,
muskuraate raho apne gham me aur karte raho ibadat us khuda ki,
wo tumhaari jholi jarur bharega, par uska ek khaas waqt hota hai...
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2010, 09:03:24 PM »
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Wow Geet ji ,bahut bahut khoob,heart touching,mindblowing,lovely creation,itna khoobsurati se likhi aapne ki samajh hi nahi aa rahi ki kaise tareef karun aapke.Kapil ji n bhi bahut badiya likha.bas aise hi likhte rahena.excellent. Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2010, 09:15:07 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2010, 01:39:05 PM »
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Ruswaai Bhare Ehesaason Ko Zindgi Ke Aaine Me Behad Khubsoorati Se Utaara hai aapne.. Ek ek Lafz Bahut Hi Khooooooob laga is gazal ka Geet ji.. Bahut Hi Lajawab aur Khubsoorat peshkash hai.. Applause Applause

Kapil Bhai aapne bhi Geet ji Bakhoobi Sath diya hai.. Applause



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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2010, 05:04:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2010, 06:39:51 AM »
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Koi merra sath pane k liye zamane se bagawat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merri zindgi mein aane k liye khuda ki ibadat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merri tanhai ko mitane k liye apni chahto ki inayat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merra luta aashiya sajane k liye ishq k rang ki sajawat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merre haasil mein sabkuch gawane k liye merri rehmat kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merre har jazbaat ko apnane k liye bhari mehfil mein merri chaht kare,
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi,

koi merre sang apna jivan bitane k liye mujhse beinteha mhbt kare..
itne khushnasib tou hum nhi......
 


Bahut Khoob Geet Ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2010, 06:41:12 AM »
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Achchhi mefil jamaai hai aap ne geet ke saath Kapil
Keep it up
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2010, 07:45:21 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Achchhi mefil jamaai hai aap ne geet ke saath Kapil
Keep it up
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2010, 11:44:28 PM »
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wah kya mehfil hai .........

Bhut ache !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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