Kabhie yun zindagi mein...

by daljeet_faqeer on March 28, 2010, 11:01:26 AM
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Kabhie yun zindagi mein waqt maat deta hai,
na koi apna na paraya saath deta hai.

Main kisko jaakar sunau apne gham ki dastaan,
bheed mein hoon tanha na koi haath deta hai.

Humne bhi haseen kuchh khawab dekhe the kabhie,
muqaddar ki ranjish humein bas raat deta hai.

Kisse wakif hoon main kisko jaanta hoon yahan,
har chehre pe naqab kahan dikhai saaf deta hai.

Batao to zara main kis or ka rukh karun,
zindagi uljha kar humein bigde halaat deta hai.

                           Daljeet'faqeer'
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 11:09:31 AM »
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Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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 :hatsoff:Very touching and mindblowing creation Daljeet ji.bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2010, 05:14:44 PM »
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really beautiful lines Daljeet ji ... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2010, 10:53:25 AM »
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Bahut khoob Daljeet ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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