JAB APNE PE BITH_TI HAIN

by sajid_ghayel on September 21, 2008, 10:38:21 PM
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KOI ZARA YEH BATAYE YEH KAISA SHOR HAIN
YEH KAISI BHEED HAIN KYA MARA AAJ KOI AUR HAIN
Q ROTE HO TUM SABHI Q AASU BAHATE HO
MARNA HUM SABKO HAI Q YEH BHOOL JATE HO

USI DAM KAHI BHEED SE MERE BETE KA DOST MERE PAAS AA GAYA
NA JANE USKI AAKHO ME KYA THA DIL MERA BHI GHABRA GAYA
USNE KAHA YEH SACH HAIN BABA KHUDA NE KIYA HAIN SABR TUMKO ATA
PAR YEH KAISE IS DIL KO SAMJAOO MERA DOST AMAN NA ZINDA RAHA

APNE BACHCHE KA NAM SUNKE MAINE THAMA USKE GIREBAN KO
BHALA KAISE MAF KARTA MAIN USKE IS BAYAAN KO
NA JANE MERE SABR KO KYA HO GAYA
JO DUSRO KO TASALLI DETA THA WOH BABA NA JANE KAHA KHO GAYA
AAKHO SE GIRE AASU DI MAINE KHUDA KO SADA
ZINDAGI LENI HI THI TO MERI Q NA LI KYA THI MERE BACHCHE KI KHATA

MERE BUDHAPE KI LATHI THA WOH THA MERA SAHARA
EK MERA HI NAHI HAR GHAR KA THA WOH DULARA

ITNE ME EK BUDHA SHAKS AAKER KEHNE LAGA
KOI ZARA YEH BATAYE YEH KAISA SHOR HAIN
YEH KAISI BHEED HAI KYA MARA AAJ KOI AUR HAI............

                                                          -SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2008, 02:58:02 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
bahoot sachchi baaat sajid......anokha vishay.....samaj aur insaani fitrat par aapki majboot pakad bemisal hai...likhte rahen....
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2008, 04:41:36 AM »
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yeh to aapka pyaar hain bekarar jee jo hamari har baat appko achchi lagti hain
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2008, 04:55:18 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Sajid ji.. Applause
Sahi kaha aapne, jab takk khud par nahin beet.ti tab takk dard ka ahsaas nahin hota...

Kisi ne Sach hi kaha hai ki hum logo ki yaadaasht bahut kamzor hai, kisi ke saath beeti badi se badi anhoni ko hum log kitni jaldi aur aasaani se bhool jaate hai... lekin, agar wohi apne saath beeta ho toh? ? ??  Soch kar bhi darr lagta hai...
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2008, 05:00:11 AM »
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apni baat aap tak pohcha paya mahiya jee bas meri yahi koshish thi thank you
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2008, 06:20:21 AM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob sajid bhai..aapne zindagi ki sachai pesh ki hai..bahut ahe Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2008, 07:42:03 AM »
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thanks khwaish
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2008, 08:24:06 AM »
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Sajid_ghayel ji
Dard kaa ehsaas hi to shaayri ko paidaa kartaa hai! Bahut achchhaa likhaa hai aap ney! Mubaarak ho!
Mein ney kuchh pahiley neechey likheen kuchh laainey, do alag-alag mouqoun par yoindia mein POST keen theen, agar na padheen houn to ab padhney ki takleef gawaarah karein!

 "Jaantaa hai wahee US dard ko, jisey WAH ho!
  Doosroun ko sahee andaaz naheen hotaa hai !!
  Baap ho qatl, yaa ki maan, ki houn bahin-bhaayee:
  Jaan paataa hai wahee, jo ki, UNHAIN khotaa hai!"

"Marey koyee bhi, wo hotaa hai bhaayee, bahin yaa beytaa;
 Kisee ki maan, kisee kaa baap, yaa saalaa, ki, bahinoyee;
 Kabhi wo dudhmuheyn bachchey, kabhi daadaa, kabhi daadee,
 Kabhi maashooq, maashooqaa, kabhi shouhar, kabhi dulhin!
 Gamoun mein doob jaatey hain hazaaroun log lamhey mein:
 Yeh kaisee dushmanee hai, jo naheen pahichaantee kuchh bhi?"

                                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2008, 09:25:39 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 22, 2008, 08:24:06 AM
Sajid_ghayel ji
Dard ehsaas hi to shaayri ko paidaa kartaa hai! Bahut achchhaa likhaa hai aap ney! Mubaarak ho!
Mein ney kuchh philey neechey likheen kuchh laainey, do alag-alag mouqoun par yoindia mein POST keen theen, agar na padheen houn to ab padhney ki takleef gawaarah karein!

 "Jaantaa hai wahee US dard ko, jisey WAH ho!
  Doosroun ko sahee andaaz naheen hotaa hai !!
  Baap ho qatl, yaa ki maan, ki houn bahin-bhaayee:
  Jaan paataa hai wahee, jo ki, UNHAIN khotaa hai!"

"Marey koyee bhi, wo hotaa hai bhaayee, bahin yaa beytaa;
 Kisee ki maan, kisee kaa baap, yaa saalaa, ki, bahinoyee;
 Kabhi wo dudhmuheyn bachchey, kabhi daadaa, kabhi daadee,
 Kabhi maashooq, maashooqaa, kabhi shouhar, kabhi dulhin!
 Gamoun mein doob jaatey hain hazaaroun log lamhey mein:
 Yeh kaisee dushmanee hai, jo naheen pahichaantee kuchh bhi?"

                                     - abd bundeli

Bahut khoob likha hai Abd ji.. Applause
Aapke dono hi kalaam bahut pasand aaye... Bahut sachhaai hai inmein..
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2008, 11:54:28 AM »
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wah abd jee hamesha ki tarah aapki batein dil ko chu jati hain kash main bhi aap jaisa likh pata
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«Reply #10 on: September 25, 2008, 02:09:55 PM »
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Kya bigarh jata agar aa jate khiza se pehle
Marte dam tak tere bimar ne rasta dekha .
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2008, 02:13:32 PM »
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maqtade ishq ke andaz nirale dekhe
use chutti na mili jisne ye sabaq yaad kiya
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2008, 02:19:30 PM »
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Barhe ghor se sun raha tha zamana
Hum khud hi so gae dastan khahte kahte
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2008, 02:23:23 PM »
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Barhi mushkil hai phool ko khud ko sambhale rakhna
Warna iske diwane iski khushbu se hi qatl karte hai
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2008, 02:25:04 PM »
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kahin miljao tume dekh lu aur tazah dam ho lu
Ab jine nahi deti hain ye tanhaiya meri
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