Jee LO

by tamanna1 on December 16, 2011, 03:06:38 PM
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Pyaar na karo kisise ke zindagi kum padjaaye samjaane ke liye
Pyaar na karo kisise ke kehthe kehthe apne aap ko kho jaaye

Pyaar na karo kisise ke yun hi waqt roz beeth jaaye
Pyaar na karo kisise ke apne aap se nafrath ho jaaye

Aisa pyaar kis kaam ka
Jo samjaana sake
Ya na kudh samaj sake

Jee lo har lamha
kyunki
zindagi ek baar hothi he

Jee ho har lamha
Kyunki
Kal shayad phir na ho  
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2011, 06:19:16 PM »
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Aadab Janab!

Bahut khoob achche khayaaloN ka izhaar kiya hai aapne..
bahut khoob janab.. In khub aur naseehat bhare khayaaloN
par dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. koshish ko aur pukhta kijiye.. aur bhi
achche member's ko padhiye.. and realy aapko apni writting
skill meiN improvment karni hai to bade shoharaaoN ke kalaam
padhiye yaa geetoN ke lyrics ko bade aaraam se padha kijiye..

Hope aap ko humari baateN buri na lagi ho.. but im sure ke
isse aapki lekhani meiN bahut nikhaar aayeNga.. Usual Smile

Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2011, 04:41:30 AM »
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nice
Quote from: tamanna1 on December 16, 2011, 03:06:38 PM
Pyaar na karo kisise ke zindagi kum padjaaye samjaane ke liye
Pyaar na karo kisise ke kehthe kehthe apne aap ko kho jaaye

Pyaar na karo kisise ke yun hi waqt roz beeth jaaye
Pyaar na karo kisise ke apne aap se nafrath ho jaaye

Aisa pyaar kis kaam ka
Jo samjaana sake
Ya na kudh samaj sake

Jee lo har lamha
kyunki
zindagi ek baar hothi he

Jee ho har lamha
Kyunki
Kal shayad phir na ho 
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2011, 10:30:32 AM »
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Thanks Parvaaz ji....mein zaroor aur padungi aur improve karungi..Thanks for the tip and encouragement

Thanks Manoj ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2011, 10:29:41 AM »
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jeene ka khayaal bura nahi par...usoolo.n ki shart par...
I know hindi is a prob. but u can. of course time is a constraint..
 Applause Applause Applause
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