kash mai apni di ke sath hota "Raahi"

by Rahi2001 on August 27, 2010, 08:38:39 AM
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kashhhhhhhhh mai apni di ke sath hota
kabhi hansta kabhi unke aanchal me chup kar rota

kashhhhhhhhh mai apni............

bhale ho nadaniya meri ya badi koi galti ho
mujhe apne pyaar ke aanchal tale rakh kar wo chalti ho
kashhhhhh mai unke saye me sota
kashhhhhhhhh mai apni ............

kabhi jo ruth jaon mai ,ya aansu ek gir jaye
mujhe hasane ke liye jo khud hi machalti ho
kash mai unki muskurahat me khota
kashhhhhhhhh mai apni...........

kabhi jo chalna akele ho khin jo gam ke sawere ho
wo har pal sath ho mere har pal khushiyan bikhere ho
kash mai unki bahon ko thaam leta
kashhhhhhhhh mai apni...........

kabhi jo baat karni ho koi pariyon ki rani ki
unki aankhon me sapnon ki tasveer ubhari ho
kash mai un tasveeron me paya jata
kashhhhhhhhh mai apni...........

kasak dil ki jo aajaye mere din me ujale ho
nisha ki bahon me mere sare gam nikale ho
kash mai dono ko apne pass bula pata
kashhhhhhhhh mai apni............


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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2010, 08:44:30 AM »
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ek ladki ne sabko likhna sikha diya,
ab us ladki ke baare me kya kahun,
taarif se badhkar hai aapki ye kavita,
bhalaa shabdon me kya taarif karun....
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2010, 08:47:47 AM »
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nice line kalskaar ji
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ek ladki hi sabko likhna sikhati hai
ek ladki hi sabko apna banati hai '
ek ladki hai jo meri di hai
ek ladi hai jo shabdon me samati hai
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 08:57:09 AM »
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aaj maano shabdon ki deepaawali hai,
shabd ghazal ban ke nikal rahe hain,
khoobsurat rango ki ye holi hai,
maano dil ke rango se aap rang rahe hain...
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2010, 09:00:47 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 27, 2010, 08:57:09 AM
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aaj maano shabdon ki deepaawali hai,
shabd ghazal ban ke nikal rahe hain,
khoobsurat rango ki ye holi hai,
maano dil ke rango se aap rang rahe hain...

aaj diye nahi shabdon ke prakash me naha lo
khubsurti se rangon ko dil me basa lo
gunguna lo koi geet ke aaj diii aane wali hai
likho ek gajal aur usko dil me basa lo
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2010, 09:04:02 AM »
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dil me tumhaare di ko hum kab se basa ke rakhen hain,
unke har andaaz ko hum seene se lagaa ke rakhen hain,
khoobsurti ka har andaaz feeka hai unke aage,
tumhaari di ko hum khoobsurti ki misaal bana rakhen hain...
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2010, 09:14:56 AM »
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meri di ka pyaar bantliya hai sabne
di ko mujhse dur kar diya sab ne
manta hu unke nirale hain andaaj jara
unko isi andaaj se majboor kar diya hai sab ne
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2010, 09:20:57 AM »
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hum se pehle haq hai tumhaara,
humne tumse unhe chhina nahi hai,
maanga hai unse thoda pyaar magar,
aaj bhi wo tumse dur nahi hain...
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2010, 12:58:13 PM »
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rahul.......

kya kahun re iss kavita k liye...itni pyari hai ye k aankhen num ho gai meri padhte padhte ...laga kaash is waqt mere pas hote to kitna achch ahota...


tum soch rahe honge di bhi kaisi hai ek reply nahin de sakti meri post pe,,,

par sach me itni emotional ho gaithi ye padhke main k uss waqt kuch bhi kehti to pata nahin kya kya likh deti....

itna pyaar diya hai tumne itne se waqt me k mujhe mere apne bhai se bhi nahin mila hoga...

rahul hamesha yunhi masum se pyare se rehna ..aur haan aage se kabhi nahin kehna k mera koi nahin main akela hun...main hun na...tumhari di...

bht bht sara pyaar mere chhote se bhaiya k liye.......
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2010, 01:01:05 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 27, 2010, 08:44:30 AM
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ek ladki ne sabko likhna sikha diya,
ab us ladki ke baare me kya kahun,
taarif se badhkar hai aapki ye kavita,
bhalaa shabdon me kya taarif karun....





Quote from: klaskar on August 27, 2010, 08:57:09 AM
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aaj maano shabdon ki deepaawali hai,
shabd ghazal ban ke nikal rahe hain,
khoobsurat rango ki ye holi hai,
maano dil ke rango se aap rang rahe hain...


Quote from: klaskar on August 27, 2010, 09:04:02 AM

dil me tumhaare di ko hum kab se basa ke rakhen hain,
unke har andaaz ko hum seene se lagaa ke rakhen hain,
khoobsurti ka har andaaz feeka hai unke aage,
tumhaari di ko hum khoobsurti ki misaal bana rakhen hain...

Quote from: klaskar on August 27, 2010, 09:20:57 AM


hum se pehle haq hai tumhaara,
humne tumse unhe chhina nahi hai,
maanga hai unse thoda pyaar magar,
aaj bhi wo tumse dur nahi hain...


har khyal ek gazal hai kapil ji.......
bht khubsurat jawab diye hain aapne....
inhe jodo ek gazal ban jati hai kuch editing k sath.....
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2010, 01:10:18 PM »
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WAH WAH KYA BHAI BAHEN KYA PYAR JALAK RAHA HAI ISS POEM ME.... BAHOT KHUB LIKHA HAI RAHUL TUMNE....
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2010, 02:23:35 AM »
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Is chhote se dabbe me maine aapke feelings ko qaid kar liya .. jisse aap chaahke bhi Rahul ke liye apne feelings kabhi change na kar paao....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 27, 2010, 12:58:13 PM
rahul.......

kya kahun re iss kavita k liye...itni pyari hai ye k aankhen num ho gai meri padhte padhte ...laga kaash is waqt mere pas hote to kitna achch ahota...


tum soch rahe honge di bhi kaisi hai ek reply nahin de sakti meri post pe,,,

par sach me itni emotional ho gaithi ye padhke main k uss waqt kuch bhi kehti to pata nahin kya kya likh deti....

itna pyaar diya hai tumne itne se waqt me k mujhe mere apne bhai se bhi nahin mila hoga...

rahul hamesha yunhi masum se pyare se rehna ..aur haan aage se kabhi nahin kehna k mera koi nahin main akela hun...main hun na...tumhari di...

bht bht sara pyaar mere chhote se bhaiya k liye.......
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2010, 02:26:20 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 27, 2010, 01:01:05 PM
har khyal ek gazal hai kapil ji.......
bht khubsurat jawab diye hain aapne....
inhe jodo ek gazal ban jati hai kuch editing k sath.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2010, 10:40:05 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 27, 2010, 12:58:13 PM
rahul.......

kya kahun re iss kavita k liye...itni pyari hai ye k aankhen num ho gai meri padhte padhte ...laga kaash is waqt mere pas hote to kitna achch ahota...


tum soch rahe honge di bhi kaisi hai ek reply nahin de sakti meri post pe,,,

par sach me itni emotional ho gaithi ye padhke main k uss waqt kuch bhi kehti to pata nahin kya kya likh deti....

itna pyaar diya hai tumne itne se waqt me k mujhe mere apne bhai se bhi nahin mila hoga...

rahul hamesha yunhi masum se pyare se rehna ..aur haan aage se kabhi nahin kehna k mera koi nahin main akela hun...main hun na...tumhari di...

bht bht sara pyaar mere chhote se bhaiya k liye.......


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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2010, 10:40:39 AM »
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WAH WAH KYA BHAI BAHEN KYA PYAR JALAK RAHA HAI ISS POEM ME.... BAHOT KHUB LIKHA HAI RAHUL TUMNE....

shukriya rancho ji
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