Jab tak...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on July 06, 2011, 05:00:48 PM
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Jab tak tumhe paya na tha,
tab tak kisiko khone ka darr na tha,

jab tak tumhe ankho mein basaya na tha,
tab tak ankho ko ansuo se bhigone ka darr na tha,

jab tak kisi shakhs ki hasrat is dil ne nhi jatayi thi,
tab tak khuaisho ki ladiya pirone ka darr na tha,

jab tak zindgi mhbt se khaali thi,
tab tak haste haste rone ka darr na tha,

jab tak kisike naam ki dastak na thi zindgi mein,
tab tak kisike k hone ya na hone ka darr na tha,

Merre ajnabi Jab tak tumhe paya na tha,
tab tak kisiko khone ka darr na tha.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2011, 05:23:57 PM »
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boht khoob likha hai apne
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2011, 05:27:48 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on July 06, 2011, 05:23:57 PM
boht khoob likha hai apne

Shukriya saahil ji./
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2011, 03:19:36 AM »
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hmm …
gud one ji Usual Smile
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Quote from: sarfira on July 07, 2011, 03:19:36 AM
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gud one ji Usual Smile

Shukriya ji..
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2011, 07:40:58 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob!!

Huemsha Di tarah Bahut Hi Khoobsurat jazbaatan Naal Bharpoor

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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2011, 07:41:55 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 08, 2011, 07:40:58 AM
Bahut bahut Khoob!!

Huemsha Di tarah Bahut Hi Khoobsurat jazbaatan Naal Bharpoor

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Tuada bahut shukriya khwiash ji.
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2011, 09:26:56 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 06, 2011, 05:00:48 PM





Jab tak tumhe paya na tha,
tab tak kisiko khone ka darr na tha,

jab tak tumhe ankho mein basaya na tha,
tab tak ankho ko ansuo se bhigone ka darr na tha,

jab tak kisi shakhs ki hasrat is dil ne nhi jatayi thi,
tab tak khuaisho ki ladiya pirone ka darr na tha,

jab tak zindgi mhbt se khaali thi,
tab tak haste haste rone ka darr na tha,

jab tak kisike naam ki dastak na thi zindgi mein,
tab tak kisike k hone ya na hone ka darr na tha,

Merre ajnabi Jab tak tumhe paya na tha,
tab tak kisiko khone ka darr na tha.........



 Applause Applause Applause
GUD ONE.BBL
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2011, 05:59:51 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 25, 2011, 09:26:56 AM



 Applause Applause Applause
GUD ONE.BBL

Bahut shukriya khamosh ji..
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