KABHI MANDIR, KABHI MASJID KE DAR PER.............HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 04, 2012, 06:23:15 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 05, 2012, 01:11:48 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 04, 2012, 08:55:46 AM
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



Janab kia kahne aapke waaH jee waaH behad khoob aur
umdaa tareeqe se aapne ulaa insaani fitrat ko taNz kiya hai...

aur baki ashaar bhi khoob rahe... Usual Smile
Aik khoob aur asardaar kalaam par humari dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
Parwaaz  saheb , Ghazal ki pazeerai 
ke liye tah e dil se shukriya.HASAN
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«Reply #16 on: April 05, 2012, 03:56:30 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 04, 2012, 08:55:46 AM
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



Janab kia kahne aapke waaH jee waaH behad khoob aur
umdaa tareeqe se aapne ulaa insaani fitrat ko taNz kiya hai...

aur baki ashaar bhi khoob rahe... Usual Smile
Aik khoob aur asardaar kalaam par humari dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
SHaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
bahut bahut shukriya,parwaaz sahab.khush rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #17 on: April 06, 2012, 05:26:28 AM »
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bahut achhi ghazal hai hasan sahab.daad deta hoon.aisi hi kalam se nawaazte rahiye.
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«Reply #18 on: April 06, 2012, 09:11:02 AM »
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Quote from: Parvana shan on April 04, 2012, 09:34:32 AM
Kya dilkash poem h.
Maza aa rha . Parte huye.
Ab aapko baad me post karege. Ab aapki poem double se parte h.

BAHUT SHUKRIYA,PARVANA SHAN SAHAB.KHUSH RAHYE.
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«Reply #19 on: April 06, 2012, 09:22:37 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 04, 2012, 06:23:15 AM

Kabhi  Mandir , kabhi  Masjid  ke  dar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN ,
Kabhi  paapoN  ki  gathhri  Kooda-ghar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Bhatakte  haiN   khud  apni   ghaltiyoN  se   raah  Manzil  kee ,
Magar   ilzaam    saare   Raah'bar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Tawanaa'ee   zameeN  kee   choos   kar   jangee   iraadoN   say ,
Woh  zimmah  Bhook  ka   patle  Shajar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN

Hawaa-e-Shabb  ne   tujhko   thhapkiyaaN   de kar  sulaaya  hai ,
Teri  bedaari   hum   Baad-e-Sahar   per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

Agar  chaaho  to  inko   dekh  kar   ghar   tak    chale   aana ,
Nishaan-e-paa   jo   teri   Rah-guzar  per   chhoR  jaate  haiN

SunaayeiN  ge   hamaari   daastaaN    yeh    Khand'har   barsoN ,
Hum  apne  naam  jinkay  Baam-o-dar  per   chhoR   jaate   haiN

'Hasan' ,  likh  kar   Payaam-e-Aashiqui   apni  nigaahoN  meiN ,
Rasaa'ee  unn  talak   unn  kee  Nazar  per  chhoR  jaate  haiN





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Tawanai = Taaqat ; Shajar = Tree / plant ; Hawa-e-shab = Raat ki hawa ; Baad-e-sahar = Subah ki hawa ; Bedaari = Jaagna ; Nishan-e-paa = Footsteps ; Rahguzar = Raasta ; Baam-o-dar = Darwaza-khidki ; Rasaa'ee = Pahunch / Reach


Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb!!!!!

Har Ek A'shaar Lajwaab!!!!

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«Reply #20 on: April 06, 2012, 03:27:25 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on April 04, 2012, 11:05:06 AM
nice feelings of your ghazal
THANKS,MB SAHAB.THANXALOT .
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«Reply #21 on: April 07, 2012, 06:02:25 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 04, 2012, 11:49:16 AM
Aadaab Hasan Sir
Bahut Bahut umda likhai Sir
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah  Applause Applause
Quote from: mkv on April 04, 2012, 11:49:16 AM
Aadaab Hasan Sir
Bahut Bahut umda likhai Sir
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah  Applause Applause
MUKESH  JI . BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA 
HAUSLA  AFZAI  KA  AUR DUAAEIN . HASAN
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«Reply #22 on: April 07, 2012, 08:20:32 AM »
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Quote from: Jagan Kishan on April 04, 2012, 04:05:04 PM
this is really fantastic writings....like saahir ludhianvi !!
A compliment too big for me.dont know how to react.
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«Reply #23 on: April 07, 2012, 08:37:05 AM »
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Waah! waah! Hasan saheb! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Jyada kya kahein bas ye gujarish hai, jaldi laut aana
aapke dar pe ek nayi gazal ki hum, aas chhod jaate hain
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«Reply #24 on: April 07, 2012, 08:42:28 AM »
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«Reply #25 on: April 08, 2012, 05:35:57 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on April 04, 2012, 04:39:19 PM
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Shukriya,Touhid saheb.Khush rahiye.
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«Reply #26 on: April 08, 2012, 05:52:25 AM »
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bhot khub. bhot mast.
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«Reply #27 on: April 08, 2012, 12:33:31 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 04, 2012, 05:20:31 PM

itna wasi khayaal aur itni sanjida ghazal. kya ho gaya hai janaab ko.....!

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BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA , SHEBA JI, SANJIDA  TABSIRON  KE  LIYE .
KHUSH  RAHIYE . HAMESHA   APNI  GHAZAL  SHER BA  SHER  MAI AAPKE
TABSIRON  KE  PADHNE PER  MAJBOOR  KAR  DETI  HAIN.
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«Reply #28 on: April 08, 2012, 02:16:18 PM »
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bahut khoob hasan saahab....
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«Reply #29 on: April 08, 2012, 04:51:31 PM »
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Lajwaab Hasan Sir Chota hun par meri taraf se dehroN daad kabool farmayein.
Pankaj  ji , Bahut  shukriya  . Aap  naujawaan 
agar  hausla badhayein  to  khud  ko  to hausla
milta   hi  hai , yeh  taqviat  bhi  milti  hai
ki  abhi  shairy  aur  usko  pasand  karne waale
moujood  hain . Bahut  duaaein . Hasan
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