Kamosh Jindgi .......<Neel>

by neelgold on April 25, 2010, 09:17:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 27, 2010, 12:28:13 AM »
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Neel ji,

ab aadat dal lijiye aise taarifon ki q k aap likhte hi itna achcha hain.

N u r always welcome. N u too keep smiling.

Regards

Kapil ,

AIse khuch nahi hai... bus told u tht i vs nt in a gud mood ... Any wyz Thnx for u such heavy words.......
Housla milta hai tarif se bt itni tarif...... OMG
Adat nahi hai yaar ...

Na Aag ka hume paata na gahee ka Yeh to bus mood ka asar hai ....
Paar aapne khuch jaida hi bol diya
Thnx a lotttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Thankyou ! Thankyou !

Alwyz keep smiling!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #16 on: April 27, 2010, 02:14:36 AM »
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Very WC...

 Welcome Smiley Welcome Smiley

Neel ji,

ab aadat dal lijiye aise taarifon ki q k aap likhte hi itna achcha hain.

N u r always welcome. N u too keep smiling.

Regards

Welcome Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: April 27, 2010, 02:50:41 AM »
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Riyaz i chngd tht word to janaza i dnt hv gud word powr so bear wid me ...
This is a nice creation Neel ji. Lekin ye arthi wali baat kuch zyada disappoint karne wali hai. As a whole, well done.
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