Kaalikh:Shairi - E

aasif mureed

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Hello everybody. I'm a newbie on this esteemed site of yours and not a urdu learnt person but i try to write something in my own peculiar way. I love urdu language and this is the first sher which i'm sharing which i wrote when there was a disappointing news some years ago when bombs blasted in local trains in Mumbai... I felt extremely dis heartening and this is what i wrote. I hope u guys will feel my pain and like this first sher of mine at yoindia...

" Kaisi kaalikh na jaane ye,
ujle sehar me lagti hai?
Mera bhi ghar jal jaata hai,
jab aag shehar mein lagti hai..."
-aasif mureed


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Re: Kaalikh

«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2010, 01:32:50 PM »

Welcome to Yo Aasif ji, or bahut achha sher likha hai aapne, keep it up.


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Re: Kaalikh

«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2010, 02:00:41 PM »

Welcome to YOINDIA Aasif ji... aapka hamaare is khoobsurat si duniya me swaagat hai.. bahut pyaari duniya hai ye.. bahut khoobsurat... aur aapke is pehle post ne humein ye bata diya ki aap hamare is jahaan ki khoobsurti ko aur badhaane waale hain... bahut bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki ye... yunhi likhte rahiye janaab... bahut achcha likhte hain aap...!!!


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Re: Kaalikh

«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2010, 02:46:49 PM »

My Dear Aasif Mureed! Adab!

Hum aapka Yoindia par tahedil se khushaamdeed aur isteqbaal karte hain. Aapki tehreeroN ko paRhkar aisa laga k aap mein anginat khoobiyan maujood haiN. Un sabhi khoobiyon ko aap aik aik kar hum se share kijiye. Khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

Quote from: aasif mureed on September 07, 2010, 12:07:43 PM


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Kaalikh

«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2010, 05:31:26 AM »

Aasif Mureed jee! yo india kee is shaairaanaa mehfil me hum aap kaa dil se khair maqdam karte haiN.aap ka ke pahla shair tamaam khoobiyoN se bhara dil par asar choRne wala hai. yuN hee likhte rahiye...........humaree shubh-kaamnaayeN aapke saath haiN....
mamta bajpai


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poppoetry

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Re: Kaalikh

«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2010, 04:52:28 PM »

welcome to yo......bahut asardar likha h aapne.....keep writing.....


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aasif mureed

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Re: Kaalikh

«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2010, 11:17:11 AM »

Thank u all


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