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   haalat chehre se bayaa.n hoti rahi...,
   naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

   chaand kal aayaa to dareeche pe mere...,
   jaane kyon chaandni nihaa.n hoti rahi...,

   isi khauf mein ye aag kaisi hai...,
   zindagi apni to dhuwaa.n hoti rahi...,

   ek zara kya muskuraai mujhe dekh wo...,
   mat puchiye dharkan phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

   wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
   kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,


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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2012, 07:06:36 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on December 27, 2012, 06:37:49 AM

haalat chehre se bayaa.n hoti rahi...,
naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

chaand kal aaye to dareeche pe mere...,
jaane kyon chaandni per nihaa.n hoti rahi...,

isi khauf mein ye aag kaisi hai...,
zindagi apni to dhuwaa.n hoti rahi...,

ek zara kya muskuraai mujhe dekh wo...,
mat puchiye dharkan phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,

lajawaab A. B
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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2012, 07:27:07 AM »

waah adil ji bohut khub


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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2012, 09:16:17 AM »

Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Wallaah janab bade dinoN baad koi kalaam pesh ki aapne aur
behad khoob pesh ki...

Behad gehre aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafz diye
haiN janab... bade hi khoobsurat ashaar kahe haiN...

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: adil bechain on December 27, 2012, 06:37:49 AM

haalat chehre se bayaa.n hoti rahi...,
naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

Kia kahne janab waaH behad gehra aur umda sher padha hai daad...

chaand kal aayaa to dareeche pe mere...,
jaane kyon chaandni nihaa.n hoti rahi...,

Bahut khoob daad...

isi khauf mein ye aag kaisi hai...,
zindagi apni to dhuwaa.n hoti rahi...,

Achcha khayaal hai janab par khul nahi paya.. shayad kuch
tarmeem ki zarurat hai...

ek zara kya muskuraai mujhe dekh wo...,
mat puchiye dharkan phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

Kia kahne janab waaH bahut khoob daad daad daad..

wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,

Bahut khoob janab badi achchi kalaam rahi.. Maqta bhi umdaa hua
hai daad...


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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2012, 09:51:24 AM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2012, 10:18:44 AM »

waah waah , bahut khoob , adil bechain saheb .


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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2012, 11:02:18 AM »

bahut khoob


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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2012, 01:57:21 PM »

bahut hi umda


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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2012, 06:01:26 PM »

Bahut badhiya Adil bhai
maqta shaandaar kaha aapne.
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Re: kahaani.........................A.B

«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2012, 06:22:00 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on December 27, 2012, 06:37:49 AM

haalat chehre se bayaa.n hoti rahi...,
naye libaas mein bhi muflisi ayaa.n hoti rahi...,

chaand kal aayaa to dareeche pe mere...,
jaane kyon chaandni nihaa.n hoti rahi...,

isi khauf mein ye aag kaisi hai...,
zindagi apni to dhuwaa.n hoti rahi...,

ek zara kya muskuraai mujhe dekh wo...,
mat puchiye dharkan phir jawaa.n hoti rahi...,

wo asar kahaan 'bechain' teri gazlo.n mein baaqi...,
kabhi do lafzo.n mein ashiqi rawaa.n hoti rahi...,

janaab ADIL SAHAAB , AS SALAAM AALE KUM ,aap ka kalaam padha , dil khush ho gaya, zindigi se kafi manoos laga aap ka ye kalaam ,dil se aah nikalti hai jo waah waah kahne ko majboor kar deti hai.......daad qubool karen ....ur's Rehan Mubarak "Tanhaa"