Jis raah par chalkar...

by daljeet_faqeer on March 28, 2010, 10:49:16 AM
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Jis raah par chalkar nikle the apne ghar se,
us raah par kisi ke kadmon ke nishaan hai.

Woh shaks shayad manzil tak pahunch na paaya hoga,
har taraf bikhre pade uske sapnon ke nishaan hai.

Koi saath nahin chala uske tanha tha woh shaks,
kisi mod par kabhie kabhie apnon ke nishaan hai.

Is baar bhi saadiq woh daag na mitt payega,
koshish to bahut ki magar janmon ke nishaan hai.

'Faqeer' mayus hua hai bahut manzil ki talaash mein,
zehnon dil par zakhm mile sadmon ke nishaan hai.

                           Daljeet'faqeer'
               
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 11:19:56 AM »
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Wah wah Daljeet ji,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.keep it up.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2010, 11:24:32 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Daljeetji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2010, 12:10:51 PM »
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nice daljeet ji.
Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on March 28, 2010, 10:49:16 AM
Jis raah par chalkar nikle the apne ghar se,
us raah par kisi ke kadmon ke nishaan hai.

Woh shaks shayad manzil tak pahunch na paaya hoga,
har taraf bikhre pade uske sapnon ke nishaan hai.

Koi saath nahin chala uske tanha tha woh shaks,
kisi mod par kabhie kabhie apnon ke nishaan hai.

Is baar bhi saadiq woh daag na mitt payega,
koshish to bahut ki magar janmon ke nishaan hai.

'Faqeer' mayus hua hai bahut manzil ki talaash mein,
zehnon dil par zakhm mile sadmon ke nishaan hai.

                           Daljeet'faqeer'
               
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