JANAAZAA (4- Liner)... "MohaN"

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JANAAZAA

Umr bhar khataarnaak beemaarion ke samajhne mein
Rehnaa yeh kisee tabeeb ke liye khail tamaashaa to naa hai
Sahib gar beemaari samajh paayien to khazaanaa hai
Gar kahin khudko hee lag jaaye to tabeeb kaa janaazaa hee hai

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JANAAZAA

Umr bhar khataarnaak beemaarion ke samajhne mein
Rehnaa yeh kisee tabeeb ke liye khail tamaashaa to naa hai
Sahib gar beemaari samajh paayien to khazaanaa hai
Gar kahin khudko hee lag jaaye to tabeeb kaa janaazaa hee hai

Surindar N.        "MohaN"

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