Jeene Ka Hausla "Khwaish"

by khwaish on August 03, 2011, 01:48:20 PM
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Agar chal Rahe Ho To Bataane ki Zaroorat Nahi!!
 Rukh jaaoge To Koi Tumhe Puchega Bhi Nahi"
              -Dharmendar Deol-



Har Raah par Chalna Seekh Hi jaate Hai Chalne Waale
Peeche Mudkar Kaha Dekhte Hai Phir Guzarne Wale

kaali Raat Ke baad Subeh ka Intezar karte Hai musaafir!!
Chaar Diwari mein Qaid Reh Jate hai Halaat Se Darne Wale

Hum To Phool Ki Tarah Hai Tootkar Bhi Mehakte Hai!!!
Kitaabon mein To kabhi Zulfon mein Roz Sawarne Wale

 Zindagi Apni Chiraago Ke Maanind Guzarti Hai....!!!
Tez Andhiyon mein Bhi Jeena ka Hausla Rakhte Hai Marne wale

 Woh Shaks Bhala Mera Kab Tak  Saath Nibha Paayega....!!!
Apni Soch Par Afsos Nahi karte Ek Baar Faisla karne Wale

Phoolon Ki Basti Se Jo Guzro,Kaanto Se Dosti karna seekhlo!!
"Khwaish" Bahut Mushkil Se Sambhalte Hai Tootkar Bikharne Wale

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2011, 03:29:10 PM »
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Khwaishji ek ek line ka matlab bahut gehra hai.
hum doobkar samjhe hain.
aapki kavitaon ki yahi khaas baat hai ki meditation power badh jaati hai.
badh kya jaati hai ,meditation karna aa jata hai.
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 01:48:20 PM
Agar chal Rahe Ho To Bataane ki Zaroorat Nahi!!
 Rukh jaaoge To Koi Tumhe Puchega Bhi Nahi"
              -Dharmendar Deol-



Har Raah par Chalna Seekh Hi jaate Hai Chalne Waale
Peeche Mudkar Kaha Dekhte Hai Phir Guzarne Wale

kaali Raat Ke baad Subeh ka Intezar karte Hai musaafir!!
Chaar Diwari mein Qaid Reh Jate hai Halaat Se Darne Wale hello2 hello2 hello2

Hum To Phool Ki Tarah Hai Tootkar Bhi Mehakte Hai!!!
Kitaabon mein To kabhi Zulfon mein Roz Sawarne Wale icon_salut icon_salut

 Zindagi Apni Chiraago Ke Maanind Guzarti Hai....!!!
Tez Andhiyon mein Bhi Jeena ka Hausla Rakhte Hai Marne wale

 Woh Shaks Bhala Mera Kab Tak  Saath Nibha Paayega....!!!
Apni Soch Par Afsos Nahi karte Ek Baar Faisla karne Wale

Phoolon Ki Basti Se Jo Guzro,Kaanto Se Dosti karna seekhlo!!
"Khwaish" Bahut Mushkil Se Sambhalte Hai Tootkar Bikharne Wale hello2 hello2

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2011, 03:44:18 PM »
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Kya kehne janaab.samundar ki gehrai hai apki ghazal mein,aapko bahut baar padha hai aap yakeenan bahot umda likhte hai.yuhin likhte rahe icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2011, 04:08:39 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 03, 2011, 03:29:10 PM
Khwaishji ek ek line ka matlab bahut gehra hai.
hum doobkar samjhe hain.
aapki kavitaon ki yahi khaas baat hai ki meditation power badh jaati hai.
badh kya jaati hai ,meditation karna aa jata hai.
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Sureshji, iss Comment Par kya Jawaab Doon..Sirf Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Ada kar sakta Hoon Ke Aap Lafzon Ki Gehrai Ko samajhte Hai..Yuhi Huemsha Saath Nibhaate Rahiyega...Aur Aapke Comments Padhte-Padhte Yuhi Ek mera Pasandida Sher Yaad Aa Gaya..

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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2011, 04:13:38 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 01:48:20 PM
Agar chal Rahe Ho To Bataane ki Zaroorat Nahi!!
 Rukh jaaoge To Koi Tumhe Puchega Bhi Nahi"
              -Dharmendar Deol-



Har Raah par Chalna Seekh Hi jaate Hai Chalne Waale
Peeche Mudkar Kaha Dekhte Hai Phir Guzarne Wale

kaali Raat Ke baad Subeh ka Intezar karte Hai musaafir!!
Chaar Diwari mein Qaid Reh Jate hai Halaat Se Darne Wale

Hum To Phool Ki Tarah Hai Tootkar Bhi Mehakte Hai!!!
Kitaabon mein To kabhi Zulfon mein Roz Sawarne Wale

 Zindagi Apni Chiraago Ke Maanind Guzarti Hai....!!!
Tez Andhiyon mein Bhi Jeena ka Hausla Rakhte Hai Marne wale

 Woh Shaks Bhala Mera Kab Tak  Saath Nibha Paayega....!!!
Apni Soch Par Afsos Nahi karte Ek Baar Faisla karne Wale

Phoolon Ki Basti Se Jo Guzro,Kaanto Se Dosti karna seekhlo!!
"Khwaish" Bahut Mushkil Se Sambhalte Hai Tootkar Bikharne Wale

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Khwaish Sahab Aadaab..
 Applause Applause Applause

Kya kehne sahab aapke..
padhte padhte badan ke raungte khade ho gaye..

poora zehan sama gaya ish kalaam pe..

Wah..!! Bahut khoob..

Aise hi likhte rahiye khwaish ji..

bahut kuchh sikhne ko milta hai aapse..


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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2011, 07:03:15 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab kia kahne aapke... Ahsaas O khayaal
behad umdaa rahe... AhsaaroN ki gehrai meiN utarne
ki zarurat hi nahi padi.. Itne khoob khayaal bayaaN
kiye hai aapne ke khud ba khud hi zaheN se guzarte
gaye aur dil ko chhute gaye... Usual Smile

Aik behad umdaa tahreer par dil se daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile         


Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 01:48:20 PM
Agar chal Rahe Ho To Bataane ki Zaroorat Nahi!!
 Rukh jaaoge To Koi Tumhe Puchega Bhi Nahi"
              -Dharmendar Deol-

Behad khoob sher hai... kafi gehra
thanks for sharing... Usual Smile         


Har Raah par Chalna Seekh Hi jaate Hai Chalne Waale
Peeche Mudkar Kaha Dekhte Hai Phir Guzarne Wale

Bahut khoob janab daad Usual Smile         

kaali Raat Ke baad Subeh ka Intezar karte Hai musaafir!!
Chaar Diwari mein Qaid Reh Jate hai Halaat Se Darne Wale

Kia kahne janab Masha Allah behad khoob kaha
aapne daad daad daad Usual Smile kafi gehra khayaal hai:)         

Hum To Phool Ki Tarah Hai Tootkar Bhi Mehakte Hai!!!
Kitaabon mein To kabhi Zulfon mein Roz Sawarne Wale

Waah janab waah bahut khoob bahut umdaa Usual Smile         

 Zindagi Apni Chiraago Ke Maanind Guzarti Hai....!!!
Tez Andhiyon mein Bhi Jeena ka Hausla Rakhte Hai Marne wale

Masha Allah janab behad khoob kaha.. kafi
inspiration dene wala sher hai.. daad Usual Smile         

 Woh Shaks Bhala Mera Kab Tak  Saath Nibha Paayega....!!!
Apni Soch Par Afsos Nahi karte Ek Baar Faisla karne Wale

Achcha hai janab daad Usual Smile Kuch kuch apna sa haiN Winking           

Phoolon Ki Basti Se Jo Guzro,Kaanto Se Dosti karna seekhlo!!
"Khwaish" Bahut Mushkil Se Sambhalte Hai Tootkar Bikharne Wale

Waah waah waah bahut umdaa behad khoob:)         

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Janab Khawahish sahaab... kia kaheN bus
kafi umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne humari dil se daad O
Mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... khush O aabaad rahiye...
khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2011, 07:11:01 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 01:48:20 PM
Agar chal Rahe Ho To Bataane ki Zaroorat Nahi!!
 Rukh jaaoge To Koi Tumhe Puchega Bhi Nahi"
              -Dharmendar Deol-



Har Raah par Chalna Seekh Hi jaate Hai Chalne Waale
Peeche Mudkar Kaha Dekhte Hai Phir Guzarne Wale

kaali Raat Ke baad Subeh ka Intezar karte Hai musaafir!!
Chaar Diwari mein Qaid Reh Jate hai Halaat Se Darne Wale

Hum To Phool Ki Tarah Hai Tootkar Bhi Mehakte Hai!!!
Kitaabon mein To kabhi Zulfon mein Roz Sawarne Wale

 Zindagi Apni Chiraago Ke Maanind Guzarti Hai....!!!
Tez Andhiyon mein Bhi Jeena ka Hausla Rakhte Hai Marne wale

 Woh Shaks Bhala Mera Kab Tak  Saath Nibha Paayega....!!!
Apni Soch Par Afsos Nahi karte Ek Baar Faisla karne Wale

Phoolon Ki Basti Se Jo Guzro,Kaanto Se Dosti karna seekhlo!!
"Khwaish" Bahut Mushkil Se Sambhalte Hai Tootkar Bikharne Wale

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khoob khawaish ji . no word to appriciate
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«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2011, 07:37:06 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 01:48:20 PM
Agar chal Rahe Ho To Bataane ki Zaroorat Nahi!!
 Rukh jaaoge To Koi Tumhe Puchega Bhi Nahi"
              -Dharmendar Deol-



Har Raah par Chalna Seekh Hi jaate Hai Chalne Waale
Peeche Mudkar Kaha Dekhte Hai Phir Guzarne Wale

kaali Raat Ke baad Subeh ka Intezar karte Hai musaafir!!
Chaar Diwari mein Qaid Reh Jate hai Halaat Se Darne Wale

Hum To Phool Ki Tarah Hai Tootkar Bhi Mehakte Hai!!!
Kitaabon mein To kabhi Zulfon mein Roz Sawarne Wale

 Zindagi Apni Chiraago Ke Maanind Guzarti Hai....!!!
Tez Andhiyon mein Bhi Jeena ka Hausla Rakhte Hai Marne wale

 Woh Shaks Bhala Mera Kab Tak  Saath Nibha Paayega....!!!
Apni Soch Par Afsos Nahi karte Ek Baar Faisla karne Wale

Phoolon Ki Basti Se Jo Guzro,Kaanto Se Dosti karna seekhlo!!
"Khwaish" Bahut Mushkil Se Sambhalte Hai Tootkar Bikharne Wale

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Ki gal hai ji bahut hi wadiya likheya hai...
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2011, 06:59:34 AM »
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Kya kehne janaab.samundar ki gehrai hai apki ghazal mein,aapko bahut baar padha hai aap yakeenan bahot umda likhte hai.yuhin likhte rahe icon_salut icon_salut

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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2011, 07:10:18 AM »
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lajawaab creation hai dost--
behad umdaa
khus rahiye
shukriya

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Khwaish Sahab Aadaab..
 Applause Applause Applause

Kya kehne sahab aapke..
padhte padhte badan ke raungte khade ho gaye..

poora zehan sama gaya ish kalaam pe..

Wah..!! Bahut khoob..

Aise hi likhte rahiye khwaish ji..

bahut kuchh sikhne ko milta hai aapse..


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khwaishji wakai sher lajawab hai,
theek waqt par kaam aaya hai.
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2011, 04:08:39 PM
Sureshji, iss Comment Par kya Jawaab Doon..Sirf Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya Ada kar sakta Hoon Ke Aap Lafzon Ki Gehrai Ko samajhte Hai..Yuhi Huemsha Saath Nibhaate Rahiyega...Aur Aapke Comments Padhte-Padhte Yuhi Ek mera Pasandida Sher Yaad Aa Gaya..

  Humse Kya Puchte Ho Zindagi ke Baare Mein
 Ajnabi Kya Batlayega Ajnabi ke Baare mein!!!
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab kia kahne aapke... Ahsaas O khayaal
behad umdaa rahe... AhsaaroN ki gehrai meiN utarne
ki zarurat hi nahi padi.. Itne khoob khayaal bayaaN
kiye hai aapne ke khud ba khud hi zaheN se guzarte
gaye aur dil ko chhute gaye... Usual Smile

Aik behad umdaa tahreer par dil se daad O mubarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile         


Janab Khawahish sahaab... kia kaheN bus
kafi umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne humari dil se daad O
Mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.... khush O aabaad rahiye...
khuda Hafez Usual Smile         



Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya parwaaz Ji..

Aapke Comments Padhkar Yakeen Maniye Bahut Khushi Hoti Hai,Kyonki Aapke Comments Se yeh Ehsaas Hota Hai Ke Koi Hai Jo Har As'haar Ko Itni Gehrai Se Padhte Hai..


Izzat-Afzai Ke Liye parwaaz Ji Aapka bahut bahuttttt Shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: August 04, 2011, 03:49:58 PM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji....
Sply 3rd one...
Simply superb....
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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2011, 08:09:22 AM »
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bahut khoob khawaish ji . no word to appriciate

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