Jeevan ne to chalna hai

by Pooja on March 24, 2009, 06:09:13 PM
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Ajj subah subah ek dost ki call aai aor bahoot meethi daant mili ki kitne bhi busy ho kuch palo ko Yoindia per akar kuch likh kar jao... so jaladi jaladi main jo man mai ayya wo likhne ja rahi hu!!

Kuch ander mar gaya aor kuch rah gaya
Dard ki lahron se ajj phir yah dil, jinda hone ka ahsaas seh gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Ajj phir toot raha hai dil
Soche Pooja, kaya bacha tha, jo tootne ko rah gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Idhar sambhalo, Udhar sambhalo
Farz poore karmne main, her armaan adhura rah gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Mile sathi, Bichare sathi
Her baar tanhaai ka ek sath rah gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Dil roye, Ankhia chup
Na jaane kab tadap tadap kar, ansuo ka samundar chup ho gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2009, 06:37:45 PM »
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wah Pooja wah, bahut khoob likha hai aap ney jaldi jaldi meh ... wah wah ....


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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2009, 07:17:09 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Sabse Pehle To Uss Dost Ko Shabaashi Deni Chahiye,jisne aapko Waapas Aakar Likhne Par Majboor Kiya..Good Work Friend.. Winking

Aur Rahi Baat Poetry Ki..Pooja,aap jab bhi likhte ho,ehsaas hota hai ke har alfaaz har ek line,dil se nikal kar kaagaz par utarte hai..hum jaise log to sirf aapka likha padhkar Wah Wah Wah..keh sakte hai..sach mein bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2009, 04:07:21 AM »
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Wah wah Pooja Ji, Bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 27, 2009, 05:59:25 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 24, 2009, 06:37:45 PM
wah Pooja wah, bahut khoob likha hai aap ney jaldi jaldi meh ... wah wah ....


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Thanks Jas ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2009, 05:59:47 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 24, 2009, 07:17:09 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Sabse Pehle To Uss Dost Ko Shabaashi Deni Chahiye,jisne aapko Waapas Aakar Likhne Par Majboor Kiya..Good Work Friend.. Winking

Aur Rahi Baat Poetry Ki..Pooja,aap jab bhi likhte ho,ehsaas hota hai ke har alfaaz har ek line,dil se nikal kar kaagaz par utarte hai..hum jaise log to sirf aapka likha padhkar Wah Wah Wah..keh sakte hai..sach mein bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

bahoot bahoot shukaria khwaish ji!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 27, 2009, 06:00:06 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on March 25, 2009, 04:07:21 AM
Wah wah Pooja Ji, Bahut khoob  Applause Applause

Thanks Deepti!!
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«Reply #7 on: March 27, 2009, 06:14:47 PM »
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Bohot hi Khoob Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2009, 06:28:23 PM »
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Shukaria Celmira!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2009, 05:38:29 PM »
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jeevan ki bagia main, chun chun kaantein thak gai
apne he sataaye din-raat, apno ko samjhati thak gai

Kin mithia khushio ke liye, loote insaan apno ko he
in khokhali khushio ko, dikhaati thak gai

Loot kar apno ko, basa late hai kaise ghar naya
Insaani-fidrat ko, khud ko samjhati thak gai

Jeevan hai saanso ka khail, hath Pooja ke kuch nahi
her dukh ke kanto ko, in sanso se sawarti thak gai!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2009, 06:44:54 PM »
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Wah wah Pooja, bahut hi khoob, wah ....

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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2009, 06:53:32 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 05:38:29 PM
jeevan ki bagia main, chun chun kaantein thak gai
apne he sataaye din-raat, apno ko samjhati thak gai

Kin mithia khushio ke liye, loote insaan apno ko he
in khokhali khushio ko, dikhaati thak gai

Loot kar apno ko, basa late hai kaise ghar naya
Insaani-fidrat ko, khud ko samjhati thak gai

Jeevan hai saanso ka khail, hath Pooja ke kuch nahi
her dukh ke kanto ko, in sanso se sawarti thak gai!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 06, 2009, 10:43:33 PM »
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Thanks Khwaish ji!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2009, 10:44:04 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 06, 2009, 06:44:54 PM
Wah wah Pooja, bahut hi khoob, wah ....

jasbir singh

bahoot bahoot shukria Jas ji!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2009, 02:04:19 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on March 24, 2009, 06:09:13 PM

Ajj subah subah ek dost ki call aai aor bahoot meethi daant mili ki kitne bhi busy ho kuch palo ko Yoindia per akar kuch likh kar jao... so jaladi jaladi main jo man mai ayya wo likhne ja rahi hu!!

Kuch ander mar gaya aor kuch rah gaya
Dard ki lahron se ajj phir yah dil, jinda hone ka ahsaas seh gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Ajj phir toot raha hai dil
Soche Pooja, kaya bacha tha, jo tootne ko rah gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Idhar sambhalo, Udhar sambhalo
Farz poore karmne main, her armaan adhura rah gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Mile sathi, Bichare sathi
Her baar tanhaai ka ek sath rah gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya

Dil roye, Ankhia chup
Na jaane kab tadap tadap kar, ansuo ka samundar chup ho gaya
Jeevan ne to chalna hai, magar na kuch jeevan main rah gaya!!

(oohh..aaaa... Aapko yoindia mein likhne k liye kehna padega kya? Thanks to the one who scold you... tongue3  )


Bahut bahut badiya likha hai aapne di,.... Thumbs UP
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