Jeevandaan

by Pooja on October 22, 2008, 10:56:11 PM
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Bache na hote to kaya hota
Tanhaai ka alam, jaanleva hota
Mar jaate shayad sabhi tanhai ke mare
Bacho ki hansi main gunje jeevan, na jaane kitne sare!!
   
Sun kar unki mithi baatein, dil bhar bhar aye
Ya rubba, inki muskaan ko, na kisi ki najar lag jaaye
Dil chahe kabhi ho jaaye bade, aor ban jaaye sahara
Aor kabhi dua rab se, beet jaaye aise he inka jeevan sara!!

Bhar dete hai jaan jeevan main,  chahe kitne he gum aaye
Inki khatir, na jaane kaya kaya, ma-baap hai seh jaaye
Kitno ke hai jeevan daan yeh, Pooja ki samjh ab ayya
Na jaane kitni Poojao  ne, jeevan daan bacho se hai paaya!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2008, 07:27:57 AM »
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Bohot hi achcha likha hai Pooja.....a wonderful thought  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ek maasoom se subject pe ek khoobsurat khyaal padha, din ki shurua'at achchi ho gayi  icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2008, 07:30:06 AM »
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Excellent Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2008, 08:02:03 AM »
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wonderful creation pooja Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2008, 03:56:03 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Celmira, Veer ji and Bhawna!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2008, 03:59:43 PM »
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Ecxellent Thought, beautifully written..

Sachi Bhawnao se bharpoor...really very positive.. Thumbs UP 

BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2008, 04:05:02 PM »
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Bahoot bahoot  Shukaria Khwaish ji!!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2008, 06:07:36 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah bohat hi khoob likha hai Pooja...

Very nice creation done by you dear...  Thumbs UP
   
 
 
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2008, 09:17:53 AM »
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Hote hain naazuk phool, mehek inki sambhalen
Kachchi mitti hain, inhe dhyaan se sanwaren
Adkhili kali hain ye, rang aur bhi nikhrega
Seenchen dhyaan se ye paude, pyaar se nihaaren
Kal ke andheron main ye chiragh jagmagayenge
Aandhiyaan hain tez, inhe bujhne se bacha len
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2008, 11:08:35 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on October 22, 2008, 10:56:11 PM
Bache na hote to kaya hota
Tanhaai ka alam, jaanleva hota
Mar jaate shayad sabhi tanhai ke mare
Bacho ki hansi main gunje jeevan, na jaane kitne sare!!
   
Sun kar unki mithi baatein, dil bhar bhar aye
Ya rubba, inki muskaan ko, na kisi ki najar lag jaaye
Dil chahe kabhi ho jaaye bade, aor ban jaaye sahara
Aor kabhi dua rab se, beet jaaye aise he inka jeevan sara!!

Bhar dete hai jaan jeevan main,  chahe kitne he gum aaye
Inki khatir, na jaane kaya kaya, ma-baap hai seh jaaye
Kitno ke hai jeevan daan yeh, Pooja ki samjh ab ayya
Na jaane kitni Poojao  ne, jeevan daan bacho se hai paaya!!


wah wah wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause padhne ke baad itna hi kah sakta hun.. Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Celmira on October 24, 2008, 09:17:53 AM
Hote hain naazuk phool, mehek inki sambhalen
Kachchi mitti hain, inhe dhyaan se sanwaren
Adkhili kali hain ye, rang aur bhi nikhrega
Seenchen dhyaan se ye paude, pyaar se nihaaren
Kal ke andheron main ye chiragh jagmagayenge
Aandhiyaan hain tez, inhe bujhne se bacha len

bahoot khoobsurti se aage badhaya talat...bahoot khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2008, 02:43:44 PM »
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Shukriya Sanjeev Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 24, 2008, 05:16:14 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on October 24, 2008, 09:17:53 AM
Hote hain naazuk phool, mehek inki sambhalen
Kachchi mitti hain, inhe dhyaan se sanwaren
Adkhili kali hain ye, rang aur bhi nikhrega
Seenchen dhyaan se ye paude, pyaar se nihaaren
Kal ke andheron main ye chiragh jagmagayenge
Aandhiyaan hain tez, inhe bujhne se bacha len

Very True!! bahoot he acha likha hai Celmira... good work
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2008, 05:16:49 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Honey ji and Bekarar ji!! app bhi kuch likhte to acha lagta
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