KABHI MANDIR, KABHI MASJID KE DAR PER.............HASAN

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Kabhi  Mandir , kabhi  Masjid  ke  dar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN ,
Kabhi  paapoN  ki  gathhri  Kooda-ghar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Bhatakte  haiN   khud  apni   ghaltiyoN  se   raah  Manzil  kee ,
Magar   ilzaam    saare   Raah'bar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Tawanaa'ee   zameeN  kee   choos   kar   jangee   iraadoN   say ,
Woh  zimmah  Bhook  ka   patle  Shajar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Hawaa-e-Shabb  ne   tujhko   thhapkiyaaN   de kar  sulaaya  hai ,
Teri  bedaari   hum   Baad-e-Sahar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Agar  chaaho  to  inko   dekh  kar   ghar   tak    chale   aana ,
Nishaan-e-paa   jo   teri   Rah-guzar  per   chhoR  jaate  haiN

SunaayeiN  ge   hamaari   daastaaN    yeh    Khand'har   barsoN ,
Hum  apne  naam  jinkay  Baam-o-dar  per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

'Hasan' ,  likh  kar   Payaam-e-Aashiqui   apni  nigaahoN  meiN ,
Rasaa'ee  unn  talak   unn  kee  Nazar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN





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Tawanai = Taaqat ; Shajar = Tree / plant ; Hawa-e-shab = Raat ki hawa ; Baad-e-sahar = Subah ki hawa ; Bedaari = Jaagna ; Nishan-e-paa = Footsteps ; Rahguzar = Raasta ; Baam-o-dar = Darwaza-khidki ; Rasaa'ee = Pahunch / Reach
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2012, 06:35:38 AM »
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wah wah wah wah...hasanji.......bahut hi khoob....daad daad....khoob likha.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2012, 06:45:35 AM »
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Hasan saheb kabhee aapne T.V saroj khaan ko daad dete sunaa hogaa unhee ke lafzoN meNdaad haazir hai."PERFECT"
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2012, 08:05:22 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 04, 2012, 06:23:15 AM

Kabhi  Mandir , kabhi  Masjid  ke  dar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN ,
Kabhi  paapoN  ki  gathhri  Kooda-ghar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Bhatakte  haiN   khud  apni   ghaltiyoN  se   raah  Manzil  kee ,
Magar   ilzaam    saare   Raah'bar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Tawanaa'ee   zameeN  kee   choos   kar   jangee   iraadoN   say ,
Woh  zimmah  Bhook  ka   patle  Shajar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Hawaa-e-Shabb  ne   tujhko   thhapkiyaaN   de kar  sulaaya  hai ,
Teri  bedaari   hum   Baad-e-Sahar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Agar  chaaho  to  inko   dekh  kar   ghar   tak    chale   aana ,
Nishaan-e-paa   jo   teri   Rah-guzar  per   chhoR  jaate  haiN

SunaayeiN  ge   hamaari   daastaaN    yeh    Khand'har   barsoN ,
Hum  apne  naam  jinkay  Baam-o-dar  per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

'Hasan' ,  likh  kar   Payaam-e-Aashiqui   apni  nigaahoN  meiN ,
Rasaa'ee  unn  talak   unn  kee  Nazar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN





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Tawanai = Taaqat ; Shajar = Tree / plant ; Hawa-e-shab = Raat ki hawa ; Baad-e-sahar = Subah ki hawa ; Bedaari = Jaagna ; Nishan-e-paa = Footsteps ; Rahguzar = Raasta ; Baam-o-dar = Darwaza-khidki ; Rasaa'ee = Pahunch / Reach

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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2012, 08:55:46 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



Janab kia kahne aapke waaH jee waaH behad khoob aur
umdaa tareeqe se aapne ulaa insaani fitrat ko taNz kiya hai...

aur baki ashaar bhi khoob rahe... Usual Smile
Aik khoob aur asardaar kalaam par humari dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2012, 09:34:32 AM »
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Kya dilkash poem h.
Maza aa rha . Parte huye.
Ab aapko baad me post karege. Ab aapki poem double se parte h.
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2012, 11:05:06 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 04, 2012, 06:23:15 AM

Kabhi  Mandir , kabhi  Masjid  ke  dar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN ,
Kabhi  paapoN  ki  gathhri  Kooda-ghar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Bhatakte  haiN   khud  apni   ghaltiyoN  se   raah  Manzil  kee ,
Magar   ilzaam    saare   Raah'bar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Tawanaa'ee   zameeN  kee   choos   kar   jangee   iraadoN   say ,
Woh  zimmah  Bhook  ka   patle  Shajar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Hawaa-e-Shabb  ne   tujhko   thhapkiyaaN   de kar  sulaaya  hai ,
Teri  bedaari   hum   Baad-e-Sahar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Agar  chaaho  to  inko   dekh  kar   ghar   tak    chale   aana ,
Nishaan-e-paa   jo   teri   Rah-guzar  per   chhoR  jaate  haiN

SunaayeiN  ge   hamaari   daastaaN    yeh    Khand'har   barsoN ,
Hum  apne  naam  jinkay  Baam-o-dar  per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

'Hasan' ,  likh  kar   Payaam-e-Aashiqui   apni  nigaahoN  meiN ,
Rasaa'ee  unn  talak   unn  kee  Nazar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN





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Tawanai = Taaqat ; Shajar = Tree / plant ; Hawa-e-shab = Raat ki hawa ; Baad-e-sahar = Subah ki hawa ; Bedaari = Jaagna ; Nishan-e-paa = Footsteps ; Rahguzar = Raasta ; Baam-o-dar = Darwaza-khidki ; Rasaa'ee = Pahunch / Reach

nice feelings of your ghazal
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2012, 11:49:16 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 04, 2012, 06:23:15 AM

Kabhi  Mandir , kabhi  Masjid  ke  dar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN ,
Kabhi  paapoN  ki  gathhri  Kooda-ghar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN  Applause Applause

Bhatakte  haiN   khud  apni   ghaltiyoN  se   raah  Manzil  kee ,
Magar   ilzaam    saare   Raah'bar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN  Applause Applause

Tawanaa'ee   zameeN  kee   choos   kar   jangee   iraadoN   say ,
Woh  zimmah  Bhook  ka   patle  Shajar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN  Applause Applause

Hawaa-e-Shabb  ne   tujhko   thhapkiyaaN   de kar  sulaaya  hai ,
Teri  bedaari   hum   Baad-e-Sahar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN  Applause Applause

Agar  chaaho  to  inko   dekh  kar   ghar   tak    chale   aana ,
Nishaan-e-paa   jo   teri   Rah-guzar  per   chhoR  jaate  haiN  Applause Applause

SunaayeiN  ge   hamaari   daastaaN    yeh    Khand'har   barsoN ,
Hum  apne  naam  jinkay  Baam-o-dar  per   chhoR   jaate   haiN  Applause Applause

'Hasan' ,  likh  kar   Payaam-e-Aashiqui   apni  nigaahoN  meiN ,
Rasaa'ee  unn  talak   unn  kee  Nazar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

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Tawanai = Taaqat ; Shajar = Tree / plant ; Hawa-e-shab = Raat ki hawa ; Baad-e-sahar = Subah ki hawa ; Bedaari = Jaagna ; Nishan-e-paa = Footsteps ; Rahguzar = Raasta ; Baam-o-dar = Darwaza-khidki ; Rasaa'ee = Pahunch / Reach

Aadaab Hasan Sir
Bahut Bahut umda likhai Sir
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah  Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2012, 04:05:04 PM »
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this is really fantastic writings....like saahir ludhianvi !!
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2012, 04:39:19 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2012, 05:20:31 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 04, 2012, 06:23:15 AM

Kabhi  Mandir , kabhi  Masjid  ke  dar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN ,
Kabhi  paapoN  ki  gathhri  Kooda-ghar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN
illicit relation se ALLAH hi bachaaye. aise bachho.n ka zimmedaar kaun .bahut acha sawaal hai ye. laakh take ka matla kahaa hai -waah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bhatakte  haiN   khud  apni   ghaltiyoN  se   raah  Manzil  kee ,
Magar   ilzaam    saare   Raah'bar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN
ye to ab fitrat si banti jaa rahi hai Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Tawanaa'ee   zameeN  kee   choos   kar   jangee   iraadoN   say ,
Woh  zimmah  Bhook  ka   patle  Shajar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN
kyaa khoob kahaa hasan sahab . bahut sahi. iss sher per ek lamba tabsera aur bahas ki jaa sakti hai wah wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Hawaa-e-Shabb  ne   tujhko   thhapkiyaaN   de kar  sulaaya  hai ,
Teri  bedaari   hum   Baad-e-Sahar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN
wah wah wah very very nice. kai manzar nazar aane lage hasan sahab. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Agar  chaaho  to  inko   dekh  kar   ghar   tak    chale   aana ,
Nishaan-e-paa   jo   teri   Rah-guzar  per   chhoR  jaate  haiN
mera durr khula hai khula hi rahe ga tumhaare liye............ Applause Applause Applause Applause
SunaayeiN  ge   hamaari   daastaaN    yeh    Khand'har   barsoN ,
Hum  apne  naam  jinkay  Baam-o-dar  per   chhoR   jaate   haiN
taarikh mein aise kaarnaame kai loag kar guzre hain . bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
'Hasan' ,  likh  kar   Payaam-e-Aashiqui   apni  nigaahoN  meiN ,
Rasaa'ee  unn  talak   unn  kee  Nazar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN
ye to bahut bada risk le liya janab ne ki agla kuch se kuch na samajh baithe ya
phir samajhte-samajhte youn umr na guzar jaaye. Giggle Giggle Giggle




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Tawanai = Taaqat ; Shajar = Tree / plant ; Hawa-e-shab = Raat ki hawa ; Baad-e-sahar = Subah ki hawa ; Bedaari = Jaagna ; Nishan-e-paa = Footsteps ; Rahguzar = Raasta ; Baam-o-dar = Darwaza-khidki ; Rasaa'ee = Pahunch / Reach


itna wasi khayaal aur itni sanjida ghazal. kya ho gaya hai janaab ko.....!

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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2012, 05:02:34 AM »
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Quote from: dolly on April 04, 2012, 06:35:38 AM
wah wah wah wah...hasanji.......bahut hi khoob....daad daad....khoob likha.....Usual Smile
Thanks,dolly.Blessings.
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2012, 08:57:57 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 04, 2012, 06:45:35 AM
Hasan saheb kabhee aapne T.V saroj khaan ko daad dete sunaa hogaa unhee ke lafzoN meNdaad haazir hai."PERFECT"
Zarranawazi ka sukriya aur adaab.
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2012, 10:29:50 AM »
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 Qalb ji,
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Lajwaab Hasan Sir Chota hun par meri taraf se dehroN daad kabool farmayein.
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