kalaam.....(K_A)

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                          meri  naakami  ka   yehi  raaz rahaa..!
                          jise    chahaa  mujh se naraaz rahaa..!!


                          phir   bhi mehfil   ne ek  pahchaan dii.!
                          paas   mere  surr   na  koi  saaz rahaa.!


                          rahaa  roshan  chiraag  toofaan mein jab.!
                          ujaale  ka  khoobsoorat ek aaghaaz rahaa.!

          
                          hogi shaan unhein apni mehfil ke shor pe.!
                          mujhe  apni    tanhaai pe  hi naaz rahaa.!

                          
                          hui   fidaa  ghazal  bhi tujh  pe khamosh.!
                          kyaa pur-asar tere kalaam ka  alfaaz  rahaa.!!

                          


                        


                          
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2012, 03:44:49 PM »
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ahhha kya baat hai .............last ashar pura sahi hai aapke liye K_A ji..... bahut hi khubsurat kalaam..... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 04:10:46 PM »
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                          meri  naakami  ka   yehi  raaz rahaa..!
                          jise    chahaa  mujh se naraaz rahaa..!!  Applause Applause


                          phir   bhi mehfil   ne ek  pahchaan dii.!
                          paas   mere  surr   na  koi  saaz rahaa.!  Applause Applause Applause


                          rahaa  roshan  chiraag  toofaan mein jab.!
                          ujaale  ka  khoobsoorat ek aaghaaz rahaa.!  Applause Applause

         
                          hogi shaan unhein apni mehfil ke shor pe.!
                          mujhe  apni    tanhaai pe  hi naaz rahaa.! Bahut umda....vaaaaaah

                          hui   fidaa  ghazal  bhi tujh  pe khamosh.!
                          kyaa pur-asar tere kalaam ka  alfaaz  rahaa.!![/b] Kya baat hai, javaab nahee[/color]
                         


                         


                         
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Bahut khoob Khamosh jee
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 05:05:20 PM »
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booohooot khoobb likha khamosh g Applause bohot umda dheroon daad !
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2012, 07:46:14 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2012, 01:59:39 AM »
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bahut khoob khaamosh ji dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2012, 03:30:14 AM »
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bahut bahut khub khamoshji...
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2012, 09:59:33 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Khamoshji..

Shaandar Kalaam

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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2012, 06:46:50 PM »
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ahhha kya baat hai .............last ashar pura sahi hai aapke liye K_A ji..... bahut hi khubsurat kalaam..... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

THANX
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2012, 06:26:24 PM »
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                          meri  naakami  ka   yehi  raaz rahaa..!
                          jise    chahaa  mujh se naraaz rahaa..!!  Applause Applause


                          phir   bhi mehfil   ne ek  pahchaan dii.!
                          paas   mere  surr   na  koi  saaz rahaa.!  Applause Applause Applause


                          rahaa  roshan  chiraag  toofaan mein jab.!
                          ujaale  ka  khoobsoorat ek aaghaaz rahaa.!  Applause Applause

         
                          hogi shaan unhein apni mehfil ke shor pe.!
                          mujhe  apni    tanhaai pe  hi naaz rahaa.! Bahut umda....vaaaaaah

                          hui   fidaa  ghazal  bhi tujh  pe khamosh.!
                          kyaa pur-asar tere kalaam ka  alfaaz  rahaa.!![/b] Kya baat hai, javaab nahee[/color]
                         


                         


                         

Bahut khoob Khamosh jee

THANX MKV
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«Reply #10 on: July 22, 2012, 10:58:41 PM »
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                          meri  naakami  ka   yehi  raaz rahaa..!
                          jise    chahaa  mujh se naraaz rahaa..!!


                          phir   bhi mehfil   ne ek  pahchaan dii.!
                          paas   mere  surr   na  koi  saaz rahaa.!


                          rahaa  roshan  chiraag  toofaan mein jab.!
                          ujaale  ka  khoobsoorat ek aaghaaz rahaa.!

         
                          hogi shaan unhein apni mehfil ke shor pe.!
                          mujhe  apni    tanhaai pe  hi naaz rahaa.!

                         
                          hui   fidaa  ghazal  bhi tujh  pe khamosh.!
                          kyaa pur-asar tere kalaam ka  alfaaz  rahaa.!!

                         


                         


                         
Gazal apnay kathya kai anurup viksit hui hai. Sushil Bansal (Sheel Didi)
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2012, 12:40:19 AM »
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                          meri  naakami  ka   yehi  raaz rahaa..!
                          jise    chahaa  mujh se naraaz rahaa..!!


                          phir   bhi mehfil   ne ek  pahchaan dii.!
                          paas   mere  surr   na  koi  saaz rahaa.!


                          rahaa  roshan  chiraag  toofaan mein jab.!
                          ujaale  ka  khoobsoorat ek aaghaaz rahaa.!

         
                          hogi shaan unhein apni mehfil ke shor pe.!
                          mujhe  apni    tanhaai pe  hi naaz rahaa.!

                         
                          hui   fidaa  ghazal  bhi tujh  pe khamosh.!
                          kyaa pur-asar tere kalaam ka  alfaaz  rahaa.!!

                                                                     

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 23, 2012, 09:54:38 AM »
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booohooot khoobb likha khamosh g Applause bohot umda dheroon daad !

thanx
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2012, 07:13:43 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob K_A ji....!!!

THANX
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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2012, 10:07:54 PM »
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bahut khoob khaamosh ji dheron daad

thanx
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