kahaan hain.............A.B

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                     hua  zakhm  puranaa  koi  aur  baat  karein...,
                     hai dard ka aanaa-janaa koi aur baar karein...,

                     waabasta  nahin, khushiyaa.n meri jab gulo.n se...,
                     hoga  manzar  suhanaa  koi  aur baat karein...,

                     hai  mehfil  ajnabee,  uss  pe begaane logg...,
                     hua  ajeeb  zamaana  koi  aur  baat  karein...,

                     peetey  the  jiske  liye  ab  wahi na rahaa...,
                     chhoddo zikr-e-maikhanaa koi aur baat karein...,

                    haare  hue  se  laute  her  'shobe'  se  humm...,
                    abb  kya  qismat aazmanaa koi aur baat karein...,

                    hain chingaariyaa.n ab talak khaaq mein bechain...,
                    chhoddo  inhein  bhadkaana  koi aur baat karein...,

  
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«Reply #1 on: April 23, 2013, 02:52:21 AM »
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nice.
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2013, 03:28:39 AM »
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                     hua  zakhm  puranaa  koi  aur  baat  karein...,
                     hai dard ka aanaa-janaa koi aur baar karein...,

 

Bahut Khub Adil Sahab...


Shad o Aabaad Rshiye

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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2013, 03:41:33 AM »
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Bechain sahaab Aadaab... !


Kia baat hai janab guzre waqt se itne pareshaaN ho gaye ke use yaad bhi karne se katra rahe haiN.. tongue3

Just kidding.. behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal baNdhe hai janab.. kafi khoob ashaar rahe.. Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2013, 10:41:11 AM »
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                     hua  zakhm  puranaa  koi  aur  baat  karein...,
                     hai dard ka aanaa-janaa koi aur baar karein...,

                     waabasta  nahin, khushiyaa.n meri jab gulo.n se...,
                     hoga  manzar  suhanaa  koi  aur baat karein...,

                     hai  mehfil  ajnabee,  uss  pe begaane logg...,
                     hua  ajeeb  zamaana  koi  aur  baat  karein...,

                     peetey  the  jiske  liye  ab  wahi na rahaa...,
                     chhoddo zikr-e-maikhanaa koi aur baat karein...,

                    haare  hue  se  laute  her  'shobe'  se  humm...,
                    abb  kya  qismat aazmanaa koi aur baat karein...,

                    hain chingaariyaa.n ab talak khaaq mein bechain...,
                    chhoddo  inhein  bhadkaana  koi aur baat karein...,

 
Kya Khoob Likha Hai Adil Ji Jawab Nahin.
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2013, 10:44:34 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2013, 11:24:35 AM »
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bohut khub adil ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2013, 12:11:44 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: April 23, 2013, 01:30:47 PM »
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kya baat hai adil sahib.bahut khubsurat kalaam
se nawaaza  hai . parh kar tabiyat khush ho gai.
tah e dil se mubarakbaad aur daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2013, 03:53:39 PM »
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bahut  khoob   adill   jee .....  Dheron  mubarakbad ....
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2013, 09:02:13 PM »
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filhaal aapkee ghazal kaa nashaa taaree hai to aur koi baat naheen dheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2013, 09:08:23 PM »
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                     hua  zakhm  puranaa  koi  aur  baat  karein...,
                     hai dard ka aanaa-janaa koi aur baar karein...,

                     waabasta  nahin, khushiyaa.n meri jab gulo.n se...,
                     hoga  manzar  suhanaa  koi  aur baat karein...,

                     hai  mehfil  ajnabee,  uss  pe begaane logg...,
                     hua  ajeeb  zamaana  koi  aur  baat  karein...,

                     peetey  the  jiske  liye  ab  wahi na rahaa...,
                     chhoddo zikr-e-maikhanaa koi aur baat karein...,

                    haare  hue  se  laute  her  'shobe'  se  humm...,
                    abb  kya  qismat aazmanaa koi aur baat karein...,

                    hain chingaariyaa.n ab talak khaaq mein bechain...,
                    chhoddo  inhein  bhadkaana  koi aur baat karein...,

 
just beautiful,...........bohat bohat c daad
                    haare  hue  se  laute  her  'shobe'  se  humm...,                     abb  kya  qismat aazmanaa koi aur baat karein...,                     hain chingaariyaa.n ab talak khaaq mein bechain...,                     chhoddo  inhein  bhadkaana  koi aur baat karein...,

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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2013, 03:00:00 PM »
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dis is simply Beautiful very very nice
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2013, 04:23:53 PM »
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nice.

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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2013, 07:33:12 PM »
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Bahut Khub Adil Sahab...


Shad o Aabaad Rshiye

Shihab


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