JITNI MARZI PEE...........

by sajid_ghayel on September 21, 2008, 10:43:58 AM
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AYE MAY_KADE KE DEEWANE AYE RINDO KE SATHI
SUN KYA KAHE GHAYEL PHIR JITNI MARZI PEE

MAY HI TERA MAZ_HAB HAIN TO JEE BHAR KE PEE
HAR SAKHI TERA RAB HAIN TO JEE BHAR KE PEE

MA KA KALEJA CHEERNA HO TO JEE BHAR KE PEE
GAR BAAP KI IZZAT BECHNA HO TO JEE BHAR KE PEE

JAB ZAMEER HI TERA NANGA HO TO JEE BHAR KE PEE
JAB MADIRA TERE LIYE ZAM ZAM AUR GANGA HO TO JEE BHAR KE PEE

TU SAMJHE KABA KASHI MAI_KHANO KO TO JEE BHAR KE PEE
TU SAMJE GEETA KE SHLOK VESHYA KE GANO KO TO JEE BHAR KE PEE

AGAR BEHAN KI IZZAT SASTI HAIN MADIRA KE PAIMANO SE TO JEE BHAR KE PEE
HAR RAAT TERI SUHAGAN BIKTI HAIN TO JEE BHAR KE PEE

JAB APNE HI BACHCHO KE LIYE TU BAAP NAHI TO JEE BHAR KE PEE
JAB KOI BHI PAAP TERE LIYE PAAP NAHI TO JEE BHAR KE PEE

GANDI NALI ME MARNA THEEK HAIN TO JEE BHAR KE PEE
BHEEK KI CHEETA ME JALNA THEEK HAIN TO JEE BHAR KE PEE

AYE MAI_KADE KE DEEWANE AYE RINDO KE SATHI
SUN KYA KAHE GHAYEL PHIR JITNI MARZI PEE

                                                  -SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2008, 12:06:56 PM »
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Excellent ! Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2008, 01:03:31 PM »
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Sajid ji bahoot achcha likha hai...daad kabool karen...
kuch aapki nazar

kar diya badnaam firse, aur ye wize rahe,
maikadon ki ruswaiyon ka sil sila zaari rahe

hann may hai mazahab mera, to fakhr se kahta hun mai,
aaj tak tumhaari tarah ,dange is mazahab me nahi hue,

jo mandir me jaate hain, masjid se katrate hain,
masjid wale log kabhi mandiron me nahi gaye,

maikashi ke mazhab ki to baat hi nirali hai,
koi hindu nahi yahan, na koi musalma rahe,

dekha hai maine wizon ko kaat-te hue gale,
dosh fir ye maikasho ke hi sar par kyun rahe,

haath bhi kabhi lagaya nahi sharab ko,
kitne hi aise log zameeron ki laash dho rahe,

saare gunah aur maikashi? koch itihaas bhi padho miyan
karne walon ne gunaah, hosho-hawas me kiye,

padhke tumko, mujhe to lagta hai "bekarar"
bin piye ab talak, jaane hum kaise jiye
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2008, 01:20:03 PM »
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great title exquisite poem sajid, love the way you presented the thoughts each line sues the liquor drinker so decently.
mein to kehti hu sajid jeevan ke vishay pe esa likha bahot kam milta he. once again
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 21, 2008, 01:46:27 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai.. Applause Applause Applause
Aapne Jo Likha hai isse pad kar, mujhe ek Itihas ka Kisaa Yaad Aa Raha hai..Aap sab Se Share karna chahunga...

Ek Baar Guru Nanak Dev ji Moghul Baadshah BAABAR ke Darbar Mein Pahunchte hai,jab Baabar Unke aage sharaab ka Paimaana Haazir Karta hai aur kehta hai ki isse Piyo sab Dargahi baatein Bhool Jaaoge.. Ek shayar ne Guru Nanak Dev ji Ke Jawaab Ko apni shayari mein iss Tarah likhtha hai...

THA YEHI AALAM KE GURU NANAK NE YE KEH DIYA
ISKO PINA BHI KHATA
ISKO PILANA BHI KHATA
YEH BAND SURAHI MEIN QAID
KOI NAAGIN SE KAM NAHI
SHAKAL HAI PAANI KI
MAGAR AAG SE KAM NAHI

TU JO PITA HAI
USSE PYAAS BUJH SAKTI NAHI
MAINE JO PEE HAI
WOH QAYAMAT TAK UTAR SAKTI NAHI...
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2008, 02:22:03 PM »
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amazing khwaish guru nanak saheb ka updesh ek dam se satya he, bahot bhaya ye bat.
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2008, 04:30:07 AM »
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garche ahal-e-sharab hain hum log
ye na samajho kharab hain hum log,
jigar muradabaadi
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2008, 04:40:04 AM »
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aap sab ka bohat bohat shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2008, 10:15:00 AM »
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ek bat he sidhi nasha ho koe bhi
deta he insan ku keval hani hi

dharam kisi ka madira kabi hua nahi
pi ke bool jao ishvar ku acha nahi

kaha hindu or muslim ke dharam mein
nasha sharab pine ki ijajat he mili

pita he to hosh nahi bas havas hi rehti
kiya kiya bak jate hen belagam inki madhoshi

khud ku pila behosh ker gam bulate hen
gar mein parivar se isliye banti nahi kabi

hosh mein larte surma or merte shan se
sharabi ka ant he cancer ya khud kushi
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2008, 11:50:19 AM »
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kya baat hain kanta jee khoob kahi
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2008, 05:43:45 PM »
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danyavad sajid jesa samji likhi
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2008, 05:54:39 PM »
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SAJID YOU HAVE SUCH A CREATIVE POET. SOMETHING RARE FOUND TO APPRECIATE. BEST ONE
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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2008, 09:04:32 AM »
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thank you hashi
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2008, 07:09:33 PM »
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IT'S HASHIM
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2008, 04:36:08 PM »
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bohot acha likha hai sajid ji..very touching!! baaki sab ne bhi bohot acha likha hai =D
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