jeet.........A.B

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                       o! jaage hue jazbe ab so jaane de,
                       hai mulk jiska uska ho jaane de.

                       khaaq mein ab phool kyonkar talaashein,
                       khawaab aanko.n se kho jaane de,

                       khushboo gurbati ki khoob phalee yahan,
                       hawaa ameeri ki kuch to idhar aane de,

                       kya ghazal, kya nazam-khel hai lafzo.n ka,
                       baat wahi roti ki mil baant kar khaane de,

                       pahle se marasim nahin phir aaj kyon,
                       tanhaai ko hi sirf mere ghar aane de,

                       hai haarna tujhe bechain ek din zarur..!
                       rahein zinda jabtak hamein haraane de.
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2011, 06:40:44 AM »
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 bahut  khoob,adil ji.
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2011, 07:19:39 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 03, 2011, 05:30:34 AM
                 
                       o! jaage hue jazbe ab so jaane de,
                       hai mulk jiska uska ho jaane de.

                       khaaq mein ab phool kyonkar talaashein,
                       khawaab aanko.n se kho jaane de,

                       khushboo gurbati ki khoob phalee yahan,
                       hawaa ameeri ki kuch to idhar aane de,

                       kya ghazal, kya nazam-khel hai lafzo.n ka,
                       baat wahi roti ki mil baant kar khaane de,

                       pahle se marasim nahin phir aaj kyon,
                       tanhaai ko hi sirf mere ghar aane de,

                       hai haarna tujhe bechain ek din zarur..!
                       rahein zinda jabtak hamein haraane de.
kya baat kya baat

daad kubul karen janaab
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2011, 09:05:34 AM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab kia kahne behad gehre aur khub ahsaas
O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab.. Humari
daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2011, 08:53:10 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on December 03, 2011, 06:11:38 AM
bahut khub adil ji

shad o aabad rahiye...

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thank you shihab ji
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bahut khoob adil saheb
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kya baat kya baat

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bahut khoob adil saheb

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bahut khoobsoorat peshkash adil ji.
likhte rahiye.
aabad rahiye,
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Waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Adil ji..

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