Jo tu hi merra humsafar hota...

by brokenbyluv on November 30, 2010, 11:55:36 AM
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Kaash k kabhi aesa manzar hota,
merre sirhane pe terra sar hota,

jab dhalti sham tou ghumte hum sang sang,
terri merri mhbt ka bhi ek ghar hota,

dekhti jab main aaina tou nazar mujhe tu ata,
terri chahto ka mujhpe kuch aesa asar hota,

chhup jati main terre dil ki dhadkano mein,
aur terri palko k aashiane mein merra basar hota,

main mangti terri khushiyo ki duaye har sajde mein,
terri panaho mein hi gar merri zindgi ka safar hota,

patharile raasto per bhi chalna asaan sa lagta,
jo tu merre ajnabi bus tu hi merra humsafar hota.........
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2010, 01:49:08 PM »
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Shukriya shihab ji..
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«Reply #2 on: November 30, 2010, 02:31:47 PM »
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waah Brokenbyluv ji  kya khoob likha hai .
seedhe dil pr attack hua..
bhot khub dear..
thanx aapko ki itni khubsurat kavita hame padhne ko mila:)
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2010, 03:17:12 PM »
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Ohh..shukriya kilbill ji bahut bahut shukriya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2010, 03:22:58 PM »
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ab mai apni nai rachna Muskurate Ansu post nhi krunga..
aapki is rachna ke kuch words
usme similar ho rhe hain:)
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2010, 03:36:55 PM »
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Arre aesa mat kijiye..plzz post kar dijiye..ye jazbaat merri zindgi se jude hai aur apki rachna k jazbaat apki zindgi se jude hai plzz aap apni rachna post kar dijiye...
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«Reply #6 on: November 30, 2010, 04:02:29 PM »
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Waah Kya baat hai Geet , Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!!!


Khaas Ki tu Mera Hamsafar Hota Yaar
Tho Sayad Zindgai Itni berang Na Hoti !!!

Divya
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2010, 04:44:41 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on November 30, 2010, 04:02:29 PM
Waah Kya baat hai Geet , Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!!!


Khaas Ki tu Mera Hamsafar Hota Yaar
Tho Sayad Zindgai Itni berang Na Hoti !!!

Divya

Shukriya sophiji...apki lines mast hai per kiske liye hai ye tou bataiye..
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2010, 05:36:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #9 on: November 30, 2010, 09:16:29 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khubsoorat Geet di..!
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«Reply #10 on: November 30, 2010, 09:18:17 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on November 30, 2010, 04:02:29 PM
Waah Kya baat hai Geet , Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !!!!


Khaas Ki tu Mera Hamsafar Hota Yaar
Tho Sayad Zindgai Itni berang Na Hoti !!!

Divya
Kya baat hai di..
Wakei mere dil ki baat likhi hai apne..!
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2010, 11:14:19 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji n rahim..
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«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2010, 12:48:16 PM »
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 bahut accha likha aapne geet ji:clap: Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: December 01, 2010, 12:49:34 PM »
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Quote from: ruksar jaan on December 01, 2010, 12:48:16 PM
bahut accha likha aapne geet ji:clap: Applause Applause Applause

Thanx alot ruksar ji...
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2010, 05:53:06 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

buhat aacha likha hai aapne.daad kabool kijiye.
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