*Katin Hai Zindagi*

by Roja on November 04, 2009, 04:10:47 PM
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Aaj mera ek dost ka dil bahut dukhi hai....Uska mann ka haal yahan bayan kar rahi hu. Hope you all will read and pray for her

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Fikr kuch iski kijiye yaaron
Aadmi kis tarah jiye yaaron

Maine dekha hai kangaali ko aaj
Dagmagata tha bin piye yaaron

Mujhse aksar meri nahi banti
Ek shayar hu isliye yaaron

Saaf kehne ki meri adat ne
Kitne dushman bana liya yaaron

Zindagi hai ki karbala koyi
Hum ute hai ki tajiye yaaro

Ek pattar ki aankh se behte
Maine dekhe hai yahan mersiye yaaron
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Kaat dale samaiy ne sab uttar
Maun darshak hai hashiye yaaron

Kya yahan koyi tansen nahi
Poochte hai bhuje diye yaaron
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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2009, 04:16:19 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Roja..

Zabrsast peshkash!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2009, 04:36:39 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Roja.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2009, 07:00:32 PM »
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Badi shasakt dil se upjee rochak rachna hai Roja-di..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sajde mai sir jhukta hai Roja-di tere.....
Kisi ki peer ko bakhoobi jiya hai tune....
 
Zahar zindagi ka teri sakhi ne jo piya hai
Tere alfaazon ne sahi-sahi ous ko jiya hai

Khushiye barse teri sakhi k upvan mai firse
Eyse dil se prarthana karti hu mai khuda se

Quote from: Roja on November 04, 2009, 04:10:47 PM
Aaj mera ek dost ka dil bahut dukhi hai....Uska mann ka haal yahan bayan kar rahi hu. Hope you all will read and pray for her

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Fikr kuch iski kijiye yaaron
Aadmi kis tarah jiye yaaron

Maine dekha hai kangaali ko aaj
Dagmagata tha bin piye yaaron

Mujhse aksar meri nahi banti
Ek shayar hu isliye yaaron

Saaf kehne ki meri adat ne
Kitne dushman bana liya yaaron

Zindagi hai ki karbala koyi
Hum ute hai ki tajiye yaaro

Ek pattar ki aankh se behte
Maine dekhe hai yahan mersiye yaaron
(Mersiye = log-geet)

Kaat dale samaiy ne sab uttar
Maun darshak hai hashiye yaaron

Kya yahan koyi tansen nahi
Poochte hai bhuje diye yaaron
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2009, 12:21:09 AM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Roja dear,really touched,lovely creation ,beautiful lines by Dear Koyal,yahi duaa karti hoon aapke aur aap sabhi dosto ke zindagi mein sirf khusiyan ho. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2009, 02:30:38 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 04, 2009, 04:16:19 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Roja..

Zabrsast peshkash!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you very much Khwaish bhaiya. Kuch aap b likhte is katin zindagi pe... to mann ko tasalli milti  Usual Smile

Quote from: Sophi on November 04, 2009, 04:36:39 PM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Roja.. bahoot Khoob!

Thanks dear divya

Quote from: madhuwesh on November 05, 2009, 12:21:09 AM
Wah bahut bahut khoob Roja dear,really touched,lovely creation ,beautiful lines by Dear Koyal,yahi duaa karti hoon aapke aur aap sabhi dosto ke zindagi mein sirf khusiyan ho. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you dear Madhu.. Thanks for the blessings
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2009, 02:31:28 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 04, 2009, 07:00:32 PM
Badi shasakt dil se upjee rochak rachna hai Roja-di..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sajde mai sir jhukta hai Roja-di tere.....
Kisi ki peer ko bakhoobi jiya hai tune....
 
Zahar zindagi ka teri sakhi ne jo piya hai
Tere alfaazon ne sahi-sahi ous ko jiya hai

Khushiye barse teri sakhi k upvan mai firse
Eyse dil se prarthana karti hu mai khuda se


Ati sundar.. Padkar sahi mein mann mein tasalli mili aur meri dost ko bi accha hi laga hoga.
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2009, 02:39:54 AM »
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Aisi mehsoos kar rahi hu mai
Jaise is shehar mein nayi hu mai

Apni khushboo se kauf aata hai
Kin hawawon mein gir gayi hu mai

Teri kuch aur baat hai varna
Saat apne bi kam rahi hu mai

Khal-o-khad per na apne gaur karo
Mujhse ruto ki aaina hu mai

Uff ye kaif-e-fasana-haye-Zurn
Likh rahi hu mita rahi hu mai

Koyi mausam ho ab mujhe kya fikr !
Barg hu shaakh se juda hu mai

Hu to mai "Roja" buri, lekin
Kaun jaane ki kyu buri hu mai...


Khal-o-khad = Til aur kapol

kaif-e-fasana-haye-Zurn = Prem mein pagal hone ki kahani ka haal ya aanand

Barg = Pattha
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2009, 10:40:54 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI  ROJA JI.....

ZINDAGI KI DAGAR HAI
BAHUT KATIN DAGAR HAI
NA KISKO KISKI FIKAR HAI
NA KISKO KISKI KHABAR HAI
INSAANO KI NAGAR MEIN
KAHAN AATI HAI NAZAR INSAANIYAT
IK DOOSRE KO BARBAAD KARNE PE TULE HAI
YEH HI RAHEGAYI HAI SHARAFAT
EK DUJHE KO DIKHA LETE HAI BADE BADE SAPNE
MATLAB NIKALNE PAR PEHECHAN TE KIDAR HAI
YEH ZINDAGI KI DAGAR HAI
BAHUT KATIN DAGAR HAI
NA KISKO KISKI FIKAR HAI
NA KISKO KISKI KHABAR HAI.
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«Reply #9 on: November 05, 2009, 10:44:37 AM »
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Wah bahut bahut khoob Cara ji very beautiful lines.lovely creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause.
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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2009, 11:03:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

superb Roja ji...bahut bahut bahut khoooooob.....dost ho to aap jaisa... Usual Smile

Koyal dear tumhare liye kya kahu....tumhari boli sunkar toh sabko tassali milti hai...keep writing Thumbs UP

Cara ji aapne bahut khoob likha hai....hamesha ki tarah...aap sabka sath dete h
 bahut khooob... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: November 05, 2009, 12:02:39 PM »
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Bahut Khhob likha hai aap ne Roja
Cara, aap ne bhi achchha likha hai
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2009, 12:51:34 PM »
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Mann prasann ho gya aapki pratikriya padh kar...
Thanks a lot Roja-di.....

Quote from: Roja on November 05, 2009, 02:31:28 AM
Ati sundar.. Padkar sahi mein mann mein tasalli mili aur meri dost ko bi accha hi laga hoga.
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«Reply #13 on: November 05, 2009, 01:01:51 PM »
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Nikhaar-di thanks a lot for your kind encouraging words.....
Aapse prohatsaahan paakar he tou likh paati hu main....


Quote from: Nikhaar on November 05, 2009, 11:03:47 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

superb Roja ji...bahut bahut bahut khoooooob.....dost ho to aap jaisa... Usual Smile

Koyal dear tumhare liye kya kahu....tumhari boli sunkar toh sabko tassali milti hai...keep writing Thumbs UP

Cara ji aapne bahut khoob likha hai....hamesha ki tarah...aap sabka sath dete h
 bahut khooob... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: November 05, 2009, 01:21:22 PM »
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Wah Roja-di wah aap tou zindagi k kthintam raaj kholti chali ja rahi hain....
Har mishra kisi-n-kisi ki zindagi ka beeta huaa kal lagta hai...bahoot khoob... Bas yu he likhti rahiye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Khud se bhi kuchh-kuchh anjaan,kaise jee rahi hai tu
Apni kam aur, auron ki zindagi jyada jee rahi hai tu
Mehlon ko chhod,barg-si,aam logo mai jee rahi hai tu
Bura ho nahi sakta tujhsa insaan koi,buri nahi hai tu


Quote from: Roja on November 05, 2009, 02:39:54 AM
Aisi mehsoos kar rahi hu mai
Jaise is shehar mein nayi hu mai

Apni khushboo se kauf aata hai
Kin hawawon mein gir gayi hu mai

Teri kuch aur baat hai varna
Saat apne bi kam rahi hu mai

Khal-o-khad per na apne gaur karo
Mujhse ruto ki aaina hu mai

Uff ye kaif-e-fasana-haye-Zurn
Likh rahi hu mita rahi hu mai

Koyi mausam ho ab mujhe kya fikr !
Barg hu shaakh se juda hu mai

Hu to mai "Roja" buri, lekin
Kaun jaane ki kyu buri hu mai...


Khal-o-khad = Til aur kapol

kaif-e-fasana-haye-Zurn = Prem mein pagal hone ki kahani ka haal ya aanand

Barg = Pattha

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