kaash................A.B

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                zarra-e-zameen  pe  kabhi   aisa   asar  ho...,
                darmiyaa.n  emaarato.n   ke  kuch  ghar  ho...,

                pahchaan  sakein   hum  dushmano.n  ko  apne..,
                kash   inn   aanko.n  mein  painy  nazar  ho..,

                khooni lafzo.n se saje akhbaaro.n mein kabhi..,
                ghareebo.n  ke  liye  muskuraati  khabar  ho..,

                mil   jaaye   sab   ko   phir  manzil  apni...,
                gar   aasaan   itna   zindagi   ka safar ho...,

                kaash pade  jo   thappad   maa   ke   bechain..,
                kyaa   haseen   phir   bachpan  sa  manzar ho..,
 
                
                
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2012, 12:40:59 PM »
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bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2012, 12:45:55 PM »
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                zarra-e-zameen  pe  kabhi   aisa   asar  ho...,
                darmiyaa.n  emaarato.n   ke  kuch  ghar  ho...,

                pahchaan  sakein   hum  dushmano.n  ko  apne..,
                kash   inn   aanko.n  mein  painy  nazar  ho..,

                khooni lafzo.n se saje akhbaaro.n mein kabhi..,
                ghareebo.n  ke  liye  muskuraati  khabar  ho..,

                mil   jaaye   sab   ko   phir  manzil  apni...,
                gar   aasaan   itna   zindagi   ka safar ho...,

                kaash pade  jo   thappad   maa   ke   bechain..,
                kyaa   haseen   phir   bachpan  sa  manzar ho..,
 
                
                
 

Bahoot Khoob
kaash pade  jo   thappad   maa   ke   bechain..,
                kyaa   haseen   phir   bachpan  sa  manzar ho

Bahoot Khoob Bhai bechain ji
Is line ke liye 1 rau kubool karein
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2012, 02:52:17 PM »
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waaah bahut umda bahut khoob....

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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2012, 03:10:30 PM »
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                zarra-e-zameen  pe  kabhi   aisa   asar  ho...,
                darmiyaa.n  emaarato.n   ke  kuch  ghar  ho...,

                pahchaan  sakein   hum  dushmano.n  ko  apne..,
                kash   inn   aanko.n  mein  painy  nazar  ho..,

                khooni lafzo.n se saje akhbaaro.n mein kabhi..,
                ghareebo.n  ke  liye  muskuraati  khabar  ho..,

                mil   jaaye   sab   ko   phir  manzil  apni...,
                gar   aasaan   itna   zindagi   ka safar ho...,

                kaash pade  jo   thappad   maa   ke   bechain..,
                kyaa   haseen   phir   bachpan  sa  manzar ho..,
 
               
               
 
waaaaah ustaad waah
gazabb ki post--
daad kubul karen ustaad ji--

aap ye btaie ki rehte kahan hain--
bht din baad aaye yahan--miss krte hain aapko

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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2012, 06:20:53 PM »
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Bahut khoob adil bhai
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mil   jaaye   sab   ko   phir  manzil  apni...,
                gar   aasaan   itna   zindagi   ka safar ho...,
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2012, 06:53:53 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab bahut khoob bade wasi khayaaloN ko ashaaroN meiN
dhalaa hai.. bahut khoob ... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe..
Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

HaaN aik sawaal aaya zaheN meiN " ke gareeboN ke liye muskuraati khabar ke ulaa meiN aapne kaha hai khooni lafzoN meiN saje " yeH
baat humare samjh se pare rahi ... Huh?

Zarra tafsil se farmaiyeNga... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2012, 03:30:40 AM »
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waaaah waaaaah adilji....

bahut sundar...

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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2012, 03:48:36 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2012, 05:39:06 AM »
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Quote from: Anahita on May 14, 2012, 12:40:59 PM
bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aapne
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2012, 06:14:38 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob
kaash pade  jo   thappad   maa   ke   bechain..,
                kyaa   haseen   phir   bachpan  sa  manzar ho

Bahoot Khoob Bhai bechain ji
Is line ke liye 1 rau kubool karein



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waaah bahut umda bahut khoob....

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Adil ji...!!!
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waaaaah ustaad waah
gazabb ki post--
daad kubul karen ustaad ji--

aap ye btaie ki rehte kahan hain--
bht din baad aaye yahan--miss krte hain aapko

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Bahut khoob adil bhai
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mil   jaaye   sab   ko   phir  manzil  apni...,
                gar   aasaan   itna   zindagi   ka safar ho...,
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