KAASH.MAKASH (Tension)... "MohaN"

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KASH.MAKASH (Tension)

Now a day's the youth has lot of work related
tension, which is dangerous for the heart.
I have expressed below in 2 versions.

Zeest kaa rathh tu dheere dheere haank re bhaiyaa
Apne rathh ko koi hichkole naa khilaa tu re bhaiyaa
Rathh mein pyaare Siya Ram jee swaar re bhaiyaa...
Apne bhi dil koi kash.makash naa jagaa re bhaiyaa


Main jab jab neend-o-sapnon se jaagtaa hoon
To zindagi tujh mein ek hal.chal sii paataa hoon
Aajkal ke nau.jawan mein kaisee hai yeh rasaa kashee
Ek beemaari sii kash.makash dilon mein kyun paataa hoon

Surindar. N                  "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2018, 11:58:13 PM »
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KASH.MAKASH (Tension)

Now a day's the youth has lot of work related
tension, which is dangerous for the heart.
I have expressed below in 2 versions.

Zeest kaa rathh tu dheere dheere haank re bhaiyaa
Apne rathh ko koi hichkole naa khilaa tu re bhaiyaa
Rathh mein pyaare Siya Ram jee swaar re bhaiyaa...
Apne bhi dil koi kash.makash naa jagaa re bhaiyaa


Main jab jab neend-o-sapnon se jaagtaa hoon
To zindagi tujh mein ek hal.chal sii paataa hoon
Aajkal ke nau.jawan mein kaisee hai yeh rasaa kashee
Ek beemaari sii kash.makash dilon mein kyun paataa hoon

Surindar. N                  "MohaN"

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bahut shukria Raverdera Jee.
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KASH.MAKASH (Tension)

Now a day's the youth has lot of work related
tension, which is dangerous for the heart.
I have expressed below in 2 versions.

Zeest kaa rathh tu dheere dheere haank re bhaiyaa
Apne rathh ko koi hichkole naa khilaa tu re bhaiyaa
Rathh mein pyaare Siya Ram jee swaar re bhaiyaa...
Apne bhi dil koi kash.makash naa jagaa re bhaiyaa


Main jab jab neend-o-sapnon se jaagtaa hoon
To zindagi tujh mein ek hal.chal sii paataa hoon
Aajkal ke nau.jawan mein kaisee hai yeh rasaa kashee
Ek beemaari sii kash.makash dilon mein kyun paataa hoon

Surindar. N                  "MohaN"

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KASH.MAKASH (Tension)

Now a day's the youth has lot of work related
tension, which is dangerous for the heart.
I have expressed below in 2 versions.

Zeest kaa rathh tu dheere dheere haank re bhaiyaa
Apne rathh ko koi hichkole naa khilaa tu re bhaiyaa
Rathh mein pyaare Siya Ram jee swaar re bhaiyaa...
Apne bhi dil koi kash.makash naa jagaa re bhaiyaa


Main jab jab neend-o-sapnon se jaagtaa hoon
To zindagi tujh mein ek hal.chal sii paataa hoon
Aajkal ke nau.jawan mein kaisee hai yeh rasaa kashee
Ek beemaari sii kash.makash dilon mein kyun paataa hoon

Surindar. N                  "MohaN"

bahut shukria all readers.
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